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#1  Edited By Hero1921

Dope chapter. I need the other two lol. Nice take on Mr. Zsasz.

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#2  Edited By Hero1921

Original Idea. All characters belong to me, original concept and ideas. Please forgive me for any grammar or typing mistakes. Tell me what you think.

“Cody, check this out. What’s that? Is that a shooting star? Or meteorite?” Jerry asked his friend as he pointed out at the falling object behind a window.

Cody was filling the comics and putting them back where they were. He turned toward Jerry and snapped at him. “Damn it Jerry! Help me put these comics away. You know we got to get in line for the movie. HERO starts in an hour. Help me out.” He demanded as he continued what he was doing.

Jerry ignored his friend and kept looking at the falling object and turned around to help his friend. Twenty minutes later the two men locked up the front door of the store. The store was called the “The Comic Shack”.  They were the only store opened past 11, all the other stores in the district were closed by this time. Jerry quickly moved his car. A red, 1998 Camry with a giant superman logo on the front of the car.

 Cody quickly got in the passenger seat and of the car and put his seatbelt on. He was shaking his arms up and down as he was anxious to leave. “Come on Jer…the movie starts in 40. We got to get good seats for this film.” He spoke.

Jerry started up his car and quickly left the parking lot of where the store stood and headed toward the theater.

Cody turned on the radio and turned up the radio. He turned toward Jerry and spoke to him “Come on man. This movie this movie is going to rock. Aren’t you psyched? I hear it’s directed by Christopher Nolan. You know it will rock!!!” He exclaimed as the nodded his head toward the song on the radio.

Jerry laughed at his friend’s excitement for the movie. When suddenly it hit him. He slapped his head and sighed. “Man! I forgot my wallet.” He quickly turned the car around and headed back to the store.

Cody started to freak out. “Dude! Really?!! You’re such a dork man. Well be late. Well get crappy seats and miss the commercials…..” He winded as he move his head backward on the seat. Disappointed by his friends forgetfulness.

Jerry stared at his watch and noticed they had about 20 minutes before the movie would start. He quickly made a U-turn and headed back to the store. As they entered the parking lot again.

They were one hundred yards away from the store. A large fire ball from the sky flew above them, shaking the car by it sheer momentum. It was if a plane was flying over them. Crashing on to their store. The impact shook the Earth, smoke suddenly engulfed the red Camry and the neighboring stores toppled onto to themselves by the impact from falling object.

The Camry spun around and both men started to scream like little children. Cody was screaming. “GOD! DON’T LET ME DIE!! I WANT TO TOUCH BOOBS BEFORE I DIE!!” He cried.

Jerry spun the wheel as he tried to control the car. Pushing on to the breaks as hard as he could as it spun around as they headed to burning building. When suddenly a large, dark figure walked out of the fire and stopped the car with one hand. The impact made the two comic nerd shake there head as their airbags came on. Jerry rammed into his airbag. The bag quickly deflated as his skull pushed it down. It saved his life as well as Cody’s. He grabbed his bleeding forehead and looked in front of him. His eyes were blurry, he tried to focus. All he could see at first was a black figure.

He closed his eyes and pushed onto one of his eyes. As he tried to focus his sight and concentrate on what had saved they’re lives. When he opened his eyes, the figure was gone.  The smoke quickly vanished as they saw that surrounding stores near their own were completely destroyed and theirs was still in flames. He turned and tapped his friends shoulder. Cody’s face was still in his some what inflated airbag. “Are…you alright? Cody???” He investigated as he continued his hitting friend’s shoulder hoping he was alive. It was stupid idea, since his friend could be hurt. But he did not care at this moment.

Cody quickly raised his hand and slapped Jerry’s hand not looking at him. A murmur came from his airbag. “Are we dead??? Cause if we are. I will be so pissed.” Cody raised his head from the airbag and turned toward Jerry. He was a few cuts on his head. A bruise or two. No serious, noticeable damage.

Jerry laughed as he was glad that they were alive. He turned toward Cody and continued his laughter. And then grabbed his head as it started to hurt, as he laid his head back and started to breathe slowly and relax. He looked at Cody. Cody wasn’t laughing anymore.

Cody started to sweat and mumble. “Jer…Jer…Look!” He pointed past Jerry at something that was next to Jerry’s window.

Jerry’s pupils started to shrink and his heart started to beat faster. He slowly turned his head to the side of him and saw the large dark figure that had stopped their car.

The figure looked like a man, shrouded in black gothic armor. Wearing a helmet that looked as if it was from the middle ages. A large crack on the top of the helmet.

Jerry swallowed whatever saliva he had left. In his mouth and prepared for the worse.

The figure ripped the door of his Camry as if it was Styrofoam and tossed it several hundred feet from where it stood. It knelt down as it too clenched his head. With a quick force, it ripped the helmet from its head and threw it into one of the destroyed buildings. The figure looked like a human male. A large scar was on its forehead. Similar to Jerry’s wound. However blood was still coming out. The figure tired to speak, he was breathing loudly. He looked at Jerry and Cody. “Who am I? Who are you?” He questioned before he passed out near the car.

Sirens howled through the distance as the fire department was coming. Jerry looked at Cody.


Cody nodded his head. “Well I guess were not seeing HERO tonight.”

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#3  Edited By Hero1921
@MonarchofMotion:  I will assist   you. Send a message.
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#4  Edited By Hero1921

Thor wins my knocking Surfer off his board. (Shitty Writting on those screen writers. Bad writers) Comic Wise Surfer easily. But the movie version looks good, but can't do anything. Thor showed off more feats in the movie, Flight, summon storms and what not.

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#5  Edited By Hero1921

You look like a scrapper....I could subdue you by sheer strengths. But once again I have no idea of your skills. But if morals are on. I'd lose couldn't fight a girl.

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@Pokeysteve:
I say that Hal and Clark would have trouble taking down Bendisforce Sentry and Ares.  However it they took sentry first. The rest will go down by them. While Batman chills and drink martinis with wonderwoman. And the rest of the jla clean up the mess. lol
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#7  Edited By Hero1921

JLA with ease.

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#8  Edited By Hero1921

Do whatever you wish. I would prefer either A or C. But that is just me. I recommend you do the story the way you want. Cause sometimes outside influence destroy the original idea. May the idea be good or bad. It yours.

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#9  Edited By Hero1921

Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

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#10  Edited By Hero1921

Thank you. I will do my best not to repeat that. But I wanted to explain my guys for this first part. But I will try to make it less subtle next time. Thanks.