I thought it would do no harm to give a shout out (hey NH did it) about my new Batman project "At Dark Ends", in the fan-fic area (my first FF on an actual comic character, almost), I've been working on my English for GCSEs (just got a B) and thought it would be a good test of writing, especially with some feedback.
 
And I thought who better to talk about writing other than my RPG buddies so yeah, please read it and let me know how you feel. BTW the start isn't particularly pleasant, so do excuse (it's not like it's my fantasy or anything).
 
P.S. I know there's a lot to improve on so be gentle ;D