My new model video, I want some feedback!
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Tell me what you think of my video! Just a model workin from the bottom :) haha I was sooo serious in this video
Tell me what you think of my video! Just a model workin from the bottom :) haha I was sooo serious in this video
Well the staff have gave their opinion on the movie so why not hear from a fellow viner
To all of the soldiers and for the memory of 911
In comics there has been alot of characters that have made history in the armed forces and served in the army of comics. I doing to this to show how heroes of the army, marines, navy and all of the other armed forces have influenced comics and that we still remeber those soldiers and 911.
Sgt.Rock- Sgt. Rock is one of the biggest war comic book hero. He has been shown to be a rough and tough man in the comics. But, still shows love to his team to show brother hood. He Showed alot in the comics and kept is a influence to me in comics of my dream of going into the armed forces.
Captian America- A true soldier! Another huge inspiration to me in the comics. He served his country and was like a symbol of America. In the comics he served his country like a true man just like everyone in the armed forces today. He fought for what he believed in and just like our soldiers he had heart.
General Hawk- Being the leader of the GI Joe team wasn't the only great thing about Hawk. No he cared for each soldier like they were family similar to our Army, Marine, Navy, ect... leaders. Each one of those soldiers were somethin special to him. He became the leader of one of the most known army teams ever in comics!
Nick Fury- Nick was a veteran of war. He led another great team of soldiers. He believes in what most soldiers believe in. One the country comes first. Two respect and honor. Three team work and brotherhood. This is how he became the great leader of shield. He was a truely great soldier in comics and in the readers mind.
Bucky Barnes- Bucky was the loyal sidekick of Steve Rogers. He sacrificed his life against the nazi's in the comics as the soldiers did against Saddam Hussien. He was a loyal and loving person and fought hard and never gave up in comics he was just starting out and yet he still showed to be a great soldier. He has now become one of the symbols for America in comics and that is Captian America.
I wrote this so people will never forget what the soldiers have done for America and to remember all of the people who died during 911 and to give thanks to all of the fire fighters who pulled together. We will never forget you guys and will always remember those who died.
We will always remember you
Trauma
makes me want to cry like for real
It had been a long day for the vampire Trauma. Nothing had seem to gone right. Trauma had been ambushed by the worthless pieces of meat called Police. Trauma couldn't do a thing but go with them. He was too weak out in the bright sun. They caught him with his pants down and trauma knew better. It wouln't of happened if they didn't have the green arrow with them. They took him to a padded cell in a heavy guarded jail. All doors were locked and the fences were electrical they would shock trauma even if he took a leak on it. But, he couldn't even get to those fences with out a little death. Trauma sat in the padded room to think. He banged hs head against the pads so hard that his head was bleeding. All he did was sit there and write the letters in his own blood HFC. Trauma knew he had to get out of there. He stands up and goes to the door. Now trauma knew he could easily just teleport. But, for some reason the room he was in wouldnt allow him to use his powers. Trauma began to scream.
"let me out!"
Trauma started to ram his body into the door. Traumaknew they would call security. Trauma just kept raming his self into the door. He then waited as a security guard approached the door. He opeed a little slot that showed his eyes. he told trauma to get up against the wall. Trauma just stood there. The security guard called a group of heavly armed officers to come and get me to calm down. They knocked and told trauma to get down or they would use force. Trauma just waited. He smirked as he looked up.
"Why dont you come make me"
They banged open the door. As they tried to get trauma down. There were four men but, trauma knew he could take them even in a straight jacket. The first officer came in with the rest with a night stick. Trauma jumped towards him as he bit his neck. With his fangs sinked into the officers neck trauma rips his neck open. The officer fell down and bled to death. The other oficers came right towards trauma. They tried to beat him down. Trauma started to fight back. He kicked one of the officers down and as he was on the ground he stomped on his head. Trauma fiercly killed the other tow officers. He sucked them dry of any blood they had.
Trauma finaly escaped the cell. When he got out of the cell his powers worked again his fangs were getting longer. Trauma started to run. He shapeshifted his arms into what looked like giant knifes and cut through the straight jacket. He then teleported out to the front of the building. He lookedaround seeing the spot lights looking for him. Trauma just walked into the shadows and disapeared.
