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So, I am writing my own personal story or I should say in the world building stage and honestly IDK if anything will ever come of it. Anyways, currently I created a unique version of kinetic energy weapons that don't use gunpowder. However I have grown to not completely like this concept and am finding it hard to explain in universe a difference between it and a railgun or gauss gun, and I do not want it to be like either weapon. So I guess my primary question is how unrealistic is it for ballistic (bullets) weapons to exist alongside energy weapons? Especially in the same faction's military? Or would switching the more unique kinetic weapon to ballistic be considered lazy?

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1: What is a more powerful magic? Staff, wand or hand?

2: Which requires more skill?

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Krieger and his master made there decent into Coruscant, he was still troubled of the vision he had back on Tatooine. Having discussed it with his master, who told him that glimpses like that are simply possible futures, he was curious as to what events would lead up to that vision. However she also said that the Sith have been dead for years, and that the red blade in the vision was that of a rouge wielding a stolen blade. For now he put the thoughts aside as they landed, and helped his master escort the prisoner of the ship.

"Well now what, are you going to interrogate me?" Zax made his way down the ramp followed by the two Jedi.

"Something of the sort, we are going to see how much your willing to share about your boss." Ira took hold of Zax and lead him away. "As for you my apprentice, for now you are free to do as you please."

"Thank you master." Krieger bowed as he went the opposite direction of his master.

His mind was set on learning about the opponent he faced on Tatooine as well as the vision he had. He made his way through the halls of the temple toward the library. On his way he ran into Qui Gon, and his master, Dooku.

"Ah, young Krieger, how was your mission on Tatooine?" Dooku stood nobly with his hands folded behind him.

"Well, we were betrayed by our contact and ambushed by a small group of thugs. However we were able to apprehend the scum and my master is currently interrogating him." Krieger spoke but his gaze kept falling to Qui Gon.

"Interesting, perhaps I will join the other masters in observing the interrogation." Dooku looked down at his Padawan. "If you'd like you can continue with your friend her Qui Gon."

"I will master." Qui Gon nodded, and He and Krieger continued on to the library.

"Qui Gon, there is something I need to tell you." Krieger pace slowed and his friend did the same.

"What is it?" Qui Gon was struggling to not fall behind even at the slowed pace.

"I had a vision as I left Tatooine. A vision of a Jedi fighting a Sith there, however it was more then just a vision it also was something possibly going to happen in the future." The two entered the library and made there way to a data terminal

"A vision of the future? Krieger that's something only powerful Jedi can do like the members of the Council." Qui Gon sat next to His friend.

"Be that as it may, what is troubling me is that the Jedi was an older version of you. YOU, were fighting a Sith on that desert planet." Krieger clicked a few buttons and began searching through the data.

"Me? Fighting a Sith on Tatooine?" Qui Gon was very puzzled at this revelation. "Why in the blazes would I even be on that planet? And did I win?"

"I don't know, and I don't know." Krieger tapped a few more buttons and up popped some information. "Yeah according to this all true Sith were destroyed many years ago. Maybe it was just the heat there is no way you could encounter one anymore."

"What else happened?" Qui Gon watched as his friend opened up another set of information.

"I encountered a warrior known as a Mandalorian." Krieger read through the information. "And I barely won."

For the next hour or so, Krieger and Qui Gon read through the information. He was intrigued by the Mandalorians, looking through the data he learned more about the Mandalore-Jedi war. Many of these warriors were easily capable of taking on Jedi and winning. There weapons and armor designed to easily match even a Jedi Knight, and one piece of data caught his eye. There was a small entry on beskar, a strong metal that is common in their armor. It was capable of withstanding intense damage, even stopping a lightsaber. Contrary to what his master might think he was very lucky that his blade slipped between the armor of the Mandalorian, otherwise it could've ended differently. As Krieger dug deeper he discovered many other lightsaber resistant materials, as well one called cortosis. This particular metal cannot only stop a saber as well as disable it for a short time.

"You know Krieger, if your interested in stopping attacks without your lightsaber, you should speak with my master." Qui Gon stood up and began to walk a way. "He uses an ability called tutaminis. It can block blasters, force lightning, other forms of electricity, and he said that a few ancient powerful Jedi could stop lightsabers."

"That could be useful, you think he'd teach me?" Krieger got up and followed his friend

"Maybe, it wouldn't hurt to ask." The two exited the library and made their way down the halls. "Well as fun as staring at a data screen was, I'm gonna get going and find my master. See you later Krieger."

Krieger had made some way down the halls, when a small astromech zoomed next to him. It beeped a few times getting his attention.

"What is it little droid?" Krieger stopped and faced the droid. It beeped a couple more times before projecting a hologram of his master.

"Sorry to do this so abruptly my apprentice, but Zax was able to provide was with the information we needed and I am on my way to Ryloth, my home world actually." The hologram flickered a bit. "Slak is going to making a stop here soon, and I volunteered to help save my people. I should be back soon, but until then keep up on your training. And if you needing something more to do, speak with the local police, I'm sure they could use help around the city. Ill see you soon, and may the force be with you."

