Naruto : The Alternate Story Of The Shinobi World Ooc

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#1 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

So i'm guessing we pick our favorite naruto characters and role play as them correct?

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#2 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

So, we just do whatever we want?

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#3 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

No we use are chracters we made Zee.

Cyro i think we should go with the idea you had in Sling's thread.

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#4 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

I don't get what we do. Do we play as the characters we created or pick a character? And what do we do?

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#5 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok So Whose Gonna Start It Off Where Do We Begin?

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#6 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Akira Overdrive says:

"No we use are chracters we made Zee.Cyro i think we should go with the idea you had in Sling's thread."
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#7 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"I don't get what we do. Do we play as the characters we created or pick a character? And what do we do?"
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#8 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Well If You Guys Want You Can Create A Character And Rp With Him/Her

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#9 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"Jax says:
"I don't get what we do. Do we play as the characters we created or pick a character? And what do we do?"

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Ok For Anyone Who Didnt Post In Slings Thread You Create Your Own Naruto Char And Make Him Unique Try Not To Be Like A Char From Naruto,You Can Use Someone As Inspiration,For Instance Mines Is Sasuke Mixed With Elements Of Other Characters Here My Bio

Name:Raine Shidobu (Rayne Shadow)

Village Hidden In The Shadows

Ht:5'9

Wt:147

Age:19

BACKGROUND: Raine Was Raised In The Hidden Village Of The Shadows By A Female Ninja By The Name Of Kohatsu.All His Life Raine Believed Kohatsu to Be His Mother And His Father Was The Strongest Ninja In the village Of Shadows Who Was Sent On A Mission In A Joint Effort To Help Stop the Assault On Konoha From The Kyuubi And Was Killed In Battle,But It Was All A Cover Up.Raine Was Actually Found On Mount Hiei,A Mountain That Towered Over The Village To The North.One Day Kohatsu Was Training In The Mountains When She Heard A Loud Rumble To The West Of The Mountain.Wondering What Had Happened Kohatsu Rushed To The Side Of The Mountain Where She Had Heard the Noise.When She Arrived At The Scene A Dark Mist had Engulfed The Mountain.Kohatsu Used Her Raging Wind Justsu In Order To Clear The Mountain Of the Dark Mist.She Discovered A Boy Who Was About The Age Of 10 And Was Lying On the Ground unconscious,Bare,And Dirty As If He Had Just Been In The Fight Of His Life.

The Woman Grabbed the boy And Rushed Him To The Village Medical Center.The Doctors Had Revealed That The Boy Was In Supreme Condition Except Something Was Odd About The Boy.He Had A Strange And Unique Chakra Pattern Which The Doctors Could Not Identify.It Had Resembled The Chakra Of A biju (Tailed Beast) But They Could Not Determine Whether The Boy Was A Jinchuriki Or Just A Boy With An Incredible Chakra Force.After 3 Days Of Resting,Raine Had Finally Awoken But He Seemed To Have No Idea Who Or Where He Was.Kohatsu Took The Boy In And Raised him She Gave Him The Name Raine Shidobu Due To The Fact That When She Had Discovered Him It Had Been Raining And There Was A Dark Shadow Which Covered The Mountain.

Kohatsu Sent Raine To The Academy To Become A Ninja,She Figured With His Incredible Chakra,Raine Had Potential To Become An Incredible Shinobi.Raine Was At The Top Of His Class Surpassing All Others,Teachers Favored Him And Students Of His Class Looked up To Him.Raine Became An incredible Shinobi With The Aid Of Kohatsu.Kohatsu Had Once Been An ANBU Level Ninja but When Their Kurokage (Dark Shadow) Had Fallen 11 Years Ago She Had Left The Ranks Of ANBU To Become A Jonin Again.The Village Had Fallen Into Confusion Without A Leader.The Village Was Led By A Council Who Refused To Appoint A New Kurokage Until They Could Find A Shinobi Who Was Worthy Of Leading Their Country.

