Vengeance Through Blood

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Prologue

The glistening moon would always beat on his richly defined head. Through the light, his true form was shown. A ghostly, white appearance. The average person would retain shivering, conniving thoughts rushing through their minds. The thoughts that scared them, one step and the word became fear. His body was not helped, but instead disdained by the black clothing which illuminated the skin even more. His lips... his lips so.......disloyal, mischievous,  tantalizing. The blue that the lips bore made him more exotic and frightening than he already seemed.

If you would of introduced yourself to him, and asked for his name, one simple word would be given. Rederick. He was quiet, ordinary, and extremely common. Nights like tonight, his hunt was beginning. The feelings that had once been hovered on him. Torture, pain, agony, terror. He'd felt that before, back in the early sixteen hundreds. The relentlessness of the Europeans were unrivaled, and at the thought a "vampire" they had acted quickly and swiftly. Miserable for Rederick, that was the beginning.

For the next decade, he was kept underground. The European nobles had been right about him, he was a Vampire. Recently turned from a bite, or what some considered, a deal with the devil. His insanity was turned to pure mesh- and the Europeans used this. When he crawled, when he beat at their doors, when he screamed.....the hunger had become to strong.  Soon, the Europeans were dropping the bodies of homeless people, even some middle-class persons, and very rarely- Nobles who had betrayed the ever being fiber of the Order in which kept Rederick confined.

Indecency, self-loathing, depression, and socialistic classes made Rederick someone kept 'out of the loop,' forming himself as an outcaste. However, as the nobles spoke and bore news of a "new world" Rederick seized his chance. Daring as he might, he escaped the vicious, malicious European Nobles. He vowed completely war- he would get back at their families. At their blood lines. He would finish the dirt stained families once and for all. The Nobles Order of Spain would pay, pay for their dastardly deeds.

Rederick fled to the New World, here he watched it prosper and prospered himself along with it. All the while his vengeance to spoil those who spoiled his life, grew into a eager pain. The words of regret would spill onto those peoples- and when the time comes, death to befall their off-spring.

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Chapter 1

Sins of our Forefathers

Just outside of the forest, grassland-ish country of Virginia are many cities, bustling with life and work However, in a mansion, about a miles worth inside the deep rooted, luscious greenery, stands the family of the Boulivardes mansion. Their last known heir, a young twenty two year old in college, owns it with his family’s ludicrous funds. Spoiled to the brim with everything he wants or needs- and even lusts for, he is the American brat. His life has been great, but his families sins have not been un-dug, until now.....

A cold hand withered across the man's face. The hand, belonging to the one and only man able to commit such a horrendous act. Rederick's small, smug smile was hollow.  It was clenched shut; however, after a moment of smelling fear from the young Mr. Boulivardes, he opened his smile. The teeth that were revealed were normal, except for the two longer ones which were demanding to wide-open eyes to contrast a devilish form

" Stop! Leave me alone!" The boy burst into tears.." I don't want to die!" The shrilling screams brought back memories to Rederick. Memories that were now pronounced as cold nightmares.

He moved his tongue like a wild snake. It slithered and churned around his saliva. "Hmm...." The humming tone made a displeasured sound- as if someone was.....hungry." Do you know....Do you know?" He couldn't finish the words. Rederick was about ready to jump for joy. His life was stable, and now he could hunt. Murder, death, disappearances. Two of those were his chosen methods- and right now they were only murder and disappearance.

He smiled and smirked, he breathed hard, he closed his eyes. He flickered his eyes open and closed- OH! The smell of blood would be wafting to him. Once his prey had been....punctured, there would be no stopping his merciless run. He would be running on blood, running on the blood of the vengeance he so was attuned to. Rederick's hand was still beating over the skin of the Boulivardes boy. And as he spoke again, he clenched his hand into a fist, ripping parts of the man's face completely off. The blood was pouring neatly out, and the flesh that held it emasculated the smell.

Screams....Echoless screams....

