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@rex318: That's actually pretty cool, I might take ya up on this prompt

Technically 10 minutes late (calculated time zones wrong) but for what it's worth I vote for @silverspidey

@pyrofn: Jesus COVID got my whole sense of time messed up felt like yesterday you posted issue 7. I'm gonna have to go back and read this whole series now but this issue alone was nice!

@tommythehitman: Another great work, were you referencing Infinite Crisis for the superhero war?

@tommythehitman: a bit short but still good, the line "She opened her mouth and screamed, for it was the only thing she could do." is an amazing one tho

@hype2: Definitely like that this is going to be a three parter. Enjoy the ferocious five as a concept and think that this will be a good way in organically making the new spider-man THE spider man. G...

@ecstaticgrace: X-Men already in use at the moment. I'll add you the the chat though

A long time ago in a galaxy far far away...A planet has been etching its way into darkness slowly but surely with each passing moment, a world in which those in power have been extending their influe...

@hype2: Big improvement, only thing I could add is that maybe don’t have multiple different people speaking in the middle of one paragraph. At the very least make a new paragraph or space each time a ...

@basicfan30: so I do like the premise but I think one of the things that would definitely help is writing it more like prose as opposed to a script to make it easier on the eyes at least for me. So in...

@hype2: I like the premise but I think the shortness in conjunction with the quick pace is making it feel a bit stilted to me. The dialogue gets super quick after the 2 year time skip and I don't feel...

@hype2: So I think that you've got a decent cast of characters to work within an interesting setting but I think you should actually dive a little more into these characters, what they want, who they ...

@hype2: sign me up, need to figure out a character but definitely interested

@hype2: Good start, be sure to tag on the post in order to make sure I read it sooner. The pacing is a bit fast but I think the idea of a bounty hunter turned to fight against the First Order is inter...

@ficopedia: Oh my God I completely forgot about my Galactus fanfiction

@hype2: What character and era do you have in mind? And I’m pretty sure there’s room here