Becoming An Incredible Ninja,Raine Was Favored By All.Raine Graduated The Academy At The Top Of His Class.In The Chuunin Final Exams Raine Was In A Tough Fight With A Strong Ninja By The Name Of Kaen Akegata(Flaming Dawn).The Two Exchanged Blow For Blow Their Strength Seemed To Be Rivaled.Kaen Unleashed A Fatal Attack That Had Almost Knocked Raine Unconscious.All Seemed Lost For Raine Until He Had Heard A Voice In His Head Screaming Get Up Weakling! At The Voices Command Raine Felt A Dark Surge Of Power Fill His Body.In A Strange Turn Of Events Raine Rose To His Feet,A Dark Purple/Black Aura Raged In A Torrent of Madness Around Raine.His Eyes Flashed A Dark Purple And He Developed A Unique Pupil Which Extended Out Like A Four Bladed Shuriken.Raine Felt Hatred And Evil Urges Fill His Body.In An Instant He Was At Kaen's Face.He Grabbed Kaen By The Throat And Began To Lift Him Up Off The Ground.If A Few More Seconds Had Passed,Raine Would Have Crushed Kaen's Throat But The match Was Stopped By Three Jonin Which Had Been Observing The Match To Make Sure The Fight Did Not Result in Death.In A Flash Three Jonin Had Restrained Raine.After Pulling Raine Off Of Kaen,Raine Collapsed And Was Sent To The Medical Center.Raine Awoke Several Hours And When Asked What Happened When He Went Beserk,Raine Said He Had No Recollition Of The Incident I Just Blanked Out He Replied

Raine Had Become A Superior Ninja Over the Years And Was Appointed An ANBU Member At The Age Of 16.Raine Was The Top Requested Ninja On All Missions He Was An Expert Assassin And Supreme Stealth Agent.At The Age Of 18 Raine Was Being Considered A Legend And Even Being Called A Blessing To the Village.Raine Had Single-Handedly Brought The Land Of The Shadows Back On The Map.An Excellent Leader And Compassionate Friend To All.One Day,The Council Had Summoned Raine To A Meeting.The Coucil Had Told Raine That He Had Become One Of The Greatest Shinobi The Village Had Ever Manifested,They Offered A proposal Which Was Not Expected By Raine,The Position Of Kurokage.Raine Was Shocked,The Coucil Told Him He Had A Week To Decide If He Wanted To Assume The Positon.

Rushing Home Excitedly,Raine Had Told His Surrogate Mother All About The News.She Was Overjoyed And Felt That This Would One Day Come.She Was Truly Happy For Raine.Raine Celebrated The News With His Friends And They Had A Party In His Honor.

On A Dark Gray,Rainy Thursday,Raine Had Went To Mount Hiei To Pray To The Gods That He Would Be A Great Kurokage And Lead His People To Greatness.Suddenly A Flash Of Lightning Struck The Mountain And Raine Passed Out.While Unconscious Raine Discovered All Of His Lost Memories.His Identity Prior To The Village Of Shadows Was Uncovered In A Flash.

Raine Was Born To A Mother Which Was Part Of The Uchiha Clan In Konohagakure.His Father Was A Shinobi From The Village Of The Hidden Waterfalls.His Mother Had,Had A Secret Romance With The Man And Her Clan Forbade It.She Was Exiled From The Clan And She Was Forced To Live A Nomadic Life With Her Husband And Her Son Raine.During Their Travels,They Had Encountered Mount Hiei And Decided To Go Around The Mountain In Search Of A New Home.They Had Reached The Western Part Of The Mountain When They Encountered A Beast So Fearsome It Instantly Sent Raine Into Tears And Shivers Down His Parents Spines.The Beast Revealed Itslelf To Be The 11 Tailed Biju.It Had Resembled A Black Dragon And Stood Fifty To Sixty Feet High.The Dragon Also Claimed To Be Darkness Incarnate,He Said He Was A Biju Which Had Been Forgotten Long Ago And Had Lived Thousands Of Years Seeking Death To End His Curse As An Immortal.He Wished To Find A Mortal Host And Live Life As One.He Had Finally Chosen His Host And It Was Raine.

