TMNT vs Predator: Fade Into the Night

Before I get into the second volume of Old Man Logan vs Kraven, I'd like to bring together two of my favorite franchises: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and the Predator.

I'm currently building the story and I'll likely write it in the comic format, just like I did for the second and third chapters of Old Man Logan vs Kraven.

Chapter 1 (just a 2 page preview)

Written by Gregg Katzman

PAGE 1: 6 panels

PANEL 1

Raphael’s foot slams across a Foot Clan Ninja’s face

RAPHAEL: I don’t get it, Casey.

PANEL 2

Casey Jones’ baseball bat crashes against the back of a Foot Ninja’s neck

CASEY JONES: Don’t get what, Raph?

PANEL 3

Raphael knees a Foot Clan Ninja in the gut

RAPHAEL: These Foot Clan guys have one job, you know? They just gotta be really good at fighting. But when’s the last time you felt threatened by one of these goofs?

PANEL 4

CASEY JONES: I don’t think we gotta hit ‘em with verbal blows while we’re also literally beating them up, Raph. Just seems mean, man.

PANEL 5

Raphael disarms a Foot Clan Ninja

RAPHAEL: Maybe this guy can tell me. Hey, generic Foot Clan Ninja #1,984. What’s up with you guys being so easy to pound on?

PANEL 6

Raphael holds the Foot Clan ninja in a headlock

RAPHAEL: You guys must train all day. Why can’t you give me and my buddy here a decent work out?

FOOT CLAN NINJA: Die, arrogant freak.

PAGE 2: 3 Panels

PANEL 1

Raphael punches the Foot Clan Ninja in the face, knocking him out

RAPHAEL: I ain’t a freak!

PANEL 2

Raphael and Casey stand over a bunch of defeated Foot Clan Ninjas on a New York rooftop. One Foot Clan Ninja can be seen fleeing the melee as he leaps away from the rooftop.

CASEY JONES: So you’re totally cool with the whole arrogant thing, then?

RAPHAEL: I got the runner!

CASEY JONES: Good talk, Raph.

PANEL 3

This one is from the Predator’s perspective as it uses infrared vision, the primary vision mode used by Predators in the films. The Predator is on a taller building nearby, looking down on Raphael and Casey as they chase after the fleeing Foot Clan Ninja.

PREDATOR: >Die, arrogant freak<

Updated the OP with a 2 page preview.

I know it's just a 2 page preview at the moment, but if you do take a moment or two to read it, your honest feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks.

I'll try to have the first chapter completed by the end of the week. Shooting for 8 pages. Would love feedback on the preview if anyone is willing to offer it.

@k4tzm4n: Everything is great so far. All characters sound like themselves (Well, the two we actually hear) and Predators make every thing cooler.

I'm just sitting here waiting for Laura to get her rematch with Ana.

@guardiandevil83: Thank you so much!

They'll definitely have a rematch, and I plan on showing how Ana captured Laura, too.