Krieger was a little disappointed as he watched the hologram fizzle out and droid move on, he wished his master would've let him come along. He itched for the chance to actually do some good for the galaxy, but again he was pushed to the side by his master. As he entered his room however he considered his master's suggestion in helping the Coruscant Police, as well as asking Dooku for training advice. But for now Krieger laid in his bed and closed his eyes.

Thanks again for reading, sorry for the less actiony and perhaps poorly written chapter (action less scenes have never been my strong suit). I hope you are all somewhat enjoying this series so far. This was more so just introducing elements for later chapters. Now for the question I want to ask, what should the fate of Krieger's Master, Ira, be?

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The ship landed on the desert planet of Tatooine, and the bay door lowered as the two Jedi made their way out of the ship. Krieger took a deep breath the dust filled dry air, the sun felt like the heat of a blaster bolt. He and his master made their way through the busy streets of the town, many different species were walking around doing their own business. It reminded him of Coruscant in its own low class way. Krieger also sensed many things will making his way through the town, like anger, hatred, and... fear?

"Master? This place seams like it would be a home to many low lives and criminals, yet I feel that some hear are closer to victims." Krieger was still looking around at the many people running shops and others just hanging out in small gangs.

"Yes my Padawan. Tatooine is more then a hideout for that do wrong, it is also a place for those running from something or someone. It is not uncommon to find normally good people here just tying to hide from their pasts." Ira looked forward continuing on to their destination.

Ira stopped at a shop and began conversing with the keeper looking for directions to a nearby cantina. Meanwhile Krieger continued to look around until his eyes landed on a lone Weequay thug leaned up against a building next to an alley. Soon an old man walked down the alley, the thug looked around quickly before following the old man. Krieger sensed trouble a made his way across the busy street and to the wall were the thug once was, he peeked around the corner to see the thug knock down the old man and pull a knife.

"Alright ya ol' geezer, hand over your goods and nobody gets hurt." the thug's blade lightly touched the old man's neck.

"No, please, I-I don't have anything of value I swear." The old man quivered.

"Well then guess we'll have to work something out." the thug barely moved the blade drawing a small amount of blood.

"Now that's enough, drop your weapon or face justice scum." Krieger moved into the alley.

"What? Why dont you bugger off kid, and mind your own business." The thug threw the old man against the ground, stood up and turned to face the young Jedi.

"Trust me scum you wont win this." Krieger threatened

"Ha, please don't make me laugh kid." the thug raised his blade, and the Jedi's fingers just barely touched his saber when a hand touched his shoulder.

"Krieger! What are you doing?" Ira pulled back on her apprentice. "We have other more important things to deal with right now."

"But, master!" Krieger tried to resist but with no success.

"I'm sorry that he disturbed you sir he can be a bit... overly adventurous." Ira pulled her apprentice away from the alley. "Please continue on with your business." As they left the thug returned his attention to the ill fated old man.

"Master! He is going to hurt that person we have to help, its our duty as Jedi!" Krieger reluctantly followed along side his master."

"Do not lecture me on duty, my Padawan." Ira stayed focused forward on the mission. "You lack discipline and focus, our current objective is to obtain information that could help bring down a large slave trade. However we do not need to telegraph our presence, sometimes discreet actions are needed to obtain justice. And sometimes a single life must be sacrificed to save many."

"As you wish..." Krieger moved behind his master, he was trying to understand his masters' words meaning. The Jedi are supposed to be protectors of peace, but yet they are still picking and choosing when and where to save lives? But his mind was brought back to reality as they moved through a doorway and into a building with loud music and chattering patrons.

A Man at the corner of the bar stood leaned against a wall, watching through his dark "T" shaped visor as the two Jedi entered the through the doorway. He kept his gaze on them, but stayed silent, only discreetly moving his hand to his holstered blaster on his hip. He did not draw but just laid his hand their waiting for a moment to draw.

Ira approached the bar, and motioned for the bartender, who approached while cleaning out a glass with a once white rag.

"Yes, miss?" the bartender leaned onto the bar slightly.

"Hello, I'm looking for Duro. He's only got one eye, goes buy the name Zax." Ira pushed a small pile of credits towards the bartender.

"Hmm, no idea what a pretty thing like you wants with that creep. But he is over a the table in the right corner behind you." He pointed and sure enough there sat a one eyed Duro.

The Man in the opposite corner continued to watch the two Jedi, until he noticed the smaller one look his way. Krieger sensed something off about the Man in the light grey armor, but couldn't sense what it was. With attention drawn to him the Man in the Grey Armor made his way through the bar and out the door as Ira and Krieger sat down.

"Hello Zax, its been a while." Ira sat straight and lowered her hood.

"I wish I could say it was a pleasure Miss Jedi." The Duro simply drank from his cup. "Now if you don't mind lets talk business."

"Very well, do you have the information I requested?" Ira slightly leaned forward and placed a small case on the table.

"Hmm, I do and I see you have my payment. But if I may, can I see it." Zax have smiled at the Jedi at the. With a click of a latch the case opened and there sat a canister of refined coaxium. "Ahh, a fortune in such a small container. A deals a deal." He pulled out a small data chip and the two swapped items. "That is all of Slak's transport data and trade route for his... merchandise." He laughed. "Now go, Being in such a goodie two shoes' presence makes me sick."