Later, a black mass appears from the ground in a restraunt. The black mass disapeared and reveals trauma in the kitchen of the restraunt. everyone rted to scream and trauma grapped a knife.
"ohh shut up!"
Trauma slaughtered everyone in the restraunt. He walks out the front door with blood all over his lips and shirt. He looked down and noticed a knife in his leg where a chef stabbed him. Trauma pulls out the knife and heals. He looks to the sky as rain began to fall.
"I swear Green arrow i will find you and kill you and i know exactly how."
Trauma was still stareing into the moon as the rain fell. This was a beautiful sight for him. He walked around the town. He saw the drunks and the hookers in the street. Every time he passed one he could only smirk and laugh under his breath. The blood on traumas shirt from all of the killings and began to pur down as the rain washed most of it away. Trauma knew he had to get back to The Hellfire Club to get his gear. But, before he did trauma walked past a music store. He looked at it and saw no one was there. There was a big glass window and in it was a guitar, a bass, piano, and a violin. Trauma stared right at the violin. He closed his eyes and then teleported into the store. All of the suden a alarm goes off and trauma realizes that there had been a motion detector. Trauma hurried and grapped the violin. He then teleported back to the streets. He walked down the street careing the violin in his hand. He could hear the police coming. As the police were coming to check out the store trauma walked in the middle of the street just playing the violin.
In the bright moons light trauma had walked and eventually he made it to the Hellfire Club. All he could do is get on one knee and play the violin in the moon light infront of the the place he considered home.
"ahhh home sweet home"
Trauma pitched the violin and walked into the building. He saw no one there. But, they could have just been away. Trauma had no idea what had been goin on for the past weeks. All he knew is that he wanted revenge against The green arrow. Trauma walked to his room to get his gear. He saw his bed was made and everything was were it was suppose to be. He walked to his closet and got his armor. This armor consists of a just a shirt and a trench coat and pants with black leather boats. He also had shoulder guards made of a strong metal. The vampire walked to the armory and got his guns and sword. As trauma walked out the door he picked up a brush on a counter and brushed his long hair. Trauma then tossed the brush.
The vampire looked around and saw the rain had stopped. He was just right outside the club. He thought of were the Green Arrow had been. Thats when trauma thought of it. Everyone knew the Green Arrow had a resort he escaped to for a break on the caribbeans. Now all trauma had to do was think real hard about the caribbeans and think of its attributes to teleport there. He thought long and hard and squinted his eyes hard and just like that "poof!" A cloud of smoke was left behind in front of the club. Trauma opened his eyes to see a sun that was bright.
"ahhh"
Trauma covered his eyes as he jumped into the shadow of a tree. He made it though into the caribbeans. Now trauma just had to wait for night so he could be at full power to fight the Green arrow. As trauma sat there a local with a boat passed. Trauma askes him a question.
"where can i find the Green Arrow it's very important."
The local pointed towards a structure covered in trees and made of what looked like sticks and palm tree leaves. Trauma looked at it though he could see only a little of it there was an arrow on the ground in front of it. He knew thats were he was. Trauma stayed down and layed low. As the hours passed trauma saw the night comeing. After another hour it was finally dark. Trauma stood up and started to walk towards the arrows hide out. As trauma came closer to the hide out he could hear the arrow. He walked and approached the door the talking stopped. Something was very wrong here. Trauma waited and right when he opens the door of the hut. The Green Arrow jumps out and round house kicks trauma. Trauma flew back and landed on his back. He then jumps up to his feet.
Trauma:"well now look what we have here looks like its time for a little pay back"
Green Arrow:"The only thing thats going to happen here is me kicking your a$$"
Trauma: " we will see abou that"
Trauma jumps back and pulls out his gun loaded with highly explosive rounds. He began to unload a full clip. But, Green Arrow jumped back and started to dodge the bullets. But, the explosions of the bullets made Green arrow fly back and hit his head against a tree. Trauma saw blood come down from his face. The Green arrow then pulls out his bow and shoots a arrow at trauma. The arrow hit trauma in the stomach going through his flesh. Trauma looked down to see that half the arrow was in his stomach.
Trauma:"ahhhh"
Trauma pulls out the arrow from his stomach and heals his insides but the pain was still there. Now Trauma knew this was about to get serious.
