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Embraced by the cold shade in a dark alleyway. The field was blessed with little lighting which flashed off the scalp of his blood red helmet. Code Red, the assassin, the deadly black dragon stood tall before a young woman. A witness of the art performed by the unbreakable code. The woman after revealing her presence as it was predicted by the code. The lady of a young age appearance seems not to fear the assassin, and even dares to address him without a whimper or tone. “You murdered a boy's father…And sadly I happened to know the child.. I have no choice but to face you in person, and to fight you to regain the boys honor.”
Underneath his ruby red helmet the eyes of Hank narrowed. The sight of the assassin sink with those natural raging emerald eyes of the young woman before him. “Honor, you say?” wheezing low laughter emerged from the black dragon. Not a mock, more like realization that caused his laughter. “You are saying that there is an honorable entity in you? No. You want to fight- Not for honor, but because you feel like it. Because its your nature.” Affirmed the black dragon. The code fallows as he explains his point. Deduction was a admirable skill of the red assassin. “It matters not how much you cover it. Those eyes of yours are not the eyes of a noble nor the eyes of a lady….. I wonder why.. Why do you chose to hide your true self?” He continues, “Have they tamed you? Yes..Yes.. They have tamed a fierce lioness and turned it into a house cat in society’s pillow. Am I correct, assassin?” As deep as the shade and as deep as the words of the code just as strong a lighting bolt shatters the heavens uncovering the appearance of both under Its flashing light. Slowly but surely- One by one rain drops began to attack the grounds as their impact lay sound on the trash and the buckets that surrounded them in the alley. “I got to admit, lioness, all this has raised my curiosity. I wonder. How much rage, pain and sorrow is caged in this small package before me.” A new lightning strikes the sky once again at the conclusion of his words, and just as fast as the lightning's flashing blinking on the surroundings. Just as fast the code unleashed one of his custom made black dragon knives and holds It at hand.
The rain had already soaked the black dragon as it poured, he ready his stance while he lay eyes on the masterpiece before him. “When it happens.. It will happen fast. No brakes and no mercy… Ready… Or---” Like a lightning itself as a flash of actual lightning once again cracked the skies the black dragon concluding his sentence he barks out “NOT!” Before he dash at the woman. With a swift hand he sent a crescent a chopping slash downwards as in a crescent moon curved aiming to open the girl right by the middle with his knife. Fallowing his fist strike and as he said, with “No breaks” He fallows momentum and performs a front flip at the very spot. Meanwhile the dragon rolls in mid-air he stiffen up his leg which like a hammer it directs the heel of the boot to the female assassin’s head.
The Code then performing a capoera handstand flip he then retreats gaining a few feet of distance from his enemy to admire his performance’s results.
The sighing exhale from the dragon fills the area as he reaches to temper the flames. The flames that would unleash his price. A real challenge, a real animal! But only one way that is going to happens, “I got to tell you. After I’m done with you. I’m going to go back in that precious house. I’m going to grab that kid and I’m going to cut him. I’m going to make him bleed, skin him! Slowly and his suffering will be because of you.” The code can almost feel the energy in the ambient as the flashing thunder lights up the sky once again. “Comwe on! Give it to me.” He yelled, no, Hank demanded addressing the caged animal before him, “Where is she?!” He again thundered asking. “I want to see the real you. The real woman to whom those threatening eyes belong too.” Demanded the assassin loud to the princess as the rain pours down upon their existence. "Show her to me."
That's how is done. The right way, with details development and background. Not like the old timers did with the one liners and those straight to battle rubbish.
Exquisite post Talon, I couldn't have ask for a better opponent. I'll write mine soon. Ciao.
For years a man has been searching for the hiring boss behind the assassin who stole the life from his one love away. Hank Payne’s young wife was torture and bled to death before his very eyes. Payne was next, however, when the assassin was approaching hank (Who was handcuffed) The ex-marine manage to kill the assassin before this one reached him. Hank manage to get free but it was already too late to save her. A few months later after having his most precious treasure stolen from him forever. Hank pledge not to rest till the hirer of the assassin’s head rolled and stained the floors with blood.
