Death to Avalon

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#1  Edited By War-Patriot

"This is nothing personal. Its just business"

The assassin had navigated the homes these people had called safe havens, had treasured as their secure homes, and had then killed them right there. No trace was left, the whole place was doused with the assassins’ own chemical compound, one of the main ingredients is hydrogen peroxide used to kill DNA, and cells which may be left behind on the crime scene. No trace at all, not even a single hairpiece to trace back to the killer. It was as if these people just vanished.

"Your deaths will serve a message"

Three individuals all abducted during the middle of the day, their captures being discovered simultaneously. One common link to them all. No calling sign left behind, just a brand. All discovered just after sunset, when their bodies hung like ghosts from the rooftops of Los Angeles, stripped naked.

"#1"

She was already ID'ed by the police, it was too late for damage control, and the pictures circulated the Internet too fast. Destiny Jones, an ebony skinned African woman, devote Christian, stripped of her luxurious clothes and branded with the number one. Her mansion was a large estate, and her security guards couldn't help her. They didn't even know she was abducted until they saw the news. No one was untouchable. One link, an Avalon shareholder, holding a good amount of stock as well.

"#2"

After digging for an identity, the police found the identity of the man. Hassan Al-Hakim, Muslim, Bronze skin, Middle Eastern. While the man was relatively rich, he was not as rich as the first victim, but more richer than the third. Just like Destiny, the man was stripped and branded. Just like Destiny, Hassan was a shareholder of Avalon, possessing a fair amount of stock, but not a major shareholder.

"#3"

This one took longer to ID, one of his friends saw the picture on the Internet and drove over to the police station to ID him. Buddhist John Truman, not as luxurious as the others, John couldn't afford much stock on Avalon. As such, he is a minor shareholder. Now his body lay bare, his fair skin shown to the world.

Indiscrimination is vital. No one is safe.

The Rich, the middle, the poor. The Muslim, the Christian and the Buddhist. The dark, the fair and the in between. The killings indeed were indiscriminate, branded with scars across their chests that served their message well. All of them ID'ed, all of them tied by one link. Being an Avalon shareholder was no longer safe. Investing in Avalon was a fast way to hell. Let them read it well, let them understand the warning.

Death to Avalon...

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[That was badass! Avalon has become a dangerous investment :P]

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[So it begins. Awesome post (:]

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Go Avalon! 1% for the win.

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Dude.

You're like, epic.

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@war-patriot: very nice, but who hired u? oh and SWORD has no involvement besides u in this >_>

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Nicely written, i enjoyed reading it even if i don't know a thing about Avalon.

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If Renegade gets her hands on you...

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#15  Edited By Orthos

Excellent start, my friend :)

Now it's my turn.

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This was a great read. Well written and smart.

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Not to make this about me but I just got Febreze in my eyes.

Also this is nice work.