Trauma:"you will die Green arrow"
Green Arrow:"as will you"
Trauma waited to make his next move.
Trauma starred in the eyes of the great green arrow. He could see the blood rushing down the forehead of Green Arrow. Trauma look down to see the blood still on his stomach. Trauma took his finger and and touched the blood on his own stomach. He then licked the blood of his finger. Traumas fangs grew longer and longer. Trauma began to think off a way to kill the Green Arrow and how much he will enjoy it. But, first he wanted to toy with the green arrow first and make him go crazy. Trauma smirked and started to laugh at the fool dressed in green.
Trauma:"ha..hahaha...hahahahahahaha"
Green Arrow:"whats so funny"
Trauma:"I just realized that right after im done with you im going to watch Black canary die ahahaha"
Green Arrow:"you sack of shi...."
Green arrow runs straight towards trauma with an arrow in his hand. He jumps in the air Above Trauma. As he started to come down Trauma cocked his arm back. The green arrow then came down on Trauma shoving the arrow in Traumas neck. But, Trauma then punched the Green arrow under his chin launching him into the air. The Green Arrow still high in the air was bleeding from his mouth. Trauma jumped in the air with the arrow in his neck and went right towards his foe. He grapped Green Arrows arm and throws him down to the roof of his hut. Green Arrow falls straight through his hut hitting the ground hard. Trauma then falls tto the ground. Trauma trying to breath gets on his knees as he trys to pull the arrow out. Trauma could see the Green arrow getting up. Trauma had to pull it out quick.
Trauma:"ohhhh god ahhhhh"
Trauma pulls out the arrow and blood begin to squirt out. The vampire falls face down screaming trying to heal. He gets his skin to heal over the wound to stop the bleeding but, his neck on the inside is in alot of pain. Thats when Trauma heres something land right next to him. He looks over and sees and arrow. he then looks up to the Greeen arrow.
Trauma:"ha you missed."
Green arrow:" not in my book."
The arrow next to trauma then explodes sending trauma flying back hitting the sand hard. Trauma just lays there for a second. He then starts to get on one knee. Part of his face is burn't. Trauma gets up on his feet with blood covering his face. He could see that the Green arrows jaw was broken and that he was in pain too. Trauma flicks his hand and a playing card appears. The card had an aura around it because this was not an ordinary card the was almost like a magic playing card that could only be controled by trauma and could cut through anything. Trauma looks up towards the Green arrow and throws the card at amazeing speed towards him. The Green arrow runs from the card and right when its about to hit him he ducks. The card than swings around still following the Green Arrow. The green Arrow tried jumping oer the card but, right when he did this the card sliced through his leg.
Green Arrow:"ahhhhhh"
Half of the playing card had gone through his leg. Sliceing halfway through it. Trauma laughed at the Green arrow as he hold his leg. The card disapears as it comes back to trauma. Green Arrow limps to a stick that he uses as a cane. He gets to a tree to lean on. He then draws another arrow and launches it directly at trauma. Trauma tries to teleport but right when he did the arrow struck his shoulder. Trauma yelped as it impaled his shoulder. But, Something was wrong after teleporting about twenty feet away from The Green arrow trauma heres a beeping. At that time he knew it was a trick arrow. Trauma pulls it out as fast as he can and right when hes about to throw the arrow away. It makes a small explosion revealing a bright light.
Trauma:"Noo not the light."
The green arrow smiled as his trick arrow burn't up Trauma. Trauma then waved his hand causeing a shadow he manuplated to cover the arrow and destroy it. Traums arms and face were badly burn't. Trauma waits on the ground and tries to gasp for air. All he could here was the Green Arrow taunting him.
Green Arrow:" whats wrong don't like a little light."
Trauma:" Im going to make you suffer."
Trauma looks around as his face still burns and is in alot of pain. His foe in green had been ready to get another arrow out. Trauma couldn't take much more of this. He looked to a hotel about twenty stories up. Trauma thought that would be the best place to go to get some time away from the Green Arrow. Trauma looked to green arrow for a minute.
Trauma:"So do you think you can actually beat me."
Green Arrow:"I can try."
