Skinja

@reddeadjoker: Well its the easiest way to improve. You might not have spotted some of the odd parts of the drawing yourself thats why you need others to point it out. Then next time you draw you will know what went wrong last time and how to fix it.

Why are his hips so massive?

His arms are way too long.

@cutter: I have two gripes with this that I'm sure you've fixed in the 4 years since you've done this but I'm gonna say them anyway. I think you over hatch your art and it makes each panel look quite cluttered. If you could find a way to still keep your grunge style but express it with less lines I think you would be all the better for it.

My second gripe is with art of The Lord and Vanessa. I know they're in skin tight body suits but they don't need to be flexing every muscle all the time. It breaks immersion because its just not realistic.

Also Vanessa's hair in the last page, I noticed you drew pretty much every strand of hair and that can be very time consuming. Jim Lee talks about a quick way to draw hair at 4:50 in this video

That's all I got in terms of constructive criticism. Other then that it was pretty darn cool.

Every page is so full of energy, you should really be sending this off to publishers.

My only (very minor) gripe is that when Spider-Man punches the first guy his skin and balaclava dont have any ripples in it. It kinda lessens the impact.

Seriously though start sending this off because I would buy a comic with this art.

Oh hi Scarlet Witch.

@lifeofvibe: Raiden from the Metal Gear Soild games.