"Why deal with that slimo?" Krieger followed his master out the door of the bar.

"Because young Padawan, sometimes we have to work with the lesser evil to take down a larger one." Ira took a look at the data chip before placing it in a pouch on her belt. "One day you will understand, but for now we must return to Coruscant."

Krieger was only more troubled by his masters words and was contemplating most of the way to the ship. However he sensed something familiar and looked up to see the Man in Grey Armor standing in front of them. Krieger and his master stopped in front of the Man. The two Jedi turned to see a group of thugs walk up behind them, blasters drawn.

"Did you really think, a little hyper fuel wood be enough to sway my allegiance? Please Jedi the extra credits will be nice, and add killing you on top of that I might even get a promotion." Zax walked out from behind the thugs and held a blaster pistol right at the Twi'lek Jedi.

"We had a deal Zax!" Ira turned to face him fully and unclicked her hilt from her belt.

"Well deals off Miss Jedi. Now please hurry up and die." The Duro chuckled. "BLAST THEM!"

Ira's emerald blade ignited just in time to block the incoming blaster fire, Krieger drew his saber and reflected a blast from the Man in Grey Armor. However he was surprised that the Man's armor took the hit like nothing. The Man then raised his arm and flames shot from his gauntlet, Krieger quickly leapt up and over the attack and kicked the Man in the head. The Man took a few steps back but ducked as his opponent's blade barely missed, he then flew into the air as his jetpacked roared and firing a few blaster bolts at the Jedi. Krieger quickly dodged the incoming fire, but felt something wrap around his wrists. He looked down to see a cable leading right to the Man, who then starting moving fast dragging Krieger along for the ride.

Meanwhile, Ira continued to block in coming fire from Zax and his thugs. She was finally able to deflect one shot into a thug, she then sidestepped and rushed forward. Her blade easily pierced the chest of another thug, she then leapt and slashed yet another. Zax and the last thug began to slowly step back as the Master Jedi approached. They continued to fire, then Zax pulled out a detonator and armed it. Ira quickly caught the incoming bomb with the force and threw it back behind the two thugs. Zax survived the blast, but the last thug was not so lucky. Ira quickly slashed the blaster out of the Duro's hand and held her blade at his neck.

"You are under arrest." She used the force and threw a pair of cuffs onto Zax, who sighed in defeat.

Krieger finally planted his feet onto the side of a building and entered a tug of war with the Man in Grey Armor. He was holding ground until he saw the Man draw his blaster once more, when he fired Krieger jumped and moved in a way that the shot hit the cable. Now free the Jedi used the force and slammed the man into a nearby tower. The Man's jetpack separated from him before flying into another nearby building and exploded, while he hit the ground. Krieger used the force and retrieved his saber and rushed the Man, he swung down as the man lifted his left wrist and a small energy shield formed blocking the attack. The man then released a small set of blades on his other wrist and swung up, Krieger barely dodged the attack but got a small cut on his cheek. The two then stood facing each other before rushing each other, the Man slid between Krieger's legs leapt up and kicked him in the head. Krieger barely recovered to dodge another slash from the Man's wrist blades. Krieger slashed his blade but was again blocked by the energy shield, but this time when the Man swung his bladed wrist, the young Jedi slid his saber off the Man's shield in a way that it sliced off his hand. The Man yelled in pain, but was silenced when Krieger's sapphire blade separated his head from his shoulders. As the Man in Grey Armor's head rolled away, Krieger deactivated his blade and placed it on his belt.

"Most impressive young Padawan, not many so young have defeated such a skilled warrior." Ira returned to her apprentice with a disgruntled Zax in tow.

"As much as I hate to say it, you master is right." the Duro looked at the beheaded corpse. "Not many so young can defeat a Mandalorian, even if you are a Jedi."

"Well I'll consider myself lucky then." Krieger too looked at the dead Mandalorian.

"Please, Padawan. There is no such thing as luck, today your skill out matched his, but there are many more like him. And many are far more deadly, as well as notorious Jedi killers." Ira then turned and headed towards the ship followed by her apprentice.

Krieger and his master entered the ship, he threw Zax into a cell before heading to the cockpit. He sat down as Ira took off from the dusty planet. Just then a strange image flashed in his mind, a young boy in some sort of junk shop, then a podrace through a canyon desert. A clash of red and green, and finally a shiny chrome ship with a queen. What confused him was the wielder of the green saber, was... an older Qui Gon Jinn?

Hello readers, sorry for the time between chapters, but due to what happened with my first attempt at this story, I will not be attempting daily, or every other day posts. I will probably do at least one post a week. I am trying to avoid burning myself out as I enjoy writing (whether I'm good at it or not) and I want to share my main OC's story. Thank you again for taking time to read this, and I hope you enjoyed. Feel free to leave comments, and questions on the story.

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Hello Readers, before we start I'd like to notify all readers that this is a reboot/restart of another (and sadly unfinished) story known as: Grey Area: A Star Wars Story. Some characters and concepts will return from there. I am restarting in hopes of better connecting the timeline as well as hopefully staying more consistent and again practice my writing skills. And of course I do not own Star Wars or its characters. All rights are held by Lucasfilms/Disney please support the official content.

