• Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic The New 616: Origin Part 2 of 3. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: Definitely like that this is going to be a three parter. Enjoy the ferocious five as a concept and think that this will be a good way in organically making the new spider-man THE spider man. G...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Marvel: New 616 Reboot. on the Fan-Fic board

    @ecstaticgrace: X-Men already in use at the moment. I'll add you the the chat though

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Fan-Fic "Advertising / Help Request" Thread. on the Fan-Fic board

    A long time ago in a galaxy far far away...A planet has been etching its way into darkness slowly but surely with each passing moment, a world in which those in power have been extending their influe...

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  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic The New 616: Origin Part 1 of 3. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: Big improvement, only thing I could add is that maybe don’t have multiple different people speaking in the middle of one paragraph. At the very least make a new paragraph or space each time a ...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic My MCU Red Hulk story. on the Fan-Fic board

    @basicfan30: so I do like the premise but I think one of the things that would definitely help is writing it more like prose as opposed to a script to make it easier on the eyes at least for me. So in...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic The New 616: X-Factor #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: I like the premise but I think the shortness in conjunction with the quick pace is making it feel a bit stilted to me. The dialogue gets super quick after the 2 year time skip and I don't feel...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Star Wars The New Canon Initiative: Bounty #2. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: So I think that you've got a decent cast of characters to work within an interesting setting but I think you should actually dive a little more into these characters, what they want, who they ...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Marvel: New 616 Reboot. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: sign me up, need to figure out a character but definitely interested

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Star Wars The New Canon Initiative: Bounty #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: Good start, be sure to tag on the post in order to make sure I read it sooner. The pacing is a bit fast but I think the idea of a bounty hunter turned to fight against the First Order is inter...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Fic-O-Pedia: Bronze_Surfer. on the Fan-Fic board

    @ficopedia: Oh my God I completely forgot about my Galactus fanfiction

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  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Star Wars: The New Canon Initiative. on the Fan-Fic board

    @hype2: What character and era do you have in mind? And I’m pretty sure there’s room here

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  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Franklin Richards. on the Franklin Richards board

    @billionaireman: I don’t see why not considering he can tank blasts from celestials I’m going to assume he’s bullet proof

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Franklin Richards. on the Franklin Richards board

    @billionaireman: not really a fan fic. However him being considered a god is more so how others view his mass power that puts him on the level of celestial. If you removed his reality warping part of ...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message on the post Star Wars Canon Initiative: Stormtrooper #2.

    Really enjoy it, I think you're framing of the Jedi being almost hoarders of power compared to the Empires claims of power for the common man is a good dichotomy that a stormtrooper would internalize...

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Fan-Fic "Advertising / Help Request" Thread. on the Fan-Fic board

    @silverspidey: Damn bro you are one monster of a writer being able to make as much as you do

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Star Wars: The New Canon Initiative: Dooku #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @batkevin74: I always enjoy it when someone calls Yoda out even if its in a positive way, nice work!

  • Bronze_Surfer posted a message in the forum topic Star Wars - The New Canon Initative: Skywalker #1. on the Fan-Fic board

    @tommythehitman: Cool take on Luke, I think it sets itself a part from the stoic EU version and the distraught Canon version, Aloof Luke with the desire to learn to me personally seems like a more int...