World's Finest (Script, #2)

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

Page One:

1.1 Right where we left off last issue. Punisher looks up at Moon Knight, crouching on a fire escape.

MOON KNIGHT: Frank Castle, I require your assistance.

CAPTION(Punisher): Not again.

1.2: Punisher looking up.

PUNISHER: What is it now?

1.3: Moon Knight in mid jump to the ground.

MOON KNIGHT: It's about the Thunderer

SFX: WHUMP!

1.4: Moon Knight, crouching on the ground.

MOON KNIGHT: I'm sure you've heard of him.

MOON KNIGHT: This perp was just telling you how he took Jigsaw's place after his "death."

Page Two:

2.1: Punisher

PUNISHER: What about him?

2.2: Close up of Moon Knight.

MOON KNIGHT: He's Jigsaw.

2.3: Punisher, shocked (and somewhat angry)

PUNISHER: Well, why the **** would he call himself the ****ing THUNDERER?

Page Three:

3.1: Moon Knight. His cloak conceals his body.

MOON KNIGHT: Khonshu made a grave mistake. He never should have--

3.2: Close up of Punisher, shouting.

PUNISHER: CUT THE THE CHASE! WHAT THE **** IS GOING ON?

3.3: Same shot as 3.1

MOON KNIGHT: ......

MOON KNIGHT: Remember Zeus?

PUNISHER: Yeah.

3.4: Close up of Moon Knight.

MOON KNIGHT: He's become an Avatar to Zeus...like I am to Khonshu.

Page Four:

4.1: Punisher.

PUNISHER: What does Jigs--What does "Thunderer" want?

4.2: Moon Knight.

MOON KNIGHT: ....He's planning to send the world into anarchy

MOON KNIGHT: New York is his experiment. His testing ground to see if his plans work.

4.3: Punisher, with a hint of disbelief on his face.

PUNISHER: And you believe him?

PUNISHER: You believe this "God" that tricked you into murdering innocent people?

Page Five:

5.1: Moon Knight's eyes.

MOON KNIGHT: No.

MOON KNIGHT: But I'd rather not take that chance.

5.2: Same shot.

MOON KNIGHT: Do you?

5.3: Punisher, tense.

MOON KNIGHT (Off panel): Look, I didn't CHOOSE to enlist your help. I came to you as a favor to Khonshu....But I'm telling you.

5.4: Side view of Moon Knight's mouth (covered by his mask, of course)

MOON KNIGHT: I need your help.

Page Six:

6.1: Punisher, still tense, angry, etc.

6.2: Punisher, slightly more relaxed.

PUNISHER: ....

6.3: Punisher, head down.

PUNISHER: I'll help you.

CAPTION(Punisher): I regret saying it the second the words come out of my mouth.

Page Seven:

7.1: Zeus on the astral plane with Thunderer (Jigsaw) Portals to various dimensions are everywhere. A mix of Dr. Strange and the Twilight Zone. Zeus is notably bigger than Thunderer.

ZEUS: You are doing well, my Priest.

7.2: Thunderer at a table. Zeus watches (nobody seems to notice him)

ZEUS: The mobs are uniting.

7.3: A mobster paying off a cop.

ZEUS: Sides are being drawn.

7.4: A cop, surrounded by mobsters.

ZEUS: Actions are being taken.

7.5: Back to the astral plane. Thunderer's eyes.

ZEUS: Now....You must start phase two.

7.6: Thunderer, head down (slightly bowing)

THUNDERER: Yes, my Lord.

Page Eight Splash Page:

Moon Knight slams a man into a brick wall. He has a bomb strapped to his chest. Blood flies from his face. Moon Knight's cloak blows in the wind. Punisher, in the background, is shooting at mobsters hiding in a warehouse.

NO DIALOGUE.

Page Nine:

9.1: Moon Knight kneeing the man in the chest.

SFX: BRACK!

Man: UNNN!

9.2: Moon Knight standing over the man.

MOON KNIGHT: Get up.

MOON KNIGHT: I want more.

