Arach Knight vs PantherFan12 OOC

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#1  Edited By PantherFan12

Who shall win Werewolf or Spider

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#2  Edited By Quality

*shakes head*

Good luck I guess..

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#3  Edited By Arach-Knight

Aha!  Alright worthy adversary.  Let me read and see where we're at!

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#4  Edited By PantherFan12

Are you going to post yet

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#5  Edited By Arach-Knight

Yeah, just posted

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#6  Edited By PantherFan12

oh ok

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#7  Edited By PantherFan12

Man I like battling people it brings out my innerself(On Computer)

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#8  Edited By Arach-Knight

I'll post again in a couple of hours.  Have a few things to take care of first.

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#9  Edited By PantherFan12

Ok

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#10  Edited By Arbitius

gl you two

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#11  Edited By Arach-Knight

Thanks Arbitius!

Okay Panther, I just posted.

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#12  Edited By PantherFan12

I just posted too

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#13  Edited By PantherFan12

Oh also thanks Arbitius

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#14  Edited By Arach-Knight

And back to you!

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#15  Edited By PantherFan12

Now your turn again

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#16  Edited By Arach-Knight

And I posted.  Frisbee time!  Weeeeee!

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#17  Edited By PantherFan12

I posted Arach Knight put like 10:55 or something you dont have too but I would like it ok

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#18  Edited By Arach-Knight

I guess we're done?  Feel free to renew the assault if we're not.

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#19  Edited By _Sojourn_

GOOOOO Arach-Knight

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#20  Edited By Arach-Knight

Okay, posted!  Come find me or let me know where you are!

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#21  Edited By Kurrent

Hey Panther instead of writing "I did this" or "I did that", try writing in the third person. Like by saying, PantherFan did this  or "He did that". When using I you are writing in the first person and when doing something like RPGing it might get a little confusing. You should really only write in the first person if your character is speaking or thinking and it should be in quotes. Also by writing in Third person you will be able to write in more detail and make your post more dynamic.

Just a little tip to help you out around here!

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#22  Edited By Arach-Knight

How are mine?  Just wondering :)

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#23  Edited By Kurrent

Honestly man about a year and a half ago I would have said you were great. By all means it's ok it's just that things are more story driven with tons of character development nowadays. what I got from your character was he was a little silly and heroic. If that is what you are going for then awesome but if you want to show off his skills i suggest that you go more into detail when writing your attacks, dodge and when you take a hit.

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#24  Edited By Arach-Knight

Cheers.  I appreciate the feedback!

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#25  Edited By Kurrent

No problem, I look forward to seeing more stuff from the both of you.

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#26  Edited By PantherFan12

Well I am trying to get a third person view ok

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#27  Edited By Arach-Knight

sorry for the delay, there you go.

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#28  Edited By PantherFan12

now your turn again

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#29  Edited By Quality
PantherFan12 said:
Well I am trying to get a third person view ok
Well... If that was supposed to be a anger moment- just cut Kurrent some respect he's helping you out.

I haven seen a 'try' yet.
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Hey Panther instead of writing "I did this" or "I did that", try writing in the third person. Like by ... [more]

OH...And I STRESS when speaking- please try " " that way we know, as the readers, when your talking instead of I said Owww that hurts.



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#30  Edited By Arach-Knight

Panther, sorry for the delay.  Will be posting tomorrow.

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#31  Edited By PantherFan12

Oh ok

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#32  Edited By CellphoneGirl

Arach-Night how many battles are u in lmfao.

But anyways Good Luck!!!

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#33  Edited By Arach-Knight

Just the two.  Panther and Egan.  I've been lagging though :(

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#34  Edited By CellphoneGirl

aww, i bet you'll do awesome though :]

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#35  Edited By PantherFan12

oooohhhh Egan I hear he is tough and he is also my friend on the Vine

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#36  Edited By Arach-Knight

Okay, finally posted!

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#37  Edited By CellphoneGirl
@Pantherfan12 have you ever heard of quotes, details....  and making sence.
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#38  Edited By -Eclipse-

@CPG - Now now, he needs constructive criticism. That's just criticism.


That being said...

HOW MANY FREAKIN TIMES DO I NEED TO TELL YOU TO USE PUNCTUATION DUDE???

God... I've tried giving you advice, but you have to actually LISTEN to what I'm saying!

Anyways, Arach-Knight, you're doing an awesome job with this one... Can't wait to give it a proper read instead of skimming through :D