 

" Shut up!" Rederick's smile became a frown as he began to slap the Boulivardes male across the face. The spoiled brat was becoming more of a handful than he had expected.

" Now! What is your name?" Rederick came close to his prey's ear when he whispered the words. Then he smelled the air. Pheromones, they were his tool, and they were foretelling...Fear.

The answer was a fumbling, stuttering mess. " Sam Boulivardes." He raised his hands in the air, but it was of no use. Sam was strapped neatly to a chair, with only his hands movable- or even viable for help. With Rederick in such close proximity- it would be suicide to attempt an escape.

" Good...I presumed so....." Rederick stopped, as if thinking while he stared into the blond haired, blue eyed man." Oh yes... he is your ancestor..... Duke Walswig Boulivardes of France." Rederick talked as if a mirroring dream, but to Sam, it seemed that Rederick was plotting....plotting ways to kill him. In an aspect- he was absolutely correct.

" Do you know what he did from sixteen twenty to sixteen thirty?"

The answer was solemn and fast, as Sam was beginning to realize his time wearing thin. “No! Why are you bent on torturing my poor soul. My soul in which greed and lust rules. I am not a mortal man of which you think, I am feverishly fond of deceit. So why must you truly torture me?"

Rederick sighed. It was what he thought- Desperation.

" Well. Sam. Your ancestor, Walswig,  tortured me for a decade. He tortured me, along with his other friends, until I was completely insane. The reason...they thought me a Vampire."

Sam laughed through his mangled face. Soon he realized, that Rederick wasn't laughing.

" I am one of these 'Vampires.' Tonight, I seek my revenge on those families in which participated in torturing me. I have vowed to endow their off-spring to a condemned death. You’re unlucky- as your my first....." He smiled and his eyes narrowed."....Prey."

He bent over as the screams intruded on his head. “Oh stop the screaming. No one can hear you here." He smiled. The rest was his dark, twisted truths. He punctured skin, right around the neck area, and then sucked the blood and life-force out of the human male before him. The screams became lifeless and simply, ceased to exist. The body became mostly bone- and the fluids once running through the humanoid known as Sam was gone.

Rederick raised his head, a blood stream ran down a corner of his mouth down to his chin. He sloshed his lips around, catching that blood while returning it to his mouth. He stood there awhile, standing directly in front of Sam Boulivardes, who was now dead. " One down.....nine more to go."

The words hung in the air, the person who had voiced them- gone into the thickness of night. Rederick Nevirarde was now Rederick. Through his name cut short, his lust for vengeance had heightened. With one under his belt, what would stop him from continuing his fiendish tasks.

Time- was of the essence.



 

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That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^

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"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

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"Acer said:
"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

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Welcome cant wait for it.
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"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

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LOL Welcome cant wait for it."

Well.... What would you expect from a artisan like me ? LOL. I like this character more than Mark, Thomas, and Rain-Man put together...so many possibilities. I can actually have a link to why he's evil, or why he's considered evil.

Have you done any Fics yet?
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Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

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LOL Welcome cant wait for it."
Well.... What would you expect from a artisan like me ? LOL. I like this character more than Mark, Thomas, and Rain-Man put together...so many possibilities. I can actually have a link to why he's evil, or why he's considered evil. Have you done any Fics yet?"
Ive done a couple but only short ones. Thinking on doing another.
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Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

"
LOL Welcome cant wait for it."
Well.... What would you expect from a artisan like me ? LOL. I like this character more than Mark, Thomas, and Rain-Man put together...so many possibilities. I can actually have a link to why he's evil, or why he's considered evil. Have you done any Fics yet?"
Ive done a couple but only short ones. Thinking on doing another. "

Well! Hurry up, so we can get even. I can post in your Fics, you post in mine. The balance is good lol.
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"Way to go man."

Thanks Hunta.
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Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"That was great man, i seriously enjoyed it. ^^"


DAMN! XD You read fast.

 

*Bows* Thanks for the props. More to come- probably tomorrow.