Day after day and night after night Hank began his hunt raiding the world bringing death and tears of terror to the heart of the big apple wearing the stole mantle of the very soul that brought dread to his life. Hank Payne had become the infamous Code: Red by wearing the very suit the real Code: Red wore before Hank killed him. Year after year the pain of lost grew stronger in the heart of Hank so strong that he himself became lost in the mantel and became as sadistic as the very first host.
After five years of being one of vengeance’s minion of destruction. After the breaking several bones and becoming a addict for pain relievers. Realizing the trail was too cold and age had taken its toll Hank Payne finally threw in the towel. He became an addict of pain relievers by day and an alcoholic at night. That is until one drunken night he fell after saving a young man from a gang. Hank waked in the hospital and was told he was in the verge of dying from poisoning. The young man he had saved had already repaid the favor by saving him.
Kansas.
After several years from his latest near death experience Hank saw a new purpose in life. He decided to let go on his journey for vengeance and became the young man’s teacher. Dan was the protégé’s name, and he became a tough one.
The within the white walls of a Japanese style Dojo two warriors were sharing a sparing section. Both of the combatants were wearing gray military cargo pants and shirt. Their bodies were sweaty and bruised as if they had been fighting for over a hour. Regardless of being in nearly peak condition youth was still a factor in the field. Dan’ breathing was hard but his posture was straight regardless of been holding his abdomen. Hank in the other hand was struggling with body pain. “Why don’t you just sit this one out., old man.” Recommended the protégé to his master. A drop of sweat crawled down from Hank’s temple across his cheek and down his chin until dropping to the floor. It was evident that Hank had enough, but in the name of his generation he responded “It isn’t over’ till is over.” With those words and letting out a shout of war Hank dashes fort and tightening his teeth he sent straight hook after Dan. The strike was hard and trembled the head of the student, yet Dan was still standing. “Fall motherfucker” Growled the holder of the Code: Red mantel before performing a 360 spinning kick headed for Dan’s face. But Dan had already seen his signature move before. IN a flash Dan took advantage and perform a spinning heel kick and nailed Hank’s abdomen in mid air. The Code was send flying off and thuds against the white wall and falls to the floor.
Rage consumes Hank as his body was wrapped in pain. “You’re getting slow old man.” Joked Dan on the foreground. But to Hank it was laughing matter. The code stood back on his feet. He sighed to calm his rage and just responded to his student. “You graduated. Now leave.” Before he goes to the shower with his pride broken.
Present time:
Hank had once again lost his purpose after seen that Dan was now able to take care of himself. What now? What was left for the black dragon? There was nothing for him but the knowledge of death patting his back every night and the fact that his wife was never avenged.
Delarosa home: Alpine, new Jersey
The muffled sound of Hank’s barking voice before his helmet filled the Delarosa family home. Delarosa was the head of the family and is believed to be the cause of half the crime in new Jersey. Blood of guards and family members filled the thick rug on the fancy manor. Code: Red was holding Delarosa in a chair wired with titanium while holding his black dragon knife on the throat of one of the leader’s kid. “I won’t ask again, Delarosa! Have you seen me before?! Have you ever made any deals with me?! Am I familiar to you?!” The child was in tears as his brother had already been killed by the Code. “Please, don’t hurt him! I‘ve never met you before! I told you I’ve only heard the rumors!” Claimed the headmaster. The unsteady hand of the black dragon was already hurting the kid’s foreskin. Delarosa made in tears he begged “Please! I’ve told you I know nothing! Please. Don’t hurt my boy.”
Code: Red had a last look at the boy’s face in sorrow. Visions of his wife shredding tears came to his mind. Code Red then loosen the grip on the kid. “Very well.” He said before turning around. “I wont hurt him.” he concluded before walking toward the back door exit. The kid runs over to his father and hugs him as he thought the nightmare was over. But he was very wrong. The kid all the sudden hears a thud and a feinting gasp coming from his father. The warm and wet feeling of the vital red juice was pouring on the child's face before he looks up gazing upon a knife impaled in his father’s eye. The cries of the child filled the manor on the background as Code: Red simply walked out of the location.