It was a cooler than normal early morning on the city planet of Coruscant, and the Jedi Temple was for the most part still asleep. Yet, the sound of clashing blades echoed through out the temple. In the courtyard, Master Yoda was over seeing a sparing match between two younger Jedi Padawan. The younger Padawan is a human with longer brown hair wielding a green saber and wearing lighter brown robes. The older Padawan was another human with short darker brown hair, wielding a blue lightsaber and wearing almost white robes. The older Padawan is age, 16 while the younger one is 14.

The elder was easily out matching his younger opponent, for every jab he sidestepped. Every slash was blocked and redirected. The younger one tried with all his might to break the older one's defense and was all but unsuccessful. Then like a switch, the elder changed his footing and moved onto the offensive, releasing a flurry of slashes and jabs. The younger was now backpedaling, struggling to block the incoming attacks. However the older one's cockiness cost him as his opponent took an opening and took a heavy swing down, knocking away the blue saber.

Th elder quickly ducked under the next swing, the green blade inches from his face, in the same move he backflipped away. He out stretched his hand and a powerful force push sent the younger backwards off his feet. The elder one quickly force pulled his saber back to him and swiftly dashed towards the younger one. The younger had barely made it to his feet when he blocked a powerful downward strike from the blue saber. The blade lock caused a loud whine and crackling as the two blades touched. Then the elder quickly used his foot and swept out his opponent's legs. While still in the air the younger received a harsh kick to the chest, but as he flew back he stopped mid air stiff. The elder held the younger one in the air with force for only a moment before throwing him to the ground. In a single leap the elder closed the distance and held his blade only a small distance from the younger one's neck. The younger froze, staring down the blue saber and up at the victor of the match, deactivating his own green saber.

"Enough for the day that is." Yoda finally spoke. The elder Padawan helped the younger one up and they both turned and bowed as the master approached. "Krieger, victorious you are but to much aggression you use."

"My apologies master, I was only trying to win." Krieger said as he raised out of his bow, still looking down at his master.

"Win you may have, but the darkside aggression can lead to." The master leaned slightly on his cane. "A Jedi, must remain calm and disciplined. With that, victory you will still see." Yoda then turned his attention to the younger Padawan." Much to learn you still have, young Qui Gon"

"But master how am I supposed to beat him if he is bigger and older" The young Padawan spoke

"Mmm. Matters not, size does." The old master closed his eyes and out stretched his hand. The two Padawans soon were lifted into the air and held there by their teacher. "On your training, focus you must. And become, stronger you will."

"Yes master." Qui Gon felt his feet touch the ground. Just then two other Jedi entered the court yard, one in darker robes and the other in light grey. Qui Gon was approached by the darker robed Jedi. "Master Dooku."

"Hello my young apprentice, how was your sparring match with young Krieger?" Dooku spoke

"I lost" Qui Gon hung his head.

"Do not worry, not even I was always as skilled as I am. It will come with time and practice." Dooku placed his hand on his apprentice's shoulder.

"You sound like Master Yoda." Qui Gon looked up.

"I'm sure." Dooku chuckled and turned towards Yoda. "Good morning Master, I do apologize for the quick exit but my apprentice and I have a mission to get to."

"Understand I do. May the force be with you, Master Dooku." Yoda smiled as the Dooku and Qui Gon turned to leave.

"Master Ira." Krieger Bowed before his master, she wore the gray robes and was a twi' lek with purplish skin.

"Hello my Padawan, how was sparing practice?" She smiled.

"It went well master, I won. But Master Yoda says I need to work on my anger." Krieger raised again from his bow.

"I see, it seems we will have to do more meditation and focusing on helping you control your emotions." Ira placed her hand on her apprentice's cheek. "Now go and prepare a ship for us we to have a mission to work on."

"Yes master." Krieger bowed once more to Yoda before running off to the hangar.

"Great power, I sense in him." Master Yoda moved next to Ira

"Yes, that's what worries me master." Ira folded her hands in front of her. "He's would make a great Jedi, maybe even a Knight. However I also sense a great amount of darkness in him."

"Agree I do, Keep an eye on him we must." Yoda turned around to leave. "Heart in the right place he has. Now go, return to your Padawan. And may the force be with you."

Ira nodded to her master and then made her way out of the courtyard and into the halls of the temple. As she made her way to the hangar, her mind wandered back to when she first met Krieger.

It was on an outer rim planet, with a small village on it. It was at the time under assault by a vicious group of pirates. She and a fellow Jedi arrived to help try and save the village. Ira had found Krieger after the pirates were drove of inside a burning building. While carrying him out a piece of debris fell from the ceiling. To Ira's surprise it stopped right above them she looked down to see that the young child had his hands raised but was struggling to hold the weight. She regained focus and helped move the debris away. It was then on the way out that she looked into a room only to the boy's parents were now nothing more then chard corpses. Soon after that she brought him to the temple were he was raised until he could finally be her Padawan. Since then they have been near inseparable.

"All systems ready to go Master." Krieger was sitting in the co-pilot's seat and was finishing the warm up sequence. He looked at his master deep in thought. "Master? Is everything ok?