"
LOL Welcome cant wait for it."
Well.... What would you expect from a artisan like me ? LOL. I like this character more than Mark, Thomas, and Rain-Man put together...so many possibilities. I can actually have a link to why he's evil, or why he's considered evil. Have you done any Fics yet?"
Ive done a couple but only short ones. Thinking on doing another. "
Well! Hurry up, so we can get even. I can post in your Fics, you post in mine. The balance is good lol."
LMFAO Aiight deal
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LMFAO Aiight deal "

Yea... Just incase. That way. Because most people skip this area for some reason lol.
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"Acer said:
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LMFAO Aiight deal "
Yea... Just incase. That way. Because most people skip this area for some reason lol."
LOL I dont well not usually xP
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"Instant said:
"Acer said:
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lol."
LMFAO Aiight deal "
Yea... Just incase. That way. Because most people skip this area for some reason lol."
LOL I dont well not usually xP"
I truly didn't really expect a response till tomorrow, and even maybe..never. So my hopes are up for this part of the Forums. Remember me when your voting for Fan-Fic of the Month ! Hehehe...XD
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Ch 2

Greed

 Early Morning......

Had Rederick known, his malicious killing the night before was now the headlines of Virginia.  However, at that time, he was sleeping. Resting within his bed at a broken down motel. The curtains were closed soundly- not even the glistening rays of the sun could penetrate the dark fabricate curtains. Impregnable as they might be, Rederick had them closed for reasons. Just so we can put facts from fantasies aside, a short bio would be explained by Rederick himself- if anyone asked of course. By the time they did, he was upon them, devouring their nutrients as if a vampire bat. He explained at length the true story of what Vampires were really weak at. Firstly, the sun did not matter. However, since most Vampires were vanquished and condemned to the darkness of cells and other sorts of things, the sun quite often bothered them. Hence, the closed curtains, and the sun not peering in to react onto his skin- and if so the rest of his body. It also, weakens the state of a Vampires powers- diluting them to a weaker form

Therefore, Rederick could walk among those of the living. The other being- most Vampires were still human. These Vampires weren't readily predicted and were very ominous, although the ones who had lost themselves to the 'blood' were just shallow shells- basically skeletons. The Vampires still pertaining to some human traits- did not go out hunting for blood daily. The Vampires who lusted for the blood however, like Dracula, were often seen by many, and exterminated out of fear. Even though Vampires with human traits mostly, did not hunt for blood, they still needed it to survive. To survive, they need blood. Most vampires go after live stock, but the bolder ones go after humanoid forms.

Rederick wasn't a hunter by birth. He wasn't really...blood lusted like others. Rederick didn't hunt daily, like some others, and basically was a calm, cool, and collective man. The only reason he did not venture out during the day, like other Vampires- was because they were like nocturnal owls.  During the night, they stalked and skulked around, during the day- the feasted on their backs- regaining strength from their previous activities. Occasionally though, this chain could be broken. Very rarely was it broken though, as the routine was strong and powerful- almost as if a curse.

Stakes, the wondrous woodened, pointed at one side, flat on the other side weapon. Now stakes to the heart were fatal. However, if the body was not burned and the cremated remains let out around an area, the Vampire would eventually regain its composure, and come back to the Earthly position it holds. Silver, as is said. Silver to main assortments of arteries was slightly fatal. And it would take months, even years for a body to reform into the Vampire it so wished to be. Mind Control, Superhuman strength, and speed, those were all true. The variation was in the transformation, or shifting of a Vampire to an animal. Now it is expected that Vamps can only turn to bats- however they can change into an assortment of other creatures along with shifting the specific Vampires density to match the chosen animal.

As much as we can get into this subject, there are many variations within the Vampires that are real, as is Rederick- and the Vampires made by humans, who die at the suns rays, who die at stakes, who die at silver. Rederick- throughout his years, has seen ever Vampire-related movie known and made. Each one is another let down, and a let down that often makes him slightly angered at spending the precious time of night to watch it. But, those were the victims who knew this valuable information before they died at the hands of Rederick. Sam Boulivardes had been to naive to ask such a question, therefore, Rederick didn't explain how or what he came to be.

