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@cbishop: The beginning was the reaction of what he said in the last part but you are right it is kind of confusing. Should I modify this?

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@poze: @cbishop@waezi2@kingkarate

part 1) https://comicvine.gamespot.com/forums/fan-fic-8/blue-and-red-1887598/

Part 2) https://comicvine.gamespot.com/forums/fan-fic-8/blue-and-white-1888292/

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Yellow and Blue.

Red.

My life made sense after he spoke those words.

I felt it, right there in my bones, skin, flesh.

Power, Love and Eternity.

I didn't change.

I was closer.

He looked down and before I could say a word, he told me to follow him.

Jumping down a deep hole.

Darkness surrounded us but his yellow eyes blasted threw the shadows.

I crashed with no injuries, even if we fell for hours.

We continued threw the darkness but the soundless atmosphere made me anxious.

I was loosing my feeling of power.

He didn't look back anymore.

I was to slow. I couldn't breath.

I fell on my knees. I didn't want him to think I was praying or helpless.

I was lost again.

The darkness strangled me as He continues his path.

Yellow light.

Sparkiling yellow diamonds shined on my body. I felt at peace.

I opened my eyes. He was there.

"Welcome to the Pantheon. Your soul had to be taken. Or You couldn't join me"

Looked around and realised that I was laying on a cloud. There were structures from every culture from all around time.

Pyramids, Castles, Giant trees and any animal there ever was.

He took my hand and lift me up. I floated up on my feet.

His eyes were softer but he looked at me and said with a deep voice right from the stomach of a volcano.

"You can have all of this and grant me a life among yours. I could finally feel that fear again! Being what I am is boring nothing matter since I am all. Grant me that life, you that scared me by you're love and admiration. I want to feel more. Take my place! Take my Blood!"

I had finally arrive.

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@waezi2: I really like it! A simple but effective story

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@cbishop: Yes but I wasn't really sure if I would have even continued the first part. I will try to make the next ones longer

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@thefortress: I really like it the sense of mystery and the overall idea,I really want to know more about those characters. It's great I'm really looking forward for the official first part

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White and Blue

I've never been on a plane before, it was the first time that I saw the city from above.

The sheer destruction they have created in my hometown left me with a bittersweet taste in my mouth.

I was horrified but still amazed by their power, and now one of them was holding me.

Flying way above the highest buildings.

The wind whipped my face threw his huge fingers, as he tried to protect me from te moving air.

I was lost.

We landed on an cold landscape, white crystals spreading rainbows, blue ice reflecting like mirrors.

I was scared to talk but not enough to run away, he was tall and blue.

We followed a path until we arrived at a huge blue lake, frozen.

His feet crushed the earth with each step, now he proceeded to walk on the thin ice and moved on it like it was nothing, amazed I followed him fast.

We sat down and he looked me in the eyes with his own yellow ones.

His enormous mouth opened and he said in a deep swinging voice.

"You cheered for me. No one ever does that for someone like me. I saw beauty and admiration in your eyes and it still hasn't vanished. I spared you because you scare me."

I was close