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@sundown89: So, I take it there are notes on the rest of Fireteam Hades somewhere on that laptop? I'd love to see that at some point. :)

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@sundown89: Okay, that whole Apt 5F scene made no sense to me. I have no idea what it's referencing.

Eisenhardt has to survive the guard's attempt on his life, because he's not your character to kill, so I assume there's a revenge scheme coming from him at some point.

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@sundown89: I forgot to ask this on the last issue, but you said all of the rich in the 500's had abandoned their mansions and pulled out... to where? Indigo is supposed to be quarantined. How are there even flights in-and-out?

Also, this mansion sounds more like a former government facility. I'm sort of confused by this story.

Last thing: Ruston turned "vials" to unlock the sarcophagus, and then turned "dials" to lock it again. Pretty sure you meant "dials" both times. Later, Lex calls women "vial," when I think you meant "vile." With Gaia around, you have "vials" on the brain. ;)

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@sundown89: Wait, did I misunderstand? Are the women Peacekeeper took carriers being trafficked by Lex? Or normal women being trafficked by Lex?

I re-read the Gaia/Peacekeeper stuff relatively recently, but I don't recall what's being referenced here. Was Gaia being contained in Peacekeeper? How did that happen? I need a refresher.

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@sundown89: Needs fixing:

"Give me the case, and I will reward you with an opportunity that you won’t think twice about turning down.”

Should be "...won't think twice about taking," otherwise Peacekeeper wouldn't be interested in the opportunity.

“How do you beat a whale?” The voice hisses, dredging up old memories of a previous battle. “One bite at a time.”

Should be "How do you eat..." which plays to "one bite at a time."

The story... not sold on the new-Nazis thing. Or on the international market for carriers. Keeping it contained to Indigo is one of the main premises of 5CC. If any of them get out into the world, then Blue Paris isn't a mystery to the world when it happens. It also paints the CBTF as largely ineffectual.

Where is this taking place in the seven years between the "end" of 5CC and the start of Blue Paris?

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@sundown89: Badguy minions competent at their job?! I think they can take your superhero union card for that! ;)

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@sundown89: I had to look up a pic of a Camargue cross. :)

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Congrats to @sundown89 on your 3rd win! Pick a new one, and let's go again! I didn't mean for that to rhyme, but it happens all the time. :)