Personally i would omit the cockiness inside of her
give her a personality similar to captain america
also i make sure that most of her adventure takes place in space fighting new enemies
I would write her with the best aspects of both her Captain Marvel and Ms Marvel careers.
Dont Mary Sue her. She can still be the inspiring character who is loved and adored by everyone but we have to see her earn it.
Brian Reed's Ms Marvel series was scored by Carol's fans and it was about her realizing after House Of M "hey, I've had kind of a rough career and haven't really doing all I can do to be the best heroine I can be. I want to be better for myself and for everyone."
Acknowledge her faults and have her work to overcome them whilst also demonstrating the positive parts of her personality.
You also don't need to throw the other Captain Marvel's under the bus to benefit her.
Her personality just comes off as arrogant and basically saying she's better than everyone else and she'd kill Thanos easy. Iron Man did used to be the same and he's obviously changed now. Hulk is just Hulk he wants to beat everything up. Thor literally knew he couldn't beat Thanos so went to get a weapon to help him do it, and when he thought he could beat him he didn't imply everyone else was useless and that he was better than them.
Captain Marvel has come along doesn't know anything about Thanos or the Avengers and is just like lets go get him I'll solo him easy you guys are shit, she isn't giving the avengers any respect, also her personality just generally comes across as cocky and thinks she's better than everyone else.
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