9.3: Punisher, shooting a machine gun.

SFX: BRAKKABRAKKABRAKKABRAKKABRAKKABRAKKABRAKKA!

PUNISHER: HOW YOU HOLDIN' UP BACK THERE 'KNIGHT?

9.4: Moon Knight blocking a left cross by the man.

MOON KNIGHT: Good enough.

9.5: Moon Knight palm-strikes the man.

SFX: BAM!

MAN: WAUGH!

Page Ten:

10.1: A man falls from the roof of the warehouse.

SFX: BLAM!

MAN: AAAAAAAH!

10.2: Punisher dives out of the way of gunfire, a man's legs can be seen in the corner of the panel (in Punisher's way)

10.3: Punisher landing an uppercut on the man as he stands up.

10.4: Punisher uses the man as a shield.

MAN: AAAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEE

SFX: BUDDABUDDABUDDA!

10.5: Wide view of the warehouse. Men can be seen through a few windows

MAN 1: Damn--

MAN 2: He killed Ricky--

MAN 3: Waste him!

Page Eleven:

11.1: Moon Knight punching the bomber dead on.

MOON KNIGHT: I want a NAME!

11.2: Moon Knight jumping as the man tries to leg sweep him.

SFX: WHOOOSH!

11.3: Moon Knight's boot, as he kicks the man to the ground. Blood flies from his nose.

MOON KNIGHT: Not the answer I wanted.

11.4: Close up of the man's hand. He pulls out a switchblade.

11.5: The bomber thrusting the switchblade through Moon Knight's chest.

SFX: FUNT!

MOON KNIGHT: AAAAAAAAAGGH!

Page Twelve:

12.1: Moon Knight throwing a roundhouse kick to the man's face.

MOON KNIGHT: Damn you for that!

12.2: Moon Knight throwing a right cross.

SFX: D'KUSH!

12.3: Punisher throwing a grenade.

12.4: Part of the warehouse blows up.

SFX: BWOOOSH!

Page Thirteen:

13.1: Punisher's eyes, he's staring at the flames.

CAPTION(Punisher): Flush them out.

13.2: Close up on a tripwire Punisher planted in the warehouse.

13.3: Same shot, a foot trips it.

13.4: An explosion.

SFX: BOOOOOM!

Page Fourteen:

14.1: Moon Knight pulls the blade out of his chest.

14.2: The bomber diving at him.

14.3: Moon Knight kicks him.

MOON KNIGHT: Off!

14.4: Moon Knight slitting the throat of the bomber.

SFX: SWIIISSSSH!

MAN: GHUK!

14.5: The man falls to the ground, dead.

14.6: Show the timer on the bomb. Two minutes left.

Page Fifteen:

15.1: Punisher, shooting.

SFX: BRAKKABRAKKABRAKKABRAKKA

CAPTION(Punisher): Keep the gun on a steady burst.

15.2: Punisher's eyes.

CAPTION(Punisher): Kill anyone who comes out.

15.3: Punisher, still shooting, a charred man is behind him with a machete.

15.4: Punisher ducks under the swipe.

SFX: SWOOOSH!

15.5: Punisher elbowing the man in the face.

SFX: WHAM!

MAN: AGH!

15.6: Punisher (now turned around) kneeing the man in the groin.

Page Sixteen:

16.1: Punisher throws a right cross.

16.2: Punisher hits the back of the man's legs with his gun.

16.3: The man falls to his knees.

SFX: WHUMP!

16.4: Castle pulls out a knife.

16.5: Punisher (the man is not shown here.) Slamming the knife into the man's forehead.

SFX: BROOOKSSHT!

16.6: The man can be seen with the knife in his head, while Punisher is turned around.

CAPTION(Punisher): Nobody came out.

CAPTION(Punisher): Lucky bastard.

Page Seventeen:

17.1: Moon Knight dragging the dead bombers body, pushing past Punisher.

SFX: whump.

PUNISHER: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

MOON KNIGHT: Finishing the job.

17.2: Moon Knight entering the flaming warehouse.