Raine's Parents Refused To Let Their Son Become Such A Monster And Stood Up To The Beast Only To Simply Be Eradicated From Exsistence.The Eleven Tailed Biju Towered Over Raine As He Wimpered And Prayed For His Parents To Save His Life.The Beast Spoke To Raine * Do Not Fear Me For We Are One,Or Soon We Shall Be* With That Said,The Beast Had Assumed A Mist Form Still Resembling The Dragon And Rushed Forward Into Raine's Body Rendering Him Unconscious.

Raine Awoke From His Memory Flashes And Was Consumed By Sorrow.It Had All Come Together.Fearing His Possible Threat To The Village And The World Of The Shinobi Raine Left Behind His Home In Search Of Someone Who Could Destroy The Beast Within.

KEKKEI GENKAI: Being That His Mother Was Born Of The Uchiha Clan,His Ancestrial Traits Allow Him To Use The Sharingan But It Has Been Altered Due To Him Bonding With The 11 Tailed Biju.The Extent Which His Sharingan's Power Can Be Calculated Is Yet Uknown Due To the Fact That It Has Been Activated When It Was Under The Control Of Raine's Subconcious,The Eleven Tailed Biju.The Sharingan Which Raine's Posseses Is Reffered To As Demonu Sharingan

NINJUTSU: Raine Is A Skilled Ninjutsu User Which Specializes In A Unique Elemental Chakra,Darkness.Raine Is Able To Utilize And Attack Which Raine Calls Kurai Enkou (Dark Flame) Which Raine Generates A Black Flame Which Engulfs His Fist And Is Able To Burn Through Any Substance And Is Even Capable Reducing Artic Glaciers To Steam.

TAIJUTSU: Raine Is An Expert Hand-To-Hand Combat Specialist And Uses A Taijutsu Style Known As Rippukotsu(Rage Fist).Raine Enhances His Rippukotsu Attacks By Channeling his Chakra Into His Fist Allowing Him To Destroy A Small Home With A Half Forced Blow With Ease.Raine Is Also A Specialist In The Tensou Sword Style Created By A Clan In The Village Hidden In The Shadows Who Specialized In Assasination Techniques.Raine Is Also A Master In Senkochi Which Is A Technique Where The User Moves At A Lightning Fast Speed

GENJUTSU: Raine Is Not A Very Skilled Genjutsu Specialist As Of Yet.But Do To His Sharingan Ancestry He Posesses Great Potential As A Genjutsu User

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#10 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

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#11 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

What Rayne said.

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#12 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Great,how about a tournament?Held By Orichimaru(or whoever evil)

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#13 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok, so, here's how it'll go down. We're all in different lands, correct? A messenger will be sent to each of our lands saying send one of your best ninja to somewhere.

We need to figure out where we'll meet, why we're meeting, and who will be organizing it.

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#14 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Mmkay Sort Of Like A Tournament?Thats Good They Can Be Like "if you win the tournament you get what you desire" rite for instance my char wants the biju taken out of him so he'll go because of that and the same could go for the rest of everyone but it turns out that its actually some organization which is trying to gain our powers Tell Me What Ya Think?

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#15 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Kiyoshi Morioka. Kiyoshi=quiet. Land of Death originally from Konoha but brought to LOD after birth. Jounin

Height: 6ft 4 inches. Weight: 250lbs. Hair: Long black hair. Skin: Brownish Black (African like). Eyes: Black Age: 14

Land of Death: A war ridden land. This place is home to only the most formidable opponents. Bodies everywhere you step. Very few people live here.

Appearance: Wears all Black. His hair flows down to his back. Wears a black robe with pants under it. On the robe is the word Shi in the front below the neck which means death and is the name of his friend. Blue and Red stripes are on the upper torso and lower torso but not in the middle. His pants have no coloring they're just black. On his back he carries 2 swords which he uses for combat.