The vampire laughed at the foolish human. But, he knew he wasnt so foolish. Trauma had to get to that hotel. He was bleeding almost from everywhere. Trauma squints his eyes as he teleports to the hotels main lobby. The Green Arrow watched as Trauma diaspeared. He had no idea where the vampire had gone. thats when He hears a scream from the lobby. The Green Arrow knew he was in there. So he rushes over to the lobby. The people were so happy to see the Green Arrow. Everyone was screaming his name for help. He notices blood leading a an elevator and on the elevator door was and bloody handprint. The Green Arrow rushed upstair out of sight of the locals. Trauma sat in the elevaotr in pain he couldn't believe how much pain he was in. Blood was everywhere on the floor. Trauma was headed for the highest level. Thats when the elevator came to a stop.
Trauma:"what in the world."
Trauma hears several tapping noices above. Thats when a arrow cmes through the top of the elevator. He hits right next to Trauma. Then the arrow makes a small explosion and bright light goes off. Trauma is blinded and is getting burn't. The green Arrow comes bursting down from the top.
Green Arrow:"hello again."
Trauma suprised gets up on his feet. He notices that the Green Arrows leg is tied up with a napkin to cover his wound. Thats when they start to fight. Trauma barely could see anything with the bright light. The Green Arrow punches Trauma right in the stomach with a huge amount of power. The vampire spits blood. Trauma still blinded feels for Green Arrow he then picks him up and slams the green arrow on the ground. Traumas foe landed right on the arrow smashing it. The bright light disapears and trauma could see again but, not before the Green Arrow comes up smashs Traumas face against the elevators walls. Trauma yelps in pain as bones in his face crack. He knows he has to get out of the elevator. Trauma turned around and kicked the Green Arrow in the stomach. This kick sent the man through the elevator door to a narrow hallway of the fifthteenth floor. Trauma walks out of the elevator towards the Green Arrow. The elevator doors were smashed down from the Grren Arrows body. Trauma saw his foe was still on the ground knocked out. He turns to the left noticeing a door that says stairs. Trauma opens the door and starts going up the stairs to the top floor. Green Arrow still bleeding on the floor stands up and wonder where Trauma went again. He then sees the stairs door and knows thats where he went. He opens the door to see trauma slowly getting up the stairs. The green arrows sprints up the stairs after Trauma. Trauma looks down and sees that the Green Arrow is only few steps behin. So trauma looks up the stairs and starts to teleport up the stairs at a great speed. Trauma finally after awhile makes it to the top floor. He stops for a second to catch his breath. Thats when a arrow hit the ceiling. Trauma notices the arrow had a wire connected to it. He looks over the ledge to see that the Green Arrow is pulling himself up with soemthing in his hand. It was like a grapple arrow pulling him him up. Trauma looked away and opened the door to the top floor. Shortly after he went into the top floor the Green Arrow makes it and walks in the top floor after Trauma.
Trauma hides behind a couple boxes. This floor must have been the storage. It was dark almost like it hadn't been used in years. There were cockroaches and rats all over the floor. The walls were covered in spider webs. The rooms walls were windows Trauma could see how high up they were. Trauma hears the Green Arrows foot steps. He waits alittle bit longer and then Trauma jumps out. The Green Arrow turns around throwing a punch to trauma face. Trauma gets knocked back but, then he starts to punch back. Trauma punches Green Arrow straight in the mouth knocking out one of his teeth. They both start to trade punches and kicks. Both of them were bleeding a huge amount of blood. Trauma while fighting pulls an arow out from the Green Arrows case. He then impales the man right in the stomach. The Green Arrow shoves trauma into the window making a crack. He then starts running full speed at trauma diving into him. They both break the window and fall out of the window. Trauma was falling down the twenty story building. He graps the green Arrow in mid air and holds on to him. The Green Arrow punches Trauma off and tries to use a grappling arrow. But, the wire to the air snapped they were going to fast. Trauma was knocked out and was falling fast. The green Arrow pounced on traumas stomach and throws him self to the buildings edges. He then jams two arrow in the sides. The Green Arrow was still up about five stories. Trauma about to hit the ground wakes up and sees the Green Arrow. He squints his eyes and teleports up onto the Green Arrow. He pulls the green Arrow of the edges of the building and they start falling again. Trauma teleports to the ground safely but, not before the Green Arrow launches an arrow at him from the sky. The arrow goes straight through Traumas thigh. The Green Arrow then hits the ground hard.