So as Rederick slept, reports from all over Virginia stormed the Boulivardes mansion. Taking footage, and anticipating what could have caused such a horrific thing. As they imagined, Rederick dreamed. Dreamed of the days before his torture in the sixteenth century, and during the time in which he was tortured to near insanity. He even dreamed a little about the screams of Sam- in which he had enjoyed. Retribution, one by one, retribution would be sought after. As the screams would tighten around his head, he would think them halos of his past- for what their families had done to him, could never be 'un-done.'

The tortures he had endured, the pain he had felt, the hopelessness he had undergone. Those experiences could never be un-tied, un-done, or even forgotten. Through his dreams, his body began to turn and churn- as the nightmares began to reappear within his brain. What he had feared to become- had now been his only survival. A blood thirsty beast could not, or even would not witness him in his frenzy. This, because, a human scorned, was not human any more-and was ruthless, relentless, and virtually ferocious.

-Flashback-

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Rederick had his face towards the ground. He was fastened to a wooden seat in a middle of a small room, and the room was pitch black virtually making him loose the size of it. His instincts were taking him over, and now, he had retained a sort of 'night vision.' However, through this, he was mentally and physically disheartened. He was hungered, and deprived of food of any sorts. The people holding him, would rather see him die then see him escape. His captors, as frightened as they might be, still wanted him to be retained. So, they were planning to 'feed' him the thing he needed most. The thing he needed to survive. The one thing, they feared losing....Their own blood....

The door busted open. The rays of the sun berated down into the room. Rederick squinted and turned his head- the sun was now beginning to hurt him. He had lost count of how many days he had been confined. In his mind, it seemed about seven years, which was right, but he denied the fact as he thought it may have been more than ten since his capturing. Since then, he had endured beatings, of which he lost blood. Then they fed him rodents- in which he devoured for the simple thought of survival. His mental barriers were breaking. His love, Gienvive, hadn't seen him for more than nine long, horrendous years. Almost three years before he had been captured, Rederick had been bitten- then he had run.

Gienvive, he wished for her, he wished to see her once more. To smell her perfume, the luscious smells in which he held 'o so dear' to his own contemplation. Now, here he was, dressed in rags, rags in which were soaked with the blood of his beatings, dampening them after each one. He had had no baths, no area to use the bathroom. So in each corner of the room, urine and Rederick's thesis littered- giving the smell unwanted by many.  Gienvive, he wondered what she would say to him, wondered if she would walk out on loving him if she would see him in a weakened position that he was in now.

" You!" A Spanish induced voice raced into Rederick's ear. He looked over. The door was closed, and now lighting a room, a few large candles held by white skinned hands. They were not ghostly pale, but instead, that of a normal rich man's. They were greased with what seemed to be meat, as if the person had been eating before coming down into the cellar-like room. There instead, were two people. They were silent until they reached the last step on a straight staircase. When they landed, the same man spoke again, as the light of a candle brushed near him, Rederick recognized him. " Your hungry aren't you beast?" Rederick shrugged, and spit on the ground. " Oh, Henry Charnestki,  Poland awaits,  so seriously, can you expect me to be hungry?" He spoke in a sarcastic tone.

"Oh, yes I can expect you to be hungry, hungry  for even the rest of your life you fool!" He stopped after screaming towards Rederick, when he began again- his voice was now toned down." However, we know what you truly are. Your a scoundrel to your own...... You have the marks of a Vampire on you, right on your left neck. It pains me to see it, each time I wish to burn you alive, I wish it so.... As much as I wish, Derick has other plans for you." He stopped and pointed to the second man- now Rederick realized him as another abuser- Derick the Destroyer, or Derick von Valles of Lithuania.