Fighting Style:

Kekkai Genkai: Blood power. Unique to Kiyoshi's bloodline is the blood power. Whenever in a battle and if any fighter loses a drop of blood his skills change dramatically but first his arms automatically absorb the blood. When he absorbs the blood that leaves him open for a second. Kiyoshi's power quadruples on 1 drop of blood and can keep increasing but there's a limit. He can only increase his power by 4 about 3 times. So 3 drops of blood and his power increases by 12 which makes him a almost unbeatable opponent. He can manipulate the blood in his body to form powerful weapons, shields, and use the blood in his body for special jutsu.

Ninjutsu:

Kiyoshi knows most types of elemental jutsu like Grand fireball or Earth shake but uses a special type of jutsu called Blood limit. Blood limit uses specific hand signs in order to trap there opponent and while the opponent is trapped in the dome made of blood and chakra Kiyoshi then extracts all the blood in the opponents body for his own use. During Blood Limit Kiyoshi gets coated in a blood shield that can only be destroyed by a powerful move like Raikiri or Chidori. Kiyoshi also knows an ability called Blood River. Blood river uses up blood and a lot of chakra. Blood River transforms the ground into a river of blood engulfing the opponent.

Genjutsu:

Kiyoshi is deadly with Genjutsu. Kiyoshi's favorite Genjustu illusion is Blood Rain. Blood Rain is rain made of blood that causes the opponent to relive horrible experiences in their lives. This jutsu causes most people to go mad or insane with guilt or sorrow. He also knows one other Genjutsu illusion. His other one is Blood Death. This jutsu uses blood so that it creates a dead replica of Kiyoshi while the real one escapes. This jutsu is useful because when he creates the replica the real one turns so small that you can't see him and he grows back to 6ft 4inches when he feels the opponent is convinced.

Taijutsu:

Kiyoshi enhances his Taijutsu with chakra making his attacks more powerful. He uses a gentle fist style, Jujutsu style, and he's a swordsman. Like the Hyuga clan he uses his attacks to block points in the body but instead of blocking chakra points he blocks points where blood flows. As for Jujutsu he uses indirect force to defeat a opponent. He uses throws and the opponents force against him/her. He's also a master at evading. As for Swordsmanship he uses the 2 swords he keeps on his back to fight and to defend.

Bio:

Kiyoshi is quiet most of the time because very few people live in the Land of Death. Kiyoshi has only 2 friends whose names are Shi and Kita. Kiyoshi wishes to know where he comes from because he knows he's not from the LOD but his parents died before he could know. They died when he was 10. Kiyoshi also knows they left him a path to follow to discover where he comes from. Kiyoshi is a proud warrior who doesn’t get overconfident and knows when to flee. He's happy to help anyone he gets to know.


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#16 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

Ok, now your character is beginning to sound over powered.

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#17 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

Dark Rayne says:

"Mmkay Sort Of Like A Tournament?Thats Good They Can Be Like "if you win the tournament you get what you desire" rite for instance my char wants the biju taken out of him so he'll go because of that and the same could go for the rest of everyone but it turns out that its actually some organization which is trying to gain our powers Tell Me What Ya Think?"

Run by Akatsuki. He knows that the lands will send their most powerful ninja, which are obviously ones with biiju seald inside of them. He sends them to all lands in hopes of finding the four forgotten.

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#18 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol.

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#19 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Cryo-Wolf says:

"Dark Rayne says:
"Mmkay Sort Of Like A Tournament?Thats Good They Can Be Like "if you win the tournament you get what you desire" rite for instance my char wants the biju taken out of him so he'll go because of that and the same could go for the rest of everyone but it turns out that its actually some organization which is trying to gain our powers Tell Me What Ya Think?"

Run by Akatsuki. He knows that the lands will send their most powerful ninja, which are obviously ones with biiju seald inside of them. He sends them to all lands in hopes of finding the four forgotten."

Sounds good to me.