17.3: Moon Knight running out.

17.4: Same shot, an explosion occurs in the background.

SFX: BWOOOOOOOOOM!

17.5: Overhead view of the warehouse, crumbling.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): You got lucky.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Lucky bastard.

Page Eighteen:

18.1: Punisher and Moon Knight in the battle van.

PUNISHER: How did you know those people were planning something?

MOON KNIGHT: Khonshu.

MOON KNIGHT: He's getting...glimpses of Zeus's plans.

18.2: Moon Knight.

MOON KNIGHT: Apparently, they were planning to blow up police headquarters.

18.3: Punisher.

PUNISHER: We find Thunderer.

PUNISHER: We find him, and we take him out.

PUNISHER: Are we clear?

18.4: Moon Knight's eyes.

MOON KNIGHT: Yes.

Page Nineteen:

19.1: The astral plane.

THUNDERER: I am sorry my Lord! Khonshu predicted our movements!

19.2: Thunderer on his knees before Zeus, pleading. His mask is off. (Confirming it's Jigsaw.)

THUNDERER: I am sorry! I didn't know.

19.3: Zeus.

ZEUS: You are forgiven.

19.4: Thunderer, looking up.

THUNDERER: I-I-I am?

ZEUS: Yes. I planned for it to go this way.

ZEUS: I ALLOWED Khonshu to see a glimpse of my plans.

Page Twenty:

20.1: Zeus's eyes.

ZEUS: Do you think the mobs will stand for this?

20.2: Back-overhead view of the two. Zeus throws his arms up.

ZEUS: They were gangsters from SEVERAL different mobs.

20.3: Thunderer.

ZEUS: And do you think the mobs will stand for a killing such as this?

ZEUS: They will not.

ZEUS: They will strike back.

Page Twenty One Splash Page:

Zeus, bigger than Thunderer, towering over him, with a comforting look on his face. Thunderer kneels before him.

ZEUS: The mobs will be after Moon Knight and Punisher, and like I said

ZEUS: Lines will be drawn

ZEUS: Sides will be taken

ZEUS: And we will be left to pick up the pieces....

Avatar image for thewholedamnshow
TheWholeDamnShow

769

Forum Posts

254

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 0

User Lists: 0

#1  Edited By TheWholeDamnShow

Awesome job! Looking forward to the next chapter. Punisher and Knight are in for a war.

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

@TheWholeDamnShow: Thank You :)

And what makes you say were is coming? THE WAR HAS ALREADY BEGUN!

:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P

Avatar image for thewholedamnshow
TheWholeDamnShow

769

Forum Posts

254

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 0

User Lists: 0

#3  Edited By TheWholeDamnShow

@primepower53 said:

@TheWholeDamnShow: Thank You :)

And what makes you say were is coming? THE WAR HAS ALREADY BEGUN!

:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN.

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

heh....

Avatar image for the_impersonator
The Impersonator

10270

Forum Posts

23956

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 31

User Lists: 50

#5  Edited By The Impersonator

Great chapter!

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

@The Impersonator: thanks!

Avatar image for the_impersonator
The Impersonator

10270

Forum Posts

23956

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 31

User Lists: 50

#7  Edited By The Impersonator

@primepower53: You're welcome! :)

Avatar image for innervenom123
InnerVenom123

29886

Forum Posts

1786

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 11

User Lists: 1

#8  Edited By InnerVenom123

Nice work!

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

@InnerVenom123: thanks, man! Glad to hear you like it!

Avatar image for batkevin74
batkevin74

16889

Forum Posts

1712

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 2

User Lists: 13

#10  Edited By batkevin74

WAR! hoo yEah! What is it good for!

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

@batkevin74: @InnerVenom123: @TheWholeDamnShow: thanks, guys!

Literally JUST got the finale up

Avatar image for deactivated-5d1828448d5f0
deactivated-5d1828448d5f0

6064

Forum Posts

398

Wiki Points

0

Followers

Reviews: 6

User Lists: 21

waitaminute--this isn't chapter three!