"Yes my Padawan, just thinking." She sat in the pilots seat and started the engines

"About what?" Krieger prodded.

"Nothing, just about how proud I am of you." She smiled at him as they left the hangar and flew up and away from the planet. Krieger smiled as they slipped into lightspeed.

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Clashing of saber blades rang through out the room, they sparked and wined as the warriors attempted to gain an upper hand on each other. A blade of black energy easily blocked the attacks of the incoming blue blade.

"Your attacks are strong, but power will only get you so far." The dark blade wielder easily sidestepped a downward strike. "Focus on speed and accuracy."

"Master, you are far more skilled then be, how could I ever best you in combat?" The blue blade's holder was a powerful lasat.

"I have beaten those more powerful then me, and have beaten large numbers of force users. And I am by no means the best." The dark blade wielder wore dark robes and armor. "However I will admit experience does matter as well."

"Master Krieger, I believe I shall give you all I have." The Lasat stepped back and held his lightsaber parallel to the ground and ignited a second blade from the opposite end of the hilt. He then lowered that hand and raised the other grabbing another hilt from his belt, he ignite it with green blade protruding from either side.

"Very well Tryger. Show me what you've got." Krieger entered a battle stance and held his saber at the ready.

The room was covered in eerie blue and green light, master and apprentice starred each other down and sized each other up. Finally, Tryger let out a roar as he charged at his master. Krieger summersaulted over the incoming attack and ducked under a back swinging blade. He then blocked another incoming attack, and force pushed his opponent away into the wall. Tryger got up and charged again this time spinning his sabers to form a deadly buzzsaw, Krieger managed to stick his saber in the middle of the whirlwind and stop the attack. He flicked his blade in a way that caused Tryger to loose both of his sabers. Tryger quickly back flipped back to them and grabbed them but before he could ignite them he felt a intense pain go through his body. Once again the apprentice hit the wall as electricity shocked through his system. Krieger stepped forward as the blue light shot from his fingers, he let up when he was a few feet away from his apprentice.

"Your sabers are not important in a duel, if you lose them continue fighting until an appropriate opening appears." Krieger deactivated his saber and placed it on his belt.

"Says the on with five sabers." Tryger recovered his sabers as he stood up.

"Touche." Krieger shrugged his shoulders "Now let us return to the command center."

Krieger and Tryger exited the dueling room and into the base corridors, they were alive with life. Sunja's new funding gave them resources needed to properly function. The soldiers all wore dark grey armor with golden visors. Officers, and other base personnel wore white uniforms. Even the new battle droids, marched along next to astromechs and protocol droids. Master and apprentice walked through the halls and received many nods and hellos from the many others walking them. They twisted and turned though the halls until finally they reached the control center and were surprised to see in a bit of a commotion. Sunja stood infront of a monitor but looked back as the two entered.

"Krieger, Tryger! yousa both needin to see this." Sunja waved them over

"What is it my friend has something happened?" Krieger hurried over.

"Its the federation, they've made their move." sunja pointed at the monitor

"So, they've blockaded naboo." Krieger moved closer to the screen

"And the republic have sent a pair of jedi to make an attempt at negotiations." Jak spoke from behind Krieger

"It will fail, Sidious is behind this. If this really is the beginning then we are not to long away from intergalactic war." Krieger stood straight and turned towards him

"What should weesa do now?" Sunja stood straight now.

"Master, I say we send our fleet and destroy the federation fleet." Tryger spoke up now.

"No, to attack now would draw to much attention. Even with our force now, we still need time to grow." Krieger crossed his arms and thought for a moment. "I will go to naboo on my own. Because of my starfighter I should be able to get through as a uninformed scout."

"Are yousa sure? That is a very risky plan." Sunja shook his head

"I agree, there is no guarantee they will not blast you into dust." Jak held his chin

"Master allow me to come with you, we shall crush the jedi together." Tryger clenched his fist.

"No, my apprentice your existence must remain secret. The last thing I want is Yoda showing up on our door step backed by the rest of the order." Krieger headed towards the door, "if it is just me they will assume I was there by chance and not search for me after."

The three leaders watched as Krieger marched out into the halls. He walked speedily past the many in the halls, eventually he made his way to the hanger. K-3 stood next to Krieger's ship, and was joined by Unum. The Jawa spoke quickly in his language.

"Unum wishes to know where you are off to, Master Krieger." K-3 turned his head as Krieger entered the starfighter.

"Im going to deal with some business on naboo." Krieger tapped some buttons and the engines roared.

"Do you need assistance?" K-3 watched as the ship turned

"Not this time my friend." Krieger closed the the cockpit and zoomed out of the hanger and into the sky.

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The nabooian fighter jumped from lightspeed and made an approach on the jungle planet of Felucia. As it began its decent down towards the planet when a cruiser jumped out of lightspeed. The cruiser was designed like a dagger on edge. It turned its large turbo lasers on the fighter, inside the fighter the holopad activated.

"Unknown fighter you are entering restricted space, turn back or be destroyed!" the hologram was of scarred mon calamari in admirals uniform.

"Passcode 'uprising', landing code 'rogue'" The pilot of the small fighter spoke through his dark helmet.

