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CCC #120 is up- write Jennifer Bryan, CIA, and your OC foreign intelligence operative! Due May 23, 11:59pm Washington, DC time!

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Just Write: Primordial Soup

"Why," right?

When I originally posted .Be the Pencil #1: The Epiphany of "Just Write", and much later .Just Write #0, my plan was always to start doing "Just Write" stories- just snippets from something that inspired me. Whether it's a random picture like in this story, or just dusting off one of my undeveloped character ideas, and taking it for a spin.

When I saw the Primordial Soup picture, I immediately thought of Galactus, and the fact that I hardly ever eat Campbell's soup anymore, even though I loved it as a kid- especially Chicken & Stars, and Chicken Noodle Soup. So I knew I wanted to write something where a can of Primordial Soup evoked in Galactus the same feeling that a can of Campbell's Chicken Noodle Soup evokes in me.

Naming him Harold, and the bit about wearing the helmet were just to "explain" why he has a herald, why he wears that helmet, and why he always says, "To me, my herald." It was just fun stuff.

I hope you had as much fun reading this story as I did writing it. Just Write stories will be random bits; all done-in-one stories. See you whenever the next one comes up. Until then, if you've got an idea, you've got the story, so just write.

That's all fo now! Thanks for reading. :^D

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Just Write: Primordial Soup

OC Names:
Characters:
  • Harold
  • unnamed mother of Harold
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Primordial SoupFrom a pic found on Facebook. I cropped it down in MS Paint to just the can.
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Ran across this on Facebook. It definitely belongs here. :)

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The Orphan: The Last Loss

OC Names:
Characters:
  • Annie Crabb (The Orphan)
  • Benjamin "Benny" Factor [deceased]
  • Doc Spatter [deceased]
  • Elvis Velvet (The Velvet Glove)
  • Horace Crabb (father, mentioned)
  • Merilyn Crabb (mother, mentioned)
  • The Mute
  • Sandy Crabb (Crybaby) [deceased]
  • Doc Spatter [deceased]
Locations:
  • The Spatterworks
Objects:
  • The Mute's silenced nine millimeter
  • Purr's sword
Picture credits:
  • GIS = Google Image Search.
  • MSP = Microsoft Paint.
Picture:Source:
  • The place had the atmosphere down though.
  • Do you want to die?
Found via GIS. Cropped in MSP.
  • She... she's The Mute.
  • The Mute winked back.
Found via GIS. Cropped and blacked out in spots using MSP.

I ain't impressed, is I?

"Walter" from The Mask, found via GIS. Used here to represent Doc Spatter.

...shoot Sandy through the head.

From a comic page found via GIS. Cropped and blacked out in spots using MSP.

My sword is too good for you.

Found via GIS. Cropped using MSP, including shrinking the space between the mouth and the ear.
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Love a throw back, one vote for cbishop

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Woot! :)

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Voting cbishop. I love a gritty crime story.

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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My vote is for cbishop these were a lot of fun though. Can't wait for the next one

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woot! :)

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