Super Iron: Avenger of Steel #1

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I figured I'd make this because I think there gonna kick me out of New Amalgam Universe. They think I'm a traitor. Either way I did wanna make a Super Iron story since forever.

SO, BEHOLD:

The Origin of Super Iron!

The Daily Stark...

"Yawn" Tony Kent resisted the urge to fall asleep during the meeting.

"Mr. Kent" said Ezekiel Edge "It is your company. You could be enthusiastic, or just go home"

Suddenly, Tony bolted out the door and hopped into his car.

Three-Eyes Casino...

"Tony" said Lois Potts "Your pushing your luck, now"

"Oh, relax, Lois" Tony told his girlfriend "This is a way of life!"

"Slot Machines?" asked Lois

"Exactly!" said Tony "Now.... I think I'm broke"

"I think your drunk" she replied, walking away

"Geez" said Tony "Thats harsh"

Tony walked outside, only to see his car had been stolen by some street-thugs, and Lois had taken a taxi cab

Tony sighed, and walked to the sidewalk as it started raining.

Suddenly, thunder crackled, lightning struck, and green lights were flashing up in the sky!

"Wha?" Tony wondered what was going on

Suddenly, a huge unidentified object crashed to the ground, frightening Tony, who leaped out of the way

Tony walked over to it, and saw it was an alien suit of armor!

Tony gasped, and tapped it. Suddenly, a holographic message flashed in Tony's face

"Hello" said the man in the hologram "Who ever you are, Martian, Paraskrull, or Saturnian, please, use this armor responsibly. The armor gives you amazing powers once you put it on, but if you take it off, you become a normal being again. Keep the armor away from Kryptonite, or it will no longer work. And please, pleaaAAAAAH!!!"

Tony gasped as the message came to a horrible end. A huge blaze of light flashed across the screen, and seemingly killed the man.

"Who made this?" Tony looked at an unreadable sentence printed on the armor. Suddenly, it reverted to normal English. It read "created by Yinsen-El of Krypton".

Tony put it on, then soon witnessed its amazing powers. He flew back to his house.

The next day...

"AAAAH!" screamed a woman

"Gimme all your money or else!" demanded the mugger, pointing the gun at her son "And hopefully you know what 'or else' is supposed to mean!"

Suddenly, a man in a suit of armor landed behind the mugger.

"I'm sorry, am I intruding or something?" asked the man in a tone that sounded as if he were being sarcastic.

The mugger turned around and pointed the gun at the man

"YES YOU ARE!" He yelled, shooting the gun at the man's stomach. The bullets bounced off, not even leaving a dent.

"Ooo..." said the man "Scary! Wanna see something really scary?"

"Uh... no?" said the mugger

"TOO BAD!" shouted the man, grabbing the mugger and flying into the sky.

"Lemme go!" screamed the mugger

"Sure thing" the man let go of the mugger, who fell to the ground.

"AAAAA!" The mugger screamed until the man flew after him and grabbed him, carrying him safely to the ground.

"Who are you?" asked the woman's son

"I am.... uh... Super Iron... I guess" answered the man

"Oh" said the little boy "Thank you for helping me and my mommy"

Suddenly, the press arrived.

"I'm Lois Potts, writing for the Daily Stark's line of news, who are you?" Lois asked

Super Iron took off his helmet, revealing himself

"I am Tony Kent" said the man "C.E.O. of The Daily Stark!"

Lois just stared at him, and ran off.

Tony Kent's House....

"Did you just do this for fame?" asked Lois "Huh? Be honest, Tony!"

"Well" Tony looked at her for a moment "Yes..."

Lois slapped Tony across the face

"Tony, you need to know what responsibility is!" yelled Lois

"I know what it is" said Tony

They kept arguing over the whole incident earlier that day.

Meanwhile....

"I always dreamed of being rich!" yelled Lex Stane to himself "I always dreamed of being the powerful one! Tony doesn't deserve the power.... but I do!"

Lex pressed a button, and a door opened up. On the other side, Lex's own suit of armor

"It's finally finished!" yelled Lex "It's almost time to attack! HAHAHA!!!"

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The next night...

"Sorry about the Super Iron thing" said Tony to Lois "I hope this fancy resturant makes you feel better."

"Tony" said Lois "Dates wont make me feel better. I just.... well.... nevermind. I just dont like that your so irresponsible!"

Suddenly, a man in his own green and yellow suit of armor crashed through the wall

"I'm looking for Tony Kent!" he yelled "I'm looking for the man they call Super Iron!"

Luckily, he failed to notice Tony, who quickly snuck away to the men's restroom, where he put on his suit of armor.

"WHERE IS HE?!?!?" yelled the man.

"HERE!" yelled Super Iron, flying out of nowhere and punching the man right in the face "Who are you, ya lunatic?!"

"You dont remember?!?!" shouted the man "I'm Lex! LEX STANE!"

Lex grabbed Super Iron, and smashed him to the ground.

Super Iron flew into the air, Lex chasing him.

Above the city, the two metal giants clashed.

"Is that all you got?" taunted Lex

"No" said Super Iron "But this is!"

Super Iron blasted Lex in the face, almost destroying his helmet, and knocked him out of the air.

"RAAAAH!" yelled Lex, falling out the air.

"Thats gotta hurt!" Super Iron flew after Lex, and grabbed him by the foot. Super Iron then flung Lex up into the air, then blasted him "Thats a spicy meatball!"

Super Iron flew into the air, about to punch Lex, but Lex hit him with an uppercut, sending him flying across the sky.

"I'M NOT FINISHED YET!" Lex flew after Super Iron, grabbed him, and continued to punch him in the face, smashing the helmet and almost shattering Tony's skull.

However, Tony had a trick up his sleeve. He flew out of Lex's hands, then blasted him in the face, then quickly flew over and punched him to the ground.

"NOOO!!!! HE BEAT ME!" screamed Lex "NOBODY CAN BEAT ME!!!!"

The police dragged Lex into a huge van, and threw him inside.

"Thanks, Super Iron" said the police officer "Your great!"

"Yeah" said Super Iron "But you know what they say, with great crime-fighting comes great responsibility.... or something like that."

Lois ran up to Super Iron

"Are you okay?" she asked

"Now I am" Tony smiled.

The two kissed, and then went home.

THE END

NEXT ISSUE: TERROR! SUSPENSE! DON'T MISS: THE MADNESS OF THE MANDARAINIAC!

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Why do you think you're going to get kicked off the New Amalgam Universe?

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Why do you think you're going to get kicked off the New Amalgam Universe?

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#5  Edited By GR2Blackout

I made it while you called me a traitor on the PM

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@GR2Blackout said:

I made it while you called me a traitor on the PM

That was a joke.

Great story by the way.

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@GR2Blackout said:

I made it while you called me a traitor on the PM

That was a joke.

Great story by the way.

What was your favorite part :P

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@GR2Blackout said:

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

I made it while you called me a traitor on the PM

That was a joke.

Great story by the way.

What was your favorite part :P

Liked the part where he fights the mugger.