"Oh... Master Krieger. My apologies, you are free to progress." The calamari, bowed his head before the hologram deactivated

The fighter continued on its way as the cruiser speed back into unknown regions of the system. Krieger tapped the holopad as he entered felucia's atmosphere, as it sparked to life a gungan appeared.

"Ah, Krieger meesa friend. Finally yousa have arrived to see the new force that rallies behind yousa." Sunja chuckled

"Its good to see you to Sunja, but lets save the pleasantries for later for now I want a run down of the current state of our forces." Krieger steered the ship to a nearby gap in the jungle.

"Far enough, mesa will meet yousa at the landing pad." Sunja nodded as the hologram sparked out.

The gap in the jungle contained a large base, many starfighters lined the landing area as well as a few work in progress cruisers. There were also a few turbo laser towers strewn through out the base, as well as countless foot soldiers walking around. As he landed some soldier lined up in an attention stance, as Sunja walked between them dressed in a military uniform. Krieger exited the ship and walked towards his old friend.

"Krieger, its good to see yousa." Sunja outstretched his hand

"You too Sunja" Krieger shook his friends hand. "So how are we looking"

"As of now over three thousand soldiers have joined our cause, some more loyal other here just for hopes of wealth." Sunja held his head high. "Our mechanical power is still growing but we have at least four hundred tanks, 600 light armored vehicles, and 1000 speeder bikes. However our fleet is strongest made up of a few dozen cruisers, and transports ready to go."

"That is impressive my friend, but that does seem so little for a galactic scale conflict." Krieger removed his helmet as they entered a door into the base.

"Yes, however I have reached an agreement with Kuat, the genosians, and a few smaller producers. There is a large order of military equipment awaiting completion." Sunja moved his hand in an exclamatory motion. "However I am awaiting your approval on a few matters."

"And what might those be?" Krieger looked over to his friend and raised an eyebrow.

"I was reached out to by a Kaminoan, personally I thought they didn't exist anymore." Sunja scratched his chin in curiosity.

"What did it want?" Krieger looked forward as they entered the command center, Full of busy personnel.

"He offered to provide us with a number of cloned soldiers, the base gene would be of our choosing." Sunja stopped and turned towards Krieger.

"Hmm, curious. What are your thoughts on the matter?" Krieger stayed looking forward out a window into a training drill of soldiers.

"Personally, it would offer a great boost in soldiers. A boost we are going to be in dire need of, if we plan to take on the republic's own clone force in the future." Sunja turned his head to look out the window.

"True, it would make up what true loyalists we don't have. But what if they betray us to Sidious or the republic." Krieger set his helmet on a nearby consol.

"We would send a small squad of loyalists to watch them and train our clones. Just think Krieger a force of natural species, clones, and even droid warriors." Sunja smiled at the thought.

"Yes it would be quite formidable, but we still need skill to counter the numbers of these future forces." Krieger sat down in a chair.

"I agree, sssk" Drago had entered the command center. "in my old clan, a single trained trandoshan hunter could take down an entire group of untrained ones. Even with my species superior traits, training can make them unnecessary."

"I tell you what Sunja, I will send Drago and a small number of troops to Kamino." Krieger set the crystal he obtained from korriban on the console along with some parts.

"Excellent." Sunja nodded

"I will choossse what warriors shall accompany me, as well as a perfect template." Drago nodded and left the room.

Krieger had his eyes closed and the parts infront of him began to float around, and combine into a curved handle with a slight hand guard. The crystal rose up into the hilt, and with a few more clicks and twists.

"So Krieger what else is there that wesa are in need of?" Sunja watched curiously as his friend performed an amazing feet of skill and focus.

"We are going to be facing jedi, sith, and everything designed to kill force users." Krieger grabbed the hilt and looked at it checking for mistakes or impurities. "What I am in need of is my own order. My own force sensitive group of warriors."

"What are yousa saying?" Sunja became more curious

"I need our scouts to look for rogue jedi, force sensitives with no allegiance, old sith acolytes. I need and apprentice to start off, but then slowly begin to train more to use both sides of the force."

"Excuse me sirs but I have news from our scouts." one of the officers had turned towards Krieger and Sunja

"What is it?" Krieger looked at the officer.

"It seems that the Trade Federation is making a move on naboo." The officer had turned back towards his work screen.

"So it has begun, I will deal with this myself. Continue gathering forces we still have time before the clone wars truly begin." Krieger stood up and placed his helmet on his head and looked at his new saber. "Time to change the future." He activated his saber and it sparked on revealing a black blade.

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A shuttle leapt out of light speed, and it began its way towards the ancient sith planet.

"Why are we back here Krieger? Sssk" Drago slowly guided the ship towards the surface "there is nothing here but dust and darknessss."

"I'm here to collect my things and learn what else there is to learn about the dark side." Krieger stepped out into the cockpit, he had made a new armored suit. His cortosis gauntlets survived the blast of dark lightning, but the rest was replaced. Krieger now wore boots with shin and knee armor, shoulder and elbow plates, and a lightweight chest plate. The armor was made of shiny black metal, which went well with his new blue robes, cloak and hood. Krieger also changed his helmet, this time it resembled that of the senate guards of Coruscant. Krieger's helmet however was black, crestless and had a blue visor.

