To you I am (Poem)

To you I am
Nothing
More than just a friend
Like a flame
That goes out as quickly
As it began
I wish
That you would stay
And let me hold your hand
But you leave 
Only
To never look back again

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ARMIV2

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Edited By ARMIV2

That's deep, man. I'm truly feeling that.

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That was good.

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That's quite nice.

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@Mad8Baller: Better than anything I've written.

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That's sad. I love that you have "Nothing" on its own line. It makes me think nothing is going on even though the next line shows a friendship status. Due to your feelings, however, it's like nothing really exists. Very cool.

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Very elegant.