Within two old abandoned building was Code: Red’s safe spot. The unbreakable code made the turn into the alley seeking to reach his motorcycle to escape and finally call it a night. But all the sudden he stops in the very middle of the Alley besides the dumping cans. The red helmet was shining as his ark attired just bonded withing the shades of the alley. The feeling of eyes crawling on his existence summoned a chill on his spine. "Who's there?" Code: Red sharply turned around and grabbed one of his large knives. "You might as well show yourself!" He said. Code shift his eyes around the alley before resuming:
"I can feel your thirst for blood... It is almost as strong as strong as my own." Claimed the black dragon.
" @Code: Red said:I knew you wouldn't turn it down, lets see if vica is up to it. If not, I'll take you one on one." @Fractal said:Wow I'm honored that you conciser me a "big battler" really I am, and yeah I'm in with fighting you. not sure about vican but me....well I always like a good fight "" @Code: Red:You challenged me but I don't see how your abilities really work and I've never seen you in action before. Besides, Is it not enough that I'm fighting Talon one of the big battlers of the vine along with the vica simultaneously? Is enough to prove my point otherwise I'll end up fighting the whole vine on my own. Not that it be a hard thing to do, but it be unnecessary. "
@Code: Red said:" Oh so when I'm away everyone challenges me, eh? Fine1) If someone logs off, that is not an excuse to say they left. People have lives, you just have to communicate. 2). You forgot that I challenged you as well. "
@Talon/X23:
@The Vica: You want to bring the black dragon down? Both of you at once against me, take it or leave it. Immortal or not, healing factor or just plain claws, I'll find my way. I'll put my writing where my big mouth is! I'll be back tomorrow and expect the answer. "
@Fractal said:
" @Code: Red said:Looks like you're desperate to fight. But really, how will fighting you be any worse than fighting a immortal with the power of 12 different holy creatures like Vica? Not only he has those powers but he is also a weapon master, martial artist, telepathic and an acrobat. I didn't even check on Vica's powers when I send the challenge but here I am still up to it.@The Vica: You want to bring the black dragon down? Both of you at once against me, take it or leave it. Immortal or not, healing factor or just plain claws, I'll find my way. I'll put my writing where my big mouth is! I'll be back tomorrow and expect the answer. "1) If someone logs off, that is not an excuse to say they left. People have lives, you just have to communicate. 2). You forgot that I challenged you as well. "You challenged me but I don't see how your abilities really work and I've never seen you in action before. Besides, Is it not enough that I'm fighting Talon one of the big battlers of the vine along with the vica simultaneously? Is enough to prove my point otherwise I'll end up fighting the whole vine on my own. Not that it be a hard thing to do, but it be unnecessary." @Fractal said:
" @Code: Red:
@Code: Red said:" Oh so when I'm away everyone challenges me, eh? Fine
@Talon/X23
:
"You are afraid of losing. Fight against an unknown variable and prove yourself. Accept the challenge, or consider yourself afraid. I apologize if this sounds harsh, but I cannot abide a braggart. I mean no offense by anything I have said. "
If you want to face me take a ticket and wait in the back of the line. You'll probably get your shot regardless of me not really understanding how them powers work.
" @Code: Red:You challenged me but I don't see how your abilities really work and I've never seen you in action before. Besides, Is it not enough that I'm fighting Talon one of the big battlers of the vine along with the vica simultaneously?
@Code: Red said:" Oh so when I'm away everyone challenges me, eh? Fine1) If someone logs off, that is not an excuse to say they left. People have lives, you just have to communicate. 2). You forgot that I challenged you as well. "
@Talon/X23:
@The Vica: You want to bring the black dragon down? Both of you at once against me, take it or leave it. Immortal or not, healing factor or just plain claws, I'll find my way. I'll put my writing where my big mouth is! I'll be back tomorrow and expect the answer. "
Is enough to prove my point otherwise I'll end up fighting the whole vine on my own. Not that it be a hard thing to do, but it be unnecessary.
Oh so when I'm away everyone challenges me, eh? Fine
@Talon/X23:
@The Vica:
You want to bring the black dragon down? Both of you at once against me, take it or leave it.
Immortal or not, healing factor or just plain claws, I'll find my way. I'll put my writing where my big mouth is!
I'll be back tomorrow and expect the answer.
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