Im an Anbu,so if anyone else is they can work around with that.

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#20 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Cryo-Wolf says:

"Ok, so, here's how it'll go down. We're all in different lands, correct? A messenger will be sent to each of our lands saying send one of your best ninja to somewhere. We need to figure out where we'll meet, why we're meeting, and who will be organizing it."

How about in the Land of Snow and we're meeting so we can be entered in a tournament like Akira said to be the next Hokage because Tsunade got tired of it. The person organizing can be Jiriyah because he dosen't want to be Hokage and Kakashi dosen't want that much responsibility yet.

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#21 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"Cryo-Wolf says:
"Ok, so, here's how it'll go down. We're all in different lands, correct? A messenger will be sent to each of our lands saying send one of your best ninja to somewhere. We need to figure out where we'll meet, why we're meeting, and who will be organizing it."

How about in the Land of Snow and we're meeting so we can be entered in a tournament like Akira said to be the next Hokage because Tsunade got tired of it. The person organizing can be Jiriyah because he dosen't want to be Hokage and Kakashi dosen't want that much responsibility yet."

Thats A Kool Idea But The Thing Is Not Everyone is gonna be from konoha and some of the characters have no concerns for konoha it should be held in a general area where there are no countries or dead in the middle of all of them so participants can come from all around

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#22 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol."

I should take out the extra abilities.

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#23 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"zee crusher says:
"Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol."
I should take out the extra abilities."

You can keep most just take out the ones that make it and instant kill and all the extra stuff you know you won't be able to use.

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#24 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Jax says:
"zee crusher says:
"Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol."
I should take out the extra abilities."
You can keep most just take out the ones that make it and instant kill and all the extra stuff you know you won't be able to use."

All I added was summoning jutsu.

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#25 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Akira Overdrive says:

"Cryo-Wolf says:
"Dark Rayne says:
"Mmkay Sort Of Like A Tournament?Thats Good They Can Be Like "if you win the tournament you get what you desire" rite for instance my char wants the biju taken out of him so he'll go because of that and the same could go for the rest of everyone but it turns out that its actually some organization which is trying to gain our powers Tell Me What Ya Think?"

Run by Akatsuki. He knows that the lands will send their most powerful ninja, which are obviously ones with biiju seald inside of them. He sends them to all lands in hopes of finding the four forgotten."

Sounds good to me.

Im an Anbu,so if anyone else is they can work around with that."

Thats perfectly Fine No One Here Is Limited except being Invulnerable to anything And Instant Death Techniques It Would Kind Of Make Everything unfair

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#26 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks Cyro man.

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#27 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"zee crusher says:
"Jax says:
"zee crusher says:
"Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol."
I should take out the extra abilities."
You can keep most just take out the ones that make it and instant kill and all the extra stuff you know you won't be able to use."
All I added was summoning jutsu."

Yeah like on the show not the american one lol when the hokage summoned the death god he would have to die himself same with orochimaru making some one back alive also ment that you had to sacrafice some one or his snake he wanted 100 human sacrafices everytime he got summoned so summon the grim reaper lol 5 at that will have to be a cost wouldn't you say?

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#28 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

I'll start it off.

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#29 Posted by zee crusher (9066 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax if its aloud then its cool but i was just saying.

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#30 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

zee crusher says:

"Jax says:
"zee crusher says:
"Jax says:
"zee crusher says:
"Yeah jax your person is good but they are starting to sound alittle more dangerous then gaara lol."
I should take out the extra abilities."
You can keep most just take out the ones that make it and instant kill and all the extra stuff you know you won't be able to use."
All I added was summoning jutsu."
Yeah like on the show not the american one lol when the hokage summoned the death god he would have to die himself same with orochimaru making some one back alive also ment that you had to sacrafice some one or his snake he wanted 100 human sacrafices everytime he got summoned so summon the grim reaper lol 5 at that will have to be a cost wouldn't you say?"

Sure.

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#31 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Hmm What Do You Guys Think Should Akatsuki Come Back????