As now, you are realizing many people, from all sides of the spectrum, were involved in torturing Rederick. It was a sporting season for them, they took shifts. These months, it was Lithuania and Poland. Next month, France and London. The torture was like adrenaline to the participants. They seemed to enjoy hiding him inside a small cottage off the coast of Rome, and therefore putting him to insanity without the worries of other's hearing his screams and shouts.  Now, they would abuse him again- and here maybe, just maybe, feed him the rats and other rodents he needed to survive.

Derick smiled with a face of a true Vamp. He was as malicious as one, and non-forgiving to mix. " I think you'll enjoy this.." He smiled and spoke under his breath." I know I will." Then, as if my magic, he pulled a whip from behind him. Derick's inner evils came to light. Sadly, Rederick was the absorber of this. His body was whipped, his body was bloodied, his body was utterly destroyed. Yet he never once voiced a scream- he'd lost hope long ago for someone to save him. The pain never ceased, and marks- long gashes, formed and gored around his body until what seemed to be a large circle of blood formed around his feet. Pouring neatly it dampened his clothes- or rags, and slowly he lost his will to fight.

-End Flashback-

Rederick woke with a jolt. His heart was pounding as it raced, following with the heaving and inhaling-exhaling that overcame him. His body was drenched in sweat, the bed he lay in the same. He felt so wet. So dirty. So filthy. It reminded him of that he feared to become, a slave to the people who sought him a prize. The sun was setting, the night was coming. He needed to prepare himself. He took his time though, he thought of his dream, and of the love he never saw again. Of his tormentors- and most of all the dream he did not have; his escape. 

 Dreams were literally nightmares as stated before- they were vivid and rhetorically true. After awhile of thinking, he slipped out of the bed. Rederick took a short bath, slipped decent clothing on, and tonight- decided to go to a bar and relax his mind from the very real thoughts that clouded it. He hoped to have a good time- and maybe control his blood sucking talons held within his mouth. Tonight, he didn't want trouble like the night before. It was less than twenty four hours since his last murder- why make everything suspicious? There was no need to, and he had all the time in the world to torture the descendents of his tormentors.

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Bar- 4 hours later

Pennsylvania

Rederick sat on a bar stool in the center of a lively bar. The area was ablaze with people. Everyone seemed to have something to do, whether it be drinking, playing pool, or even just watching the News Channel- which was also covering the mysterious death of said Sam Boulivardes. Rederick watched it as he drank a beer. He laughed when a reporter literally said, ' It is suspected an animal has done this, but I do not know if that is a human animal or just a regular animal. I seems unknown if we'll ever know the true side effects from this one murder. There might be a string more, and if so, we have a serial killer- who only likes to talk with himself.'

Talk with himself? What? Was he supposed to go sending letters to Police Departments about him killing people? The world was naive, now a four hundred year old Vampire was the shit, meaning he knew his shit too. This 'New World' was a bunch of brats, liars, thieves, and greed- that all people in America had. The lust for money was powered by greed, and it seemed the 'seven deadly sins' were always in use. In a future such as this- what was wrong with having a 'animalistic kill?' Maybe he was just a sociopath, to Rederick though, it really didn't matter. If he went after someone they were dead.

After drinking down his bear, Rederick got out of his stool and began to flirt around. He was mesmerizing, and that was the truth. He used his 'Vampire charm' to lure the girls in. It was basically done after that, he kissed a few girls, danced around, and after his fun- relaxed. When his partying was done, he slipped into some small dinner and began to plan his next attack.

For hours, along with a few coffees, he thought about each and every person who had tortured him. Ten countries had participants, France was out of the picture, but his dream was beginning to take a toll. Derick. The man who had feverishly whipped him almost to near death- that was the one he wanted. The scars in his dream- of course remained. Sadly enough- they were to strong for him to heal from. All across his body were marks from those experiences. The one man who had performed them, Derick. That man was the main tormentor of Rederick.

