@kineticist: Well, yeah, but he acted too emotional. My mental image of him is like the Terminator. He doesn't talk, he doesn't act a certain way, he just points and shoots. He's driven by something very emotional, but the whole bit with the rhyme felt a little silly to me.
@encriptor: And the device can let both planets live, not requiring one to doe? That sorta makes the entire RP pointless lol
Without the incursions, what's the conflict of the story? If it's OK with you, could that part of it misfire or be destroyed, so as to keep your post and the plot going?
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