To start give some info about your past, your envirornment, your life before the battle, and then when you get to the part about Cyclone give some info about her.
"yeah, I'm writing How it Began: the Childhood of Power Surge"
That'd be great if people cared."
Anger...
Power I can tell that if you elaborate more, be more in depth, put more emphasis on the story of your character, rather than showing your charachter off. You could be really good. The potential is there.
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