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#32 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Since their sending the Akatsuki as messengers are all of them alive because I want Deidara to come and bring my message?

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#33 Posted by Sling Shot (3859 posts) - - Show Bio

Just to let you know, all the Jinchuriki char seem overpowered. What if your character were to take on Gai's team solo (Neji, Ten Ten, Rock lee) would they win and how quickly or at what cost would they win. If your character is running through whole teams of people without breaking a sweat I would deliberate they are heavy on the power side and light on the creative side. Not that weakness and creativity are synomonous, but for any good RPG ( or storyline) there needs to be checks and balances. We can't have a bunch of Orochimaru's running around or Naruto's for that matter; who is strong but undisciplined and pays a heavy price for maximum use of his powers.Something to think abouit

I like the Idea of an invitational to different village shinobi.

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#34 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"Just to let you know, all the Jinchuriki char seem overpowered. What if your character were to take on Gai's team solo (Neji, Ten Ten, Rock lee) would they win and how quickly or at what cost would they win. If your character is running through whole teams of people without breaking a sweat I would deliberate they are heavy on the power side and light on the creative side. Not that weakness and creativity are synomonous, but for any good RPG ( or storyline) there needs to be checks and balances. We can't have a bunch of Orochimaru's running around or Naruto's for that matter; who is strong but undisciplined and pays a heavy price for maximum use of his powers.Something to think abouitI like the Idea of an invitational to different village shinobi."

Shot,wat up?

Did you like my character?

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#35 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"Just to let you know, all the Jinchuriki char seem overpowered. What if your character were to take on Gai's team solo (Neji, Ten Ten, Rock lee) would they win and how quickly or at what cost would they win. If your character is running through whole teams of people without breaking a sweat I would deliberate they are heavy on the power side and light on the creative side. Not that weakness and creativity are synomonous, but for any good RPG ( or storyline) there needs to be checks and balances. We can't have a bunch of Orochimaru's running around or Naruto's for that matter; who is strong but undisciplined and pays a heavy price for maximum use of his powers.Something to think abouit I like the Idea of an invitational to different village shinobi."

Is mine overpowered?

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#36 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Sling Shot says:

"Just to let you know, all the Jinchuriki char seem overpowered. What if your character were to take on Gai's team solo (Neji, Ten Ten, Rock lee) would they win and how quickly or at what cost would they win. If your character is running through whole teams of people without breaking a sweat I would deliberate they are heavy on the power side and light on the creative side. Not that weakness and creativity are synomonous, but for any good RPG ( or storyline) there needs to be checks and balances. We can't have a bunch of Orochimaru's running around or Naruto's for that matter; who is strong but undisciplined and pays a heavy price for maximum use of his powers.Something to think abouitI like the Idea of an invitational to different village shinobi."

Yea I Agree With You On That One My Char Is Jinchuuriki but theres limits on his power he is not all seemingly powerful And He "CAN" Be Beaten,In Fact There Are Still Some Abilities That My Char Is Capable Of But He Still Does Not Know How To Use Them For Instance He Has A Version Of the Sharingan Which He Still Is Not Capable Of Using And Isnt Even Aware That He Has It

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#37 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

My avatar is hilarious lmao

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#38 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Akira Overdrive says:

"My avatar is hilarious lmao"

Lmao Whered You Get The Pic Like That?

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#39 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

Jax says:

"Akira Overdrive says:
"My avatar is hilarious lmao"

If Deadpool ever gets a Naruto headband and becomes a ninja the world will have gone crazy."

Lmao he already looks like one

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#40 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

Akira Overdrive says:

"My avatar is hilarious lmao"

If Deadpool ever gets a Naruto headband and becomes a ninja the world will have gone crazy.

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#41 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Yeah,i figured this avatar would work,since i couldnt find an exact one i wanted.

