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@KisserNe: Thanks!

An Improv game? Hmmmm.....Is this a game where we have to make improvements? :P

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#202  Edited By KisserNe

@The Impersonator:

Not exactly improvements per sae, but where you improvise with what is given to you, lol

xDD

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@KisserNe: Oh, I see. Sounds nice! :P

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#204  Edited By KisserNe

@The Impersonator:

Well, currently I am talking to InnverVenom about it. It may go public in a bit, once I get everything settled. It's just an idea, so it may not happen at all or may have to happen at a later date xD

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#205  Edited By KisserNe

General Message to the Public

Just a little something to explain my slacker-ness and all that jazz, and no it isn't completely directed to everyone.

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#206  Edited By InnerVenom123

Just got done with Toxin/Malice: Wrath #2, should be four more to go and then I'll start posting!

@KisserNe said:

General Message to the Public

Just a little something to explain my slacker-ness and all that jazz, and no it isn't completely directed to everyone.

*goes to read/comment*

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#207  Edited By shanana

My Fan fic Schedule 
 
The Adventure  
 
 
LMAO. 

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#208  Edited By KisserNe

@Ziccarra_Liafador: YAY!!! Lol xD

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#210  Edited By InnerVenom123
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@Ziccarra_Liafador: I'll look forward to hear your exciting adventure. =P

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#212  Edited By shanana
@The Impersonator: LOL. For some reason, I can't write for an already established character. I can only create lol.
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I'd likie some feedback for my 3rd chapter please. Thnx

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@Ziccarra_Liafador: I see. Well, you can try writing the original characters. I wouldn't say it's easy but it's worth a try. :P

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ok guys. I'm just going to stop writing for a while. I really need a break so that I can enjoy two weeks of Christmas holidays. I have been burned out lately. Man, 65 chapters of Wolverine was a lot to write. I may have my healing factor going through my veins. But a bub needs to have some fun outside the cold Canadian wilderness and....a beer. :P

On the other hand, I'll be online and reading more of your fan-fics. :)

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#216  Edited By shanana
@The Impersonator: I have most of the fan fics that i've done on this site are from Orginal Characters. Even my Pokemon fan fic is an original character. Though i do kind of want to write a Legion of Superheroes one
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@Ziccarra_Liafador: Nice! I gotta catch that Pokemon of yours. :P

The Legion story will be awesome to write. You can try that. :)

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#218  Edited By InnerVenom123

The artist I'm gonna try to get to draw Hybrid did this rendition of Carnage.

In 20 minutes, he says.

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#220  Edited By KisserNe

@InnerVenom123:

OMFG!!!

That is sooo good! No joke. Tell him, he's awesome. I'd love to see more work and your hybrid when it's complete.

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#221  Edited By InnerVenom123

@KisserNe: I know, it is! I tell him often lol. As soon as I pay him and get the full comic done, it'll be posted here via blog. :)

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#223  Edited By Volpe

My series NEEDZ MOAR ATTENSHUNS.

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#224  Edited By Volpe
@InnerVenom123 said:

http://innervenom.deviantart.com/

I made this Deviantart after I noticed I could post my scripts there.

It's best to get yourself out there, and all that. =P

Wow, we posted at virtually the same time. I hope I don't overshadow your advertisement and all.
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#225  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Volpe said:

@InnerVenom123 said:

http://innervenom.deviantart.com/

I made this Deviantart after I noticed I could post my scripts there.

It's best to get yourself out there, and all that. =P

Wow, we posted at virtually the same time. I hope I don't overshadow your advertisement and all.

LMAO, it's no big! :P

And your series DOES need more attention!!

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Just finished my story POST HUMANS, I could use some feedback for all five parts....

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@InnerVenom123 said:

The artist I'm gonna try to get to draw Hybrid did this rendition of Carnage.

In 20 minutes, he says.

Nice!

By the way, is your artistic friend's username named KasadyCarnage? :P

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#228  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Yup. :P

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#229  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

Just finished my story POST HUMANS, I could use some feedback for all five parts....

Post links when you want people to read a story, please.

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@InnerVenom123: ok. Just making sure. =P

Because I was wondering what your friend's name was since I nominated him as the best artist. It's for the CV Community End of the Year Awards. (I actually said InnerVenom123's friend earlier. Now, I'm going to edit it. =P)

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#231  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: No, he didn't make the covers. A friend who doesn't have a CV did.

