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yeah, no shocks here
Superman Returns is still the most underrated movie on Comic Vine.
Just saw a tweet that DC has offered Hickman a deal, too. Sounds like they intend to bury Marvel.
holy shit lol
Marvel is Hickman's home (even if he hates them now) but I can't say I wouldn't want to see a Hickman Justice League
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love that movie
I get why people are angry with Beth but I can't even be mad because the delivery was absolutely hysterical. And it's not like Jerry is actually gone.
My only complaint is how they completely fodderized the Council of Ricks. The Council of Ricks was awesome.
My new favorite episode. His rant at the end had me rolling.
Honestly.... I can't really form an opinion one way or the other with this show.
Shitty reviews 101
So...wait...what was the point of this thread?
A) I do things like this when I'm bored
B) As an aspiring writer, I like constructive criticisms on ideas. Just felt like getting feedback
Work on your prose.
You shouldn't use third person pronouns so frequently. Especially not at the beginning of consecutive sentences. Here is a trouble area:
His power is raw and unfiltered, he can't do it alone. From him new beings arise to help him give this universe form. He needed someone to harness the darkness of his world, he needed someone who dwelled in it. He then realized he needed a woman's touch and someone to explore the realms of magic.
Not my best work, but I' m tired and this would require more research than I'm willing to do.
Lazy Mexican stereotype.
Every time you do a blog, I get a notification. And every time I get a notification, I get an email. Every time I get an email, my phone buzzes. And every time my phone buzzes, I check my phone. :)
Quit making excuses for yourself and get gud.
Nothing new here, just racism. Book looks good.
lol this guy
The dinner scene from Luthor: Man of Steel would've been a nice touch.
Maybe Lex can't completely fool Batman, but Batman would agree that Superman is a threat regardless.
Use your keyboard!
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