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@primepower53: Nice set up

@RedRobinTimDrake: No just a homage. Jackson Barnes is a black guy who has a coincidental name

@Time_Phantom: I see General Falcon Helfitta as what General Thaddeus Ross would be if he was a Nazi! If you keep the soldier but change the regime that's the idea of him I have. He's a really good soldier he just happens to work for and believe that his side is RIGHT and that won't change.

@DickGrayson: Nice work! James 'Bucky' Barnes DNA wearing the Union Jack suit. Great work. Spelling mistake it's creator not creater. Other than that great

@RedRobinTimDrake: It's good, I just PM'd you a suggestion edit for your story, just polishing what you've got. I agree with @Time_Phantom: this is hard to read as it is

@DickGrayson: Well done! I want more! Please write parts 2-12 NOW! :) Good job

@joshmightbe: That will come into play very shortly, thanks for making such a ba$t@rd

@joshmightbe: Well Falcon hates Gerald because he believes he raped and killed his wife. Bishop hates Falcon & Gerald because they're better than him especially Gerald because he's John's pet, Gerald hates Falcon for trying to kill him and hates Bishop because he doesn't rate him. That's the basics :)

@tomdickharry1984: Bishop framed Gerald aka Scalphunter. John killed her to spare Falcon the pain and shame.

Okay, thanks man

@RedRobinTimDrake@TheCannon So what do you think?