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@InnerVenom123: Oh, I see. My bad. It's time to redit back to InnerVenom123's friend. Unless if you can give his real name. =P

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#233  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Jordan. I've said it on numerous entries. =P

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@InnerVenom123: Hmmm. I may have not noticed his name somewhere. Anyways, thank you. =P

By the way, I'll say InnerVenom123's non-CV friend, Jordan. I thought I might have to say it since he isn't part of CV. What do you think? :)

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#235  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: That works.

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@InnerVenom123: ok. Thanks. :)

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#237  Edited By KisserNe

@Volpe:

I'll get to posting your links as well as reading and commenting soon, hun. Sorry it is taking me so long to get to your stuff :/

@InnerVenom123:

Thank you for asking for links!

Unfortunately, because Prime is using a library near him, I don't think he has much time to post and link and all of that. Also, his using I.E may conflict with it. :p

I'll get his links up and ready to go as soon as I can, although I am sure you've already read it or will read it xDD

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#238  Edited By InnerVenom123

@KisserNe: Nah, I'm lazy today. I'll just wait for links to be posted here. xD

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#239  Edited By KisserNe

@InnerVenom123:

Bahaha, good.

Get some relaxation, you've been doing awesome and being a big help to this thread as well as the Writer Community so take a well deserved break! :)

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#240  Edited By InnerVenom123

@KisserNe: Thanks! :D I'm seeing Sherlock Holmes 2 today, then I'm just gonna relax and write some more Toxin/Malice:Wrath. :P

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#242  Edited By shanana
@The Impersonator: I think i will hahaha 
 
@InnerVenom123: Wow that's pretty badass
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@KisserNe: I'll be taking a break as well. I'm might go somewhere next week. I'm also going to Seattle on Boxing Day. Yeah....I have to be ready for my boxing match. =P

@InnerVenom123: That sounds awesome! Although, I haven't seen the first movie, I did read his mystery stories. :P

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#244  Edited By KisserNe

@The Impersonator said:

ok guys. I'm just going to stop writing for a while. I really need a break so that I can enjoy two weeks of Christmas holidays. I have been burned out lately. Man, 65 chapters of Wolverine was a lot to write. I may have my healing factor going through my veins. But a bub needs to have some fun outside the cold Canadian wilderness and....a beer. :P

On the other hand, I'll be online and reading more of your fan-fics. :)

Yes, yes and it is completely understandable!! You definitely deserve a break as well! You're awesome :)

Lol, well hopefully you'll be ready then and I hope you enjoy your travels xD

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@KisserNe: Lol! Thanks!

You also deserve a break. You're gonna need some healing factor, bub. :P

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#246  Edited By InnerVenom123

@Ziccarra_Liafador: Thanks!

@The Impersonator: It was an awesome movie.

Now I'm writing more Toxin/Malice, bwahaha.

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#247  Edited By InnerVenom123

Agh. I'm kinda awkward with "romantic" scenes. Is this easier if you're a girl or a guy? Discuss! =P

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@InnerVenom123: Sweet! I can't wait to get toxicated. :P

Hmmmm. Romantic scenes eh. Well, that depends if you're a guy or a girl. =P

Ah, just joking. I wouldn't say it's awkward. It can be different even for a writer to come with new ideas. It also comes down to the character though. You really need to give that Romeo and Juliet feeling for those characters. Not in way it should be like that. But just a normal romantic scene if you're planning to write those scenes. I wrote some romantic scenes back in Wolverine chapters. But they're kinda explicit. =P

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#249  Edited By InnerVenom123

@The Impersonator: Pfft. There's no such thing as romance in a Wolverine story. Just grunting, humping, and the girl's death shortly after at the hands of one of the runt's enemies. =P

But really, I find it a bit awkward to write at times. I try to make any romantic moment one the reader would stop and go "Awww" at, but not in a cheesy way. I don't ever do explicit stuff on panel, and I've not once had an "implied sex scene" so far.

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@InnerVenom123: I know what you mean. But Wolverine needs to have someone in his life. Right? He needs to have the best woman there is. =P

Well, It's good to do something different. Even though it's a surprise for the reader. :)