Trauma falls back down to his knees he then passes out.The Green Arrow lays on the ground. Both men covered in blood. An hour goes by still both of them on the ground. Thats when Trauma begins to move. He turns his head and sees the Green Arrow moving his hand. Trauma starts to talk to him.
Trauma:"we need to finish this now."
Green Arrow;"Agreed"
Both men get up blood on their faces. They both can barely stand. Trauma looks to him and drops his guns and sword. The Green Arrow smirks and drops his bow and arrows.
Green Arrow:"bring it on."
Sweat and blood covered the snad below the two men. Trauma stared into the moon lit water. The vampire rips his shirt off and takes off his trench coat. He stands there looking at the Green Arrow in pants with leather boats nothing else. Trauma cracks his neck and gets into a fighting stance. The Green Arrow looks at Trauma he then charges at him. Green Arrow throws a fist punching trauma hard. Trauma starts to punch his foe in the kidneys and then punches him in the ribs. Trauma hears a crack when he punches Green arrows ribs. They jump back from each other.
Trauma:" are you about done yet."
Green Arrow:" I don't know are you?"
Trauma:" Ha!"
Trauma jumps toward Green Arrow and roundhouse kicks him. The green arrow goes flying back hitting a tree. Trauma runs up to him trying to make a finishing move when a arrow comes flying from the behind of Trauma hitting him straight through his back out his front. Trauma falls on the ground. He looks up to see a figure standing above Trauma.
Trauma:"who...who are you?"
Trauma looks up and the blurry figure becomes clear. It was Connor Hawke the green arrows own blood. Trauma was weak and couldn't take much more. Connor Hawke picks trauma up and throws him clear to another side. Trauma landed next to his sword and guns. Connor went to check on his father.
Connor:" are you ok?"
Green Arrow:" you actually came."
Trauma picks up his gun and shoots towards connor. The bullet hits him straight in the shoulder. Trauma laughed as Connor screamed. Connor glared towards Trauma and starts to run towards him. He jumps in the air above trauma with a arrow in hand. Trauma knew he had to time it just right. Trauma put his hand on his sword. Connor was right about to hit trauma when trauma pulls his sword up. Connor lands straight on the sword impaleing him through the stomach.
Connor:"uhhhh"
Connor hanged on the sword in front of Trauma. He spit blood in Trauma face. The vampire throws connor with the sword to the side. Trauma stands up and pulls the sword from connor. He then stabs connor again in the throat and pulls his sword out again. Blood squirts everywhere on Trauma as connor loses his life.
Green Arrow:"nooo son!"
The Green Arrow runs and impales Trauma with an Arrow in the middle of his chest. Trauma falls on his knees and spits blood. He graps Green Arrows legs and pulls him down with him. Trauma jumps on him starts punching him in the face. Green arrow than flips on top on trauma punching him non stop. Trauma bleeds every where on the sand. Trauma kicks Green Arrow off. The Green Arrow hits a near by wall of a building hard. Trauma rolls over to his gun and blasts multiple rounds towards him. The green arrow gets strucked by the bullets. Trauma watches Green Arrow get torn up by the bullets. He limps over to his foe leaning against the wall with blood every where.
Trauma:"you are done for."
Green Arrow:"not..not yet"
The Green Arrow stops talking and passes out. Trauma pins him up against the wall. He brings Connor up to the wall by his father. Trauma graps a bag of arrows and moments later he disapears into the darkness.
5 hours later
"This is channel Nine News!"
Female reporter:" My name is rebecca I am here at the Caribbeans and when we came upon this sight it was a sad sad moment. It was said to have been a big fight between the Green Arrow and yes yes we are getting the name Trauma the vampire. Tom i am going to hand it over to you.
Male reporter:" Thank you rebecca. Yes this is a sad day for all. It is seen here that Green Arrow and his son Connor Hawke are pinned up against a wall near the Green Arrows base. The two are pinned up against the wall with arrows in both their feet and hands.On their chests is written in blood the letters H..F..C. After several tests they are both dead. This is a sad day indeed.
Click!
Trauma turns off the TV in his room back at the club. He lays back with a smile on his face.
Trauma:"I did it! I actually did it!
Trauma turns off the lights and goes to a deep sleep.
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