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@amazing_webhead: Thank you! = )

@cbishop: Procrastination is my housemate too.I hadn't noticed or didn't remember that you used my silly fan-art of your character in a story! = D That's really cool!

@mrmonster:Thanks! Like cbishop said, I'm not a frequent visitor here anymore, nor a frequent poster. Sorry! But who knows, maybe I'll write a fanfic here from time to time. Don't keep your hopes up t...

@batkevin74:You're welcome.@cbishop:Time, that dastardly thief!

@cbishopI think what this story needs is pathos. The main character dies, but it doesn't feel like it's a big deal. I WANNA SEE REAL TEARS DAMN IT!!!The villain is alright. I like campy villains, but ...

@cbishop said:@kfhrfdu_89_76k: I don't know if you were writing against the deadline like I was, or what (I know you posted right before I did). The beginning narration was just... off, somehow? It go...

LoL ok I wasn't too late. I just checked what time it is in Sydney right now. Sorry for spamming guys.

I noticed this contest only a couple of hours ago, lol. You can disqualify it if you want, if I was too late. I wrote it mainly because it seemed like it fun.

I hope I wasn't too late with my entry!

THE PHANTOM VS. A WEIRD GIRL HOLDING HER UMBRELLA WHICH MIGHT WHISTLEchapter 1 The Phantom, that courageous concept, The Ghost Who Walks, trudges trough the waistdeep of trouble (it) finds (it)self in...

Why do you think it`s bad (if you don`t mind me asking)?

Ah, the right arm lacks some needed detail, on the fist for example. Looks unfinished on that part. But that`s not a major bad thing.

I think it looks pretty good! For criticism, I don`t really have any. Sure, the left arm is shorter, but there are people with mismatched arms, so I don`t actually see it as an error. But, if you want...