Hey thanks for checking out the story. i know my writing style is a not a favorite , But just think of it as a new format called...wait for it...Proscript or Scriprose. Whichever one sounds better. Now there was no fighting in the first two chapters of the story. The first fight actually takes place in the third & fourth chapters. There was a fight between Oro and Third which resulted with a new leader for the Syndicates’ away team and the Final part, featured the two teams fighting against bang babies up to no good. So it was only 2 out of 4 chapters that had a "bunch" of fights and I feel as though the fighting was necessary for the story..yeah It's going somewhere. Now if you're not interested in reading about a bunch of fights between heroes and villains, then the next story arc PLAYING WIT FIRE isn't going to help much. Hope you still enjoy it though... 1
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