"Fair enough I guessss. We are approaching the coordinatessss you gave me." Drago gently placed the ship down in the courtyard. "Whatsss with the tarp?" Drago pointed towards a tarp covered object

"That my scaly friend is my ride out of here. Its and old modified nabooian fighter, it got me here years ago." Krieger exited the cockpit as the loading ramp lowered. "Drago I want you and Unum to head to the base on felucia, and help K-3 and Sunja train the recruits and begin mobilizing the fleet."

"Are you sssure?" Drago followed Krieger to the edge of the ramp. "You don't know if that old ship will even run, let alone make it to felucia. ssk"

"It'll be fine, now go there isn't much time, if Palpatine goes through with the original plan we've only got a few years tops before the galaxy is plunged into conflict." Krieger stepped of onto the stone of the courtyard.

"Very well, ssseee you ssoon." Drago turned and made his way back into the ship.

As Krieger began to walk away, the ship's thrusters activated. As it took off, Kieger's cloak billowed in the wind created by it. He began to make his way towards the temple, but before he reached the steps he looked of to the side were a old statue stood. Krieger turned towards it and began his way over to it, he stopped in front of it and used the force to lift the statue up and throw it into a nearby wall. Krieger kneeled down and used the force to move the sand, revealing something covered in a cloth. He reached down into it and grabbed the cloth, unwrapped it and picked up his old jedi saber and his old master's saber. Krieger sat for a moment looking at the two sabers.

"What are you doing my young Padawan?" a voice caused Krieger to freeze. He stood up and turned around to see Kara but as a blueish see through figure.

"Master?" Krieger ignited his blue saber and leveled with the figure. "What dark side trickery is this?"

"I'm not of the dark side Krieger, though this planet's strong connection to the force does help me hold this form." Kara took a step forward "now what are you doing?"

"Simple im retrieving my sabers." Krieger deactivated the saber and attached both of them to his belt.

"No I mean why have you chosen this path? Your jedi brothers have fallen to your blade, and you've joined the sith only to further your own goals." Kara shook her head "And yet you betray the sith with the intention of destroying both of our orders?"

"I think its a pretty glorious plan I think." another voice whispered from the desert. Krieger looked over to the temple and down the stares walked a red ghost of Plagueis. "However the dark side would be a better option."

"Great." Krieger watched as Plagueis walked next to Kara.

"Sith scum you turned my Padawan to the dark and caused all of this trouble." Kara turned her head slightly.

"No master, I chose to go on the path of darkness, but I no longer have need of pure darkness." Krieger stood cross armed.

"Then you choose weakness Fallax?" Plagueis raised an eyebrow

"Please, clearly he realizes that turning himself over to the jedi is the best option for him." Kara rolled her eyes.

"You are both wrong." Krieger dropped his arms to his sides. Kara and Plagueis turned towards him. "Both of your orders are flawed, and yes masters my original plan was fueled by revenge but now its fueled by the problems both the sith and jedi cause. Many people lay in miserable or horrible conditions because the jedi will not act even if they are supposed protectors of justice. The sith talk of peace but bring nothing but crime and war. It is now my personal mission to bring balance by learning to use the dark and the light and destroying both of your orders and any others that stand in my way."

"You dare raise your voice to me?" Plagueis's eyes flashed with anger

"You need to know you place Padawan." Kara raised a finger to Krieger.

Plagueis and Kara continued to argue and criticize Krieger, who stood there his anger began to boil. Krieger however began to guide his anger, he thought of how he wanted to burn both orders for there wrong doings. How he wanted to to separate from them, unique and start his own order. Finally Krieger cleared his head and looked out at the jedi and sith spirits.

"ENOUGH! I am neither sith nor jedi I am of my own, I am the balance of light and dark. I will bring peace to the galaxy after I burn you all to ashes!" Krieger raised his hands, but it wasn't a telekinetic or electrical blast that shot out. From Krieger's hands shot out red hot fire, the spirits dissipated and the flames cooked the nearby rocks into molten lava.

Krieger lowered his hands, and stood breathing heavily. He walked over to the tarp covered ship an ripped off the tarp. Before he entered the ship, he noticed a strange light reflection on the side of it. Krieger turned and saw that the statue had crumbled after hitting the wall, and something was shimmering from the pile. He out stretched his hand and pulled the object to him, it flew into his hand. Krieger turned and opened his hand, and there in his palm was a kyber crystal. Krieger plade the crystal in a pouch and entered his ship, its engines fired up with some resistance. He began to take off, and punched in the coordinates for felucia.

Authors Note: I am very sorry for such a long space between posts, but things came up and I didn't have time. However I will finish Krieger's story and I will try to maintain quality, but I cant promise a constant posting time.

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"Whatsss your plan bossss?" Drago landed on the platforms on Coruscant in the early afternoon.

"Simple. They aren't expecting me to turn on them." Krieger stood ready to exit the shuttle. "Hopefully I can get the jump on them. However I will admit I sense a huge shift in the darkside."

"Be safe Krieger, We will wait for you here." Drago pressed a button and the exit ramp lowered.

