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Eh? lol I was about to make a stalker joke.

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@darthsenju: After a brief skim, I would say yes. For example, Shunsui dodged Starrk. So what? You and I know that Starrk could absolutely blitz the heck out of Bankai Ichigo in just his base with no difficulty, and that Ichigo himself is all kinds of at the very least double digit Mach numbers at that point if not more. But not everyone does. Everyone else just sees "k. He dodged a dude with a blue sword."

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It's good. However were I making it, I would create it assuming that someone doesn't know anything about Bleach. If someone's familiar with Bleach, then I would assume that they've already seen the scenes.

What I mean is, you show that Yamamoto dodged Wonderweiss and punted him across the city, but if I'm someone who was just referred here from a VS thread and aren't familiar with Bleach, I don't know how to gauge that. How strong was Wonderweiss? You and I know that his base was strong enough to defeat a Bankai Kensei, but not everyone will.

Or that he could trap Aizen, what durability feats does Aizen have to make that any more impressive than normal fire to a normal human? Someone whom isn't familiar with Bleach wouldn't know these things.

Even his Bankai potentially lifewiping Soul Society. How large is Soul Society? It's a planet unto itself, but that fact is greatly debated and questioned amongst these threads. So showing a fact and proof for the fact to explain the feat is usually a good idea.

Hope I've been helpful. It's good, and it has epic potential. But I think you should go more in-depth with the feats and WHY they're impressive. Unless of course you only intended this as a scan group for people to refer to easily, in which case I sound really stupid and you've done perfect. xP

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Not quite as cool as the old one.