However a tormentor, he had not been the leader of the motley crew. Boulivardes had been dealt with, and there forth- there was only the nine 'followers' that needed to be compromised. If Valles was the next family to be ended, he needed to collect information on the whereabouts- and if there was more than one heir. For he planned on completely clipping the family; cutting the line from reproducing. The beasts that had confined him could not be killed now- but the beasts descendants could. They would pay, and maybe, just maybe, the Lithuanian children would have heard their families estranged tales.

He wanted them to feel the fear he would bring. Frightening pain. Agony- he wanted to smell their emotions so vibrantly. If there was only one- than he would smell that one persons emotions until it was blended into his nose. Then he would use his methods- and kill the person in a different way in which he had killed Sam Boulivardes.  Maybe laceration, maybe decapitation, maybe hemorrhages The possibilities were flowing through him. Rederick was, however, gone before the sun arose. He checked into a different hotel than the one he had last been in Virginia. Pennsylvania reminded him of Transylvania- but either way: Dracula had been dumb enough to get killed.

Truth be told, Rederick wasn't dumb enough to get killed- or get caught. Aggravation was a soothing, settling pain- and aggravation he would feel as he hunted for the Valles family heirs or heir.

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Sick man, loving the story.

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"Sick man, loving the story."

Thanks Ace... I like my quality of posts in this Fic.
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"Acer said:
"Sick man, loving the story."
Thanks Ace... I like my quality of posts in this Fic."
Keep it up. I'll be the first to read the next chapter
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"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Sick man, loving the story."
Thanks Ace... I like my quality of posts in this Fic."
Keep it up. I'll be the first to read the next chapter"

I Might just have to wait till you off-line to post it lol. Naw... Sadly, your my only devoted follower XD

Seriously though, Thanks for the comments.
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I'm in awe. You did your thing, Man. I'm honestly impressed.

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"I'm in awe. You did your thing, Man. I'm honestly impressed."
Thanks, means alot from a BA bro 4 life.
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"Acer said:
"Instant said:
"Acer said:
"Sick man, loving the story."
Thanks Ace... I like my quality of posts in this Fic."
Keep it up. I'll be the first to read the next chapter"
I Might just have to wait till you off-line to post it lol. Naw... Sadly, your my only devoted follower XD Seriously though, Thanks for the comments."
LMMAO I just wont sleep :P

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aztek the lost said:
"I would read this since I'm sure its good but since I don't know you, I feel no obligation to hurry (yes, I admit, I read fan-fic's bias-ly) and I'm doing submissions (and I'm lazy)...so, after the weekend (I'll be on vacation) I'll probably catch up"

I'm not that new.....I've been here almost a year as alot of people. Mark/Rain Man/Thomas Lee Jamison....
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Acer said:
"Instant said:
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"Sick man, loving the story."
Thanks Ace... I like my quality of posts in this Fic."
Keep it up. I'll be the first to read the next chapter"
I Might just have to wait till you off-line to post it lol. Naw... Sadly, your my only devoted follower XD Seriously though, Thanks for the comments."
LMMAO I just wont sleep :PWelcome"

Your so devoted lol... No sleep, taking one for the team- good work
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#25  Edited By Acer

LOL Its how i role :p

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Acer said:
"LOL Its how i role :p"

So you like cyber stalk Comic Vine until people u kno get online. Dat is crazy , keep rolling like that. I'll roll like I am lol
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#28  Edited By Legacy_
Claps, good job Instant (I'll finish reading Part 2 later today)
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Thanks.

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aztek the lost said:
"Instant said:
"aztek the lost said:
"I would read this since I'm sure its good but since I don't know you, I feel no obligation to hurry (yes, I admit, I read fan-fic's bias-ly) and I'm doing submissions (and I'm lazy)...so, after the weekend (I'll be on vacation) I'll probably catch up"
I'm not that new.....I've been here almost a year as alot of people. Mark/Rain Man/Thomas Lee Jamison...."
I figured you were some guy I'd bumped into before, but I still don't know you so HA :D"

wow.... Mark1212..never seen me in the RP forums?????