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#42 Posted by Resonate (14551 posts) - - Show Bio

Okay...I think I'll attempt now

Name: 憎悪愛 Keishi Koishii (Despise, Love)

Village hidden in the Clouds

Age:19

Status: Rogue ninja, currently on hiatus

Keishii was a member of the Hidden Cloud Villages elite ANBU squad. He was their main source for assassinations, as he was a master of the Thousand Birds Chidori technique and an excellent escape artist. He was nicknamed "The Flying Thunder" because the last thing that targets saw and heard before their death's was the blue light flash above their heads and the sound of birds chirping. He was revered by the nation, but was equally feared by them too, due to his second personality.

Unlike anyone else in the world with the disorder, he gained his problems through special means. At the age of seven, he was captured by Orochimaru and used in many terrible experiments, in which the Yin/Yang within his body was separated to an extreme. He would have never survived if it were not for his father summoning his own team of select Jonin and ANBU to save the children taken by Orochimaru. He was able to make it seem like a legitimate scheme, but every one knew that he just wanted his son back at all costs.

His chakra was either always negative or always positive, meaning his good days were great, and his bad days were..well, bad. He had to fight to get through the academy, and couldn't bare it for more than a few days at a time. However, the experiments did do him some good. He became extremely good at manipulating this dangerous chakra, as it would multiply and multiply every day.

At birth, his parents named him Amatsu Ichinan (heavenly boy), because they thought it was a miracle for him to have survived being born so prematurely. He was a very small child, and was picked on for years for not being big and strong like his father. But the insults stopped flying once he had his first bad day with his chakra. His doctor had advised his parents not to go to school, but they couldn't tell the difference. The boy that had made fun of him the day before was dead before the academy got out that day.

Years later he perfected all of his lightning jutsu that he could think of, and a good array of physical fighting skill, and he wasn't messed with by the other Chuunin. He felt no guilt from the day that he had killed Oki, the kid that had made fun of him for his size, at all. He also didn't feel in te slightest way had he overreacted. Anyone that got in his way would die, and no one got in his way after that. They had no proof, but everyone knew that Keishi had done it.

After being asked into the ANBU squad at the age of 17, he was sent on multiple assassination missions, and was revered a hero after killing an entire brigade of rogue ninja that had invaded the city by himself. Keishi was loved by all, until he dissapeared one day after that. No one know where or why, only that he declared he was going to slay the serpent. He changed his name from Amatsu Ichinan and continued on his way. Many thought he meant Orochimaru, but they were dead wrong. He meant the black serpent that lay in his heart.

To be continued...

Any way hope that was good just kind of slapped it down on the spot lol

Alright that was mine from the other thread. So, when's this thing happening?

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#43 Posted by Jax (6182 posts) - - Show Bio

My avatar sort of looks like the character I created just make him black add more muscle and make his eyes white and bam you got me.

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#44 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

Oh crap....does that mean mine is overpowered?

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#45 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

nah ur good jus dont make him unbeatable

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#46 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Hey Cryo i put me in your direction,and choose the location.

Hope you or anyone else dosent mind.

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#47 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

I Came Up With A Place For The Tournament Its Called The Celestia Plains And Its located In The Center Of The Five Great Lands It Consists Of Different Terrain A Mountain terrain to the north a waterfall terrain to the south east a forest to the west An Abandoned Castle To The South And A Lake Surrounded By A Forest To The North East and an open plain field in the center

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#48 Posted by Akira Overdrive (10214 posts) - - Show Bio

Dark Rayne says:

"I Came Up With A Place For The Tournament Its Called The Celestia Plains And Its located In The Center Of The Five Great Lands It Consists Of Different Terrain A Mountain terrain to the north a waterfall terrain to the south east a forest to the west An Abandoned Castle To The South And A Lake Surrounded By A Forest To The North East and an open plain field in the center"

Oh well,ill have to edit.

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#49 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

You Guys Can Go There From Cryo's Home Its Just A Thought That Way Every One Will Be Fighting Seperately Instead Of All In One Spot

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#50 Posted by Dark Rayne (1800 posts) - - Show Bio

lmao yea its kool