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Out in the forrest, there was a chair, and sitting in that chair was her.......

Her name was Snow and the name fit, pale albino skin softly set against those deep oceanic blue eyes...Her face so innocent, so child like and unblemished, raven black hair combed back ward and set into a crimson bow. But now that angelic face, sunk into her lap, dripping in gore. and drenched with blood. Her sweet soft hands binded to the arms of this chair by Barb wire, more and more pain coursing through her as the barbed wire seemed to cut deeper into her wrists.  nicks and gashes all across her arms.  Her eyes red from blood and nigh half of her teeth beaten out. She barely had enough strength to lift her head....but she had too, the sound of male boots coming closer and closer into the forest. She was dazed and could barely remember who did this to her, but that was before, she saw him. With a hunched back, he trudged through the icy roads, his axe dragged through the snow, covered in his last victim, A ski-mask protecting his face, He began to speak as he made his way to her. "Hey darling" He muttered underneath his killer's cowl, His large thumb reached underneath her chin and raised her head up.

Those piercing blue eyes of her's locked with his, choking back her tears, she looked at him and begged "Please.....Please, don't kill me"' With those words, Her eyes gently fluttered shut, her head falling deep back into her lap again, Sighing the man turned his back to her and threw his axe away. Watching it skid across the snow embedded path, His lumbering stature and all else would make anyone think his heart was little more than a black cyst, but had this souless torturer turned soft?

And so, he turned around, and ripped the rope off of her, and ran away with her body. Setting her nearly dying body upon the doorstep of a solemn little cottage on the west side of the snow capped moutains. Tucked away, deep and far away from the comotion of the village and the forrest. Five hours, he trekked through the snow untill he saw the house.......Smoke rising from the chimney, obviously there was a warm fire inside, so Slowly, The Huntsman took off his shirt and wrapped her body in it.

With that, he put his finger to his lips and onto hers and slowly walked away. Hoping that the dwellers inside......would nurse her back to health.
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Part 2 coming soon :)

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#2  Edited By Final Arrow

Cool.

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Ooooh I like it ^_^


Your writing is amazing Drifter!

I wonder what's unna' happen *_*

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#4  Edited By Final Arrow

Sh have you checked out the rest of the fairy tale stuff for the contest . its pretty cool.

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#5  Edited By lady_redhead

were all so blimmin twisted... I LOVE IT well done Drift!

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#6  Edited By ~The Wanderer~

Nice :D

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Thanks guys :D

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aztek the lost said:
"umm...which fairy tale is this? o_O

anyways, I like it regardless :D"
Cool and it's Snow White
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#11  Edited By Last_Guardian

nice drift

doesn't remember there being a huntsman in Snow White

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#13  Edited By Last_Guardian
aztek the lost said:
"Obi Wan Kenobi! said:
"nice drift

doesn't remember there being a huntsman in Snow White"
the guy who was supposed to cut her heart out but couldn't so he cut out a pig's heart instead"
stares at the Canadian..uh...ok acts like he knows now
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#15  Edited By Last_Guardian
aztek the lost said:
"Obi Wan Kenobi! said:
"aztek the lost said:
"Obi Wan Kenobi! said:
"nice drift

doesn't remember there being a huntsman in Snow White"
the guy who was supposed to cut her heart out but couldn't so he cut out a pig's heart instead"
stares at the Canadian..uh...ok acts like he knows now"
-_-

at the very beginning of the movie, the guy she runs from into the forest"
lol..it's no use, Aztek...i last saw it when i was like five...lol
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Next ish is coming up....

Just a quick warning I thought I should mention, This is'nt for kids nor aimed at kids. The first issue was dark and as it goes on, It only gets darker.

Just thought I should say that

^_^

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aztek the lost said:
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lmfao, yea, not for kids...*laughs at the irony of it*

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lol

Hey, Look at Billy's Hansel and Gretel. I'm not the only one who's F$^#ed up :P
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And so seven dwarfs sat in there cottage, the first one lazily strung out across the back end of a couch, where as the second one was laid out on the bathroom floor with an empty broken beer bottle gripped into his minuscule knuckles, nearly all of them were passed out and strung out where ever they fell asleep.

In the bathroom......

"Oh no, They're back!...." Muttered Doc as he awoke in a cold sweat, briefly he ripped off his shirt and pants and restlessly scratched every last inch of himself. "Get the F#ck off of me!" He said as he reached for a can of bug spray on the bath room counter. Nearly empty he sprayed himself with all that was left of it. "Not so smart now are ya? Trying to bite me..F#ck you!" Doc shouted as he stumbled into the den, his hands shaking in the entire time, still naked......."I just need one more hit of the stuff" He thought as made his way to the couch, finally he made his way to the couch, it was only a few seconds to get from the bathroom into the den but he felt it was more like hours....underneath one of the soft frilly cushions sat a suit case which he promptly pulled out. "One more hit....One more hit".

Tying up his arm, he reached for his needle and shot up crack cocaine directly into his veins. "Oh god yes" Doc said as he fell back into the couch barely able to look around and see his brothers before he fell into his High.  Five minutes later, a large man hit the door, abruptly knocking with his large fist before he disappeared off into the wilderness. Slowly the Dwarf's eyes began fluttering open and shut with paranoia kicking in, "WHO IS THERE?!!?!" He said as he jumped to his feet, not ever bothering to put pants on.

Snow. was too brutally beaten and bloody to answer, and the Huntsman too far off by now to hear the voice. He could only think of how he could'nt finish what he started. The once feared Huntsman had turned soft? What an odd thought.......

Finally after many long hours, he Dwarf opened the door and dragged the womans body inside, blood trailing along with her. And so he threw her on the couch, stuffing his drugs back underneath that same frilly cushion.


"Darling........You on the right side of the woodssssssssss?" He questioned with a slur in his speech.

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aztek the lost said:
"o_O those are some crazy dwarves..."
lmao....

Told you it gets darker as it go's along :P
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aztek the lost said:
"lol, well when you had the naked drugged up dwarf going to find a bloodied, unconsious woman on the porch, what I thought was coming was actually worse than what you had :P"
Lmfao

Well, I'd make a comment about that, but I might spoil the next ish :P
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#25  Edited By lady_redhead

LOL love the dwarves!!

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Mistress Redhead said:
"LOL love the dwarves!!"
Thanks MR lol

aztek the lost said:
o_O

you are one sick child...so I'm going to enjoy this :D"

lol Good
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lol

Well, I'm off.

Cya guys....

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#32  Edited By ~The Wanderer~

Creepy...but still [insert appropriate complimentary word here] :o

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~The Wanderer~ said:
"Creepy...but still [insert appropriate complimentary word here] :o"
lol

Thanks
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#34  Edited By ~The Wanderer~

lol np. It's just that, whatever word I would have used, it could have been very misinterpreted lol

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We have some "OJ SIMPSON" and "MICHAEL JACKSON" references in here...

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Vlad Tepes Dracula said:
"We have some "OJ SIMPSON" and "MICHAEL JACKSON" references in here..."
Lmao