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#251  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Pfft. :p

True. :)

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I'm not sure if this series I came up with is worth doing... http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/background-on-my-new-original-characters-secret-legion/645773/#5

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#253  Edited By KisserNe

@InnerVenom123:

I have to admit at times catching the right atmosphere sucks and can be extremely awkward. I have no real issues with writing explicit scenes though and my characters are usually guys. I just have to tone it down for this site, when at times, I kind of hate that but implications will always be in my issues or I kind of soar through them, lol.

I don't think it is awkward because of the gender of the writer, for instance: James Patterson's "the Quickie" starts off with a bang and it's awesome. Check it out (its a novel, not a comic- but its worth reading.) I have to say I agree with the Impersonator. It depends on the character, as an example: if you were writing a young character... it'd be super strange but just making an "Aww" moment, isn't too bad as long as you don't make it overly corny or cheesy... I have found that movies and literature help a lot here. If you need ideas for a perfect balance, check a clip from a "chick flick" or even a drama or romance or even one of your favorite romances in general. Also, romance in comics and books really raise it because you see what's okay to describe or the perfect amount of emotions.

Hopefully that made sense, lol.

@primepower53:

I am sure it is worth writing. I'll check everything out soon and give you an opinion as soon as I can.

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#256  Edited By shanana
@InnerVenom123:  You can just read. My last post all the previous ones are from when i first joined this site O.O
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#257  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Ziccarra_Liafador: I did read. It was cool, lol.

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#258  Edited By InnerVenom123

It's so awesome to look at all I've written like this. :D

To think it's been this long and I've only written 10 big scripts. =P

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@primepower53: It's worth a try, prime. :)

@KisserNe: Hmmmm. I never read the Quickie before. I better be quick and find out. :P

@InnerVenom123: Dude, they look awesome. You and your friend are amazingly talented. I'll check that site out after I come back from church. :D

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#260  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Thanks! :D

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I've actually been thinking about it...I can't decide whether to do a DC crossover, or the SECRET LEGION idea....just throwing that out there, in case anyone has a prefrence to which one they'd rather see.

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#262  Edited By Project_Worm
@InnerVenom123:  
I find it nearly impossible to try and get romantic... Just as soon as I decide it'll work, I change the subject.
@primepower53:  
I think it sounded sweet! Plus I know you could make to where its worth reading.
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#263  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Project_Worm: Yeah, it's difficult.

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It is.

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@InnerVenom123: No problem! :)

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#266  Edited By Project_Worm

I got a question for those of you who have been reading my story Earth In Chains. Which of my characters would you like for me to draw up first??

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#267  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Project_Worm said:

I got a question for those of you who have been reading my story Earth In Chains. Which of my characters would you like for me to draw up first??

Draw up? As in art? O_O

Quinton, btw.

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#268  Edited By Project_Worm
@InnerVenom123:  
Yes sir!  
I will keep that in mind. 
It should be on part 13 so keep a look out.
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#269  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Project_Worm: Be sure to post the link here, and I'll get to it!

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#270  Edited By Wonderboy52

Hello everyone. I have a story that I've just posted inspired from the DC universe where all the heroes we know and love don't exist and never have. The heroes in this story are supposed to represent the real world we actually live in if meta-humans suddenly started to appear. I'd like to read anyone else's stories that are have OC's in the DC universe or in a universe they have completely made up. I love OC's since they're always new, if I want to read about Wonder Woman I'll pick up one of her actual comics. I'm not so much into Marvel but if you have what you consider a genuinely awesome Marvel OC stories let me know. I'd love to hear some feedback

I'm not sure how to directly link this but here it is.

Title: Earth-Infinite, The Guardians

http://www.comicvine.com/myvine/wonderboy52/earth-infinite-the-guardians/87-76429/

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@Wonderboy52: Sounds nice, I'll check your story out. Most of my fan-fics come from Marvel. You can read them if you're interested or whenever you have the time. :)

By the way, welcome to the Fan-Fic Joint! :D

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Attention everyone! The nominations are due on the Dec. 25th. If anyone has to nominate the person's fan-fic works. Now's the time. Cheers!

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#273  Edited By Project_Worm
@The Impersonator:  
WHAAA! I thought nominations ended on the 15th *runs away excitedly*
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#274  Edited By KisserNe

@Project_Worm:

Oh my... ANY OF THEM, ALL OF THEM. xD

Okay, so Quinton would be great- I have my picture of him and I want to see if I am right xDD

Then, Tommy. >.>

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#275  Edited By Project_Worm
@KisserNe:  
SWEET!! I've only given an extremely basic description of em' so anything would be awesome! 
 
p.s. Would LOVE to see! Tommy might have to wait until I make his "origins" a bit more clear. Don't want to spoil anything.
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#276  Edited By InnerVenom123

Finished 3/5 of Toxin/Malice:Wrath. It'll hopefully be finished and uploaded by the end of the month.

Also, there's big Deadpool news coming on the horizon!

AND I'm totally making a Christmas special! =P

@Wonderboy52: I'll check that out!