Krieger walked out of the ship and hit a button on his wrist, his speeder moved came out of a nearby alley and stopped in front of him. He hopped on the speeder and zoomed off, knocking down nearby protocol droid. He entered the flow of traffic easily, but today was slow for the city. Krieger looked around and saw a jedi ship fly over head, he slipped down to the lower levels of traffic to avoid detection. He zoomed along barely missing a speeder full of senators, he zoomed over a larger bus speeder and drifted around a tight corner. He finally arrived at the tall building in which the sith resided. Krieger dismounted and walked towards the entrance when a strong feeling hit him, a strange new and powerful force signature. Krieger sensed the signature was a great distance away, he thought to himself.

"A new force user is born, but one with a strong presence such as this? Impossible." Krieger stood for a second and closed his eyes, the signature was indeed young. He couldn't understand how any creature could be so powerful. Krieger shook his head and continued on, he noticed a strange speeder parked on a nearby plat form. It looked like a "C" turned on its side, it was unfamiliar to him. The doors shot open as he entered the building then quickly into a nearby lift. The spike in the force had evened out and dissipated, Krieger made a note to check into it once his business was done here. The lift stopped and opened, Krieger stepped out into the hall and noticed that the guards usually stationed here were no where to be seen. He shook the thought as it would mean less witnesses anyways. Krieger made his way through the halls of the floor and to the room in which his sith mentors resided. He walked in to see Sidious standing and looking out of a window onto the city.

"Good to see back in one piece Darth Fallax, most impressive that you survived an encounter against a large number of enemies." Sidious stayed facing towards the window.

"You underestimate me master." Krieger slowly and quietly reached for his sabers. "Where is master Plagueis?"

"He is dead." Sidious stood towards the window still unmoving

"What!?" Krieger stepped back. "How? Did the jedi find us?"

"No, He is dead by my hand." Sidious finally turned around "And now I am the lord of the sith." Sidious cackled loudly, Krieger flashed back to the vision he had on Korriban. His blood chilled, and he focused in on the dark lord. Krieger stood for a minute as he learned the identity of the evil laugh.

"Well in that case." Krieger regained his focus. "You've made my job easier." Krieger ignited his sabers.

"You dare oppose me Fallax?" Sidious stared at Krieger with a blank fierce rage.

"I never truly stood with you sith scum. I merely needed to gain the necessary knowledge of the dark side to gain power." Krieger entered a battle stance. "Now I possess all the power needed to destroy both the sith and jedi."

"Your confidence will be you down fall." Sidious raised his hands and lightning shot out, Krieger blocked the attack with his sabers. "You will die." Sidious cackled again, but stopped when Krieger began to advance.

But before Krieger barely made it a few feet when he was knocked into a nearby chair. He looked up and their stood a dark hooded figure, the figure ignited a dual bladed lightsaber and lowered his hood. The figure was a red tattooed zabrak warrior.

"Meet my apprentice, Darth Maul. Your replacement." Sidious laughed.

Krieger got up and leapt at Mual, but the attack was blocked. Mual then performed a series of powerful strikes, Krieger stepped back and blocked the attacks. Mual spun and swept low, Krieger jumped and kicked Maul in the head. Mual rolled back but gut up and charged, the room lit up as the the two warriors fiercely battled. Mual and Krieger entered a clash, and they locked eyes trying to search for a weak point. The clash broke and the two warriors stepped away from each other, Krieger deactivated his sabers and placed them on his hilt. Maul looked at him for a while then did the same. Krieger swung a right hook at Mual, but the sith ducked and tried to perform a kick. Krieger side stepped the attack and landed a quick jab into Mual's side, but the sith retaliated by upper cutting Krieger. Again a fierce brawl broke out and the two exchanged blow after blow, finally Mual landed a hit to Krieger's abdomen. As Krieger recoiled, Mual let loose a barrage of punches and kicks and punches. Krieger caught one punch, and then delivered a powerful punch to Mauls face. Krieger then followed with a knee to Muals stomach and then a hard elbow drop into Maul's shoulder. Mual fell to one knee and looked up only to see the bottom of Krieger's boot coming at him. Mual hit the floor, but as Krieger tried to hit him again, Maul threw his opponent into the nearby window which cracked from the hit. Maul got up and charged, but Krieger outstretched his arms and a force blast caused maul to fly across the room. As Mual hit the opposite wall, Krieger was hit with a powerful blast of sith lightning. Sidious laughed as his barrage caused Krieger to fly out the window. The two sith then approached the window and looked down to see Krieger zooming away on the top of a speeder bus he had landed on.

"Shall I pursue him master?" Maul held his side in pain.

"No, we have more important things to attend to." Sidious turned away from the window and was followed by his apprentice.

Krieger sat on top of the vehicle, and watched the building grow further away. He looked at his armor, Sidious's hit caused many of the armor plates to be destroyed. Krieger reached up and took off his helmet, he was breathing heavily. Krieger clicked the button on his wrist, it sparked at first but then it glowed, his speeder made his way to him. Krieger dropped on to the speeder, barely catching himself. He punched some coordinates into the bikes controls before passing out, some how staying on the bike as it zoomed off.

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