Ultimate Batman #4

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****Please read these before continuing:  
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/ultimate-batman-1/609393/  
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/ultimate-batman-2/609600/  
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/ultimate-batman-3/610059/ 
Now that these have been read, you may continue****  
 
 
The Bat-Man pulled up into his cave...his "bat-cave" (He thought about putting the word "Bat" in front of every tool he used, but then he changed his mind, thinking it was ridiculous)  
 
His butler, Alfred met him in the entrance.  
"And who do we have, here, Master Bruce?"  
"Leuitenant James Gordon. He needs medical attention." Bat-Man grunted as he put Gordon's body on the table.  
"Master Bruce!" Alfred exclaimed "You've been shot!"  
"Take care of *nnngh* Gordon first."  
"Master Bruce, your wound is much more serious, I should take care of you."  
"Do...whatever you must."  
 
Arkham Asylum:  
 
Joker's car full of henchmen pulled up to the gates.   
"And who are you visiting?" The man asked.  
Joker pulled out a gun and shot him.  
 
Joker then parked his car, and everyone jumped out of the car.  
"Get a move on, boys!" Joker told them.  
 
Quickly, the men put plastique all over the doors to several cells. Eventually, cops caught them. Joker already had it covered. He had snipers positioned for anyone who tried to interfere with their plans.  
A door blew up with a loud crash! Two Face stepped out.  
"Harvey, old buddy!" Joker exclaimed. "We're in it big now!"  
Two Face smiled. "Good to know."  
"SOMEBODY FIND MY MY HARLEY!" Joker shouted.  
"Right here, puddin'!" Shouted Joker's girlfriend, Harley Quinn.  
"Good...I've got a job for you, Harley my dear....."  
 
The Bat-Man sped in his car, talking to Alfred on his intercom.  
"Master Bruce, are you sure you'll be all right going out with a freshly stitched bullet wound?"  
"I'll be fine, Alfred, don't worry."  
 
Bat-Man pulled into Arkham. The minute he got out of his car, he was kicked in the face with a red boot!  
"So you're the Bat my puddin' told me about? She kicked his face. "not much of a fighter, are ya?"  
Harley went for another kick, BatMan caught it. "That's where you're wrong." He pulled her leg, and slammed her shoulder as she fell to the ground.  
 
Harley backflipped and landed on the Bat, then backflipped again, with her legs wrapped around his neck. He fell to the ground.  
"I say ya not!" She ran at him, Bat Man ducked and hit her in the back of the head. Harley turned around and tried a right cross followed by a left.. Batman blocked both. She went for a kick, but Batman dodged. He imitated her and did the exact same movements she did, only he landed his.  
 
Harley pulled a gun from her belt, and started shooting at Bat Man. He ducked for cover. After ten shots were fired, he approached her.  
"Game over, you have no bullets.  
He hit her dead on with a punch.  
 
"still....got....one trick...up my...sleeve," said a barely concious Harley. She pressed a button on her belt. Suddenly, all the inmates of Arkham rushed out of the building as it exploded.  
 
"NO!" Bat Man shouted, he noted no sercurity guards came out. They were either dead...or would be soon. "This can't be good." Bat-Man said to himself.    
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#2  Edited By Icon

This is pretty action packed. :D

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#3  Edited By Mechanical_Ape

Nice work so far. The action was well written and entertaining.

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thank ya both!
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#5  Edited By TypingKira

Harley Quinn! sorry. . .  
   
Great job with the action and the suspense, I loved the fight with Harley and her's and Joker dialogue especially :}

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#7  Edited By The Impersonator
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I'm watching a summer blockbuster movie here. Great chapter!
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#8  Edited By InnerVenom123

Again, I love how Batman's first big challenge is taking on all of his rogues at once when they've been active before him! Great work!