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Lately, I’ve been having the opposite of writer’s block…TOO MANY IDEAS. I can’t decide what to write. One idea I wanted to get down was the following: Basically it it’s DC: The Next Generation "After the mysterious death of superman, (Killed in his sleep…nobody knew how or why) most heroes either retired, or were killed. Many retired heroes had children, and never told them about their costumed adventures. Eventually, some of the children of the heroes learn about their parent’s past, and form a new era of the Justice League to find Superman’s murderer…what they find will change what they thought they knew about the heroes of yesteryear forever…." I’d love to hear what you think of this!

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@primepower53: I thought you were going to write the Secret Legion. :P

Anyways, DC: The Next Generation sounds a great idea. I would love to see the mystery and suspense of who actually killed Superman. On that side of the note, it's up to you if you want to write this series or the Secret Legion. Or you could also write both at the same time. Whichever is fine with you, we're gladly to look forward in reading them. :)

I also understand that you have too many ideas, I had the same thing but I always try to limit myself from writing new series and just stick with the ones that I'm currently writing now. Since I have other things to do outside CV......and playing Call of Duty: MW3. :P

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#279  Edited By InnerVenom123

Guess what? It's got a cover. Thanks to CATPANEXE!

Using photoshop and already created images, but who cares! It's still lookin' good.

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Impersonator: I like both ideas but I only have time to write one. I also got a third idea and I can't decide which of the three I like best! The third one would be a crossover where the villains of the DC universe mysteriously upgrade their powers/equiptment. Whole teams are killed by a single person. The villains are more powerful than ever. They strike and random times, and I was thinking there could be a climax where a bunch of the heroes loved ones could all recieve death threats on the same day. It's kind of a race against the clock. Find out who's making them more powerful, before they are exterminated themselves.

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Innervenom123: THAT'S FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! :D

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#282  Edited By _Marco_Smith_

@InnerVenom123: I think the fact background's all white works out well. Also, Hybrid! :D

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#283  Edited By InnerVenom123

@_Marco_Smith_ said:

@InnerVenom123: I think the fact background's all white works out well.

Yeah, that was my idea for the cover!

@_Marco_Smith_ said:

@InnerVenom123: Also, Hybrid! :D

I KNOW! :D

I have a LOT of insane stuff planned for this series. ^__^

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#284  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

Innervenom123: THAT'S FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! :D

Thank you! :D

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No problemo! By the way, if you or anyone else could give me an opinion on which of the three ideas I posted here (Secret Legion, DC Next Generation, and the DC crossover) you like best, that would be greatly appreciated.

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#286  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

No problemo! By the way, if you or anyone else could give me an opinion on which of the three ideas I posted here (Secret Legion, DC Next Generation, and the DC crossover) you like best, that would be greatly appreciated.

No prob!

@primepower53 said:

The third one would be a crossover where the villains of the DC universe mysteriously upgrade their powers/equiptment. Whole teams are killed by a single person. The villains are more powerful than ever. They strike and random times, and I was thinking there could be a climax where a bunch of the heroes loved ones could all recieve death threats on the same day. It's kind of a race against the clock. Find out who's making them more powerful, before they are exterminated themselves.

This one, without a doubt!

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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! (I'M HYPER, IN CASE YOU CAN'T TELL!!!)

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#288  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53: No problem!

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@InnerVenom123: Nice!

@primepower53: Hmmmm. That's an interesting third idea. Man, you got good thinking light bulbs. =P

But you know what? If I were you, I would certainly pick the DC: The Next Generation. I like the mystery of it. :)

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#290  Edited By OracleX

I'd like a little more feedback on: The Killing Joke Role Reversal. I am trying to add more almost every day.

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@primepower53 said:

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! (I'M HYPER, IN CASE YOU CAN'T TELL!!!)

Did you drink coffee? :P

@OracleX: You got it. :)

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#292  Edited By InnerVenom123

@OracleX said:

I'd like a little more feedback on: The Killing Joke Role Reversal. I am trying to add more almost every day.

Can you please add a link here?

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Innervenom123: The crossover you "voted" for is up, I'd love to hear what you think of it: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/dc-universe-power-part-one/646130/#5

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#294  Edited By OracleX

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/the-killing-joke-role-reversal-part-1/642647/#15

I haven't figured out how to link things on this site. Check out the latest entry: Barbara does something so shocking that came to me as I wrote it last night and loved it. Some people won't, but I think it is a cool new secret that hints about other things that Babs might be hiding from Bruce.

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@InnerVenom123: WHOO! HOO! Alright! I'll give him a good welcome and edit the vote. :)

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#297  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

Innervenom123: The crossover you "voted" for is up, I'd love to hear what you think of it: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/dc-universe-power-part-one/646130/#5

@OracleX said:

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/the-killing-joke-role-reversal-part-1/642647/#15

I haven't figured out how to link things on this site. Check out the latest entry: Barbara does something so shocking that came to me as I wrote it last night and loved it. Some people won't, but I think it is a cool new secret that hints about other things that Babs might be hiding from Bruce.

I'll check both of these out!

Oh and Oracle, highlight your link and click "Link".

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@InnerVenom123: The votes are now edited. :)

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#299  Edited By InnerVenom123

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@InnerVenom123: The votes are now edited. :)

Awesome!

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#300  Edited By ColonelRunAway