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#1 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Through this little contraption i see all your sins and all you deeds.

I see your infidelities, lies, and your wickedness.

Like today menu

Milo Venkulos, I see his affair, his dirtly little secret. I see him sitting in his chair watching the dancer in front of him. His eyes bulge as she dances, he gestures for her to come closer.

Cocks rifle

I see all of his evil deeds. His rapes, theiving and his killings of entire families.

Red dot centers on Milos forehead

" She will get over this site"

Pulls the trigger

Milos head pops like a balloon. His eyes are the first that hits the girls head. She screams and bellows as her client has died in her service.

She will get over it.

I bring my attention to the guards entering his room. The first was the messiest. I shook for a second and take off the right side of his face, yet he still squerms as he hits the wall blood squirting every where. A pleasant sight to see it is. The one behind this one was easy he looks up for a second and i take off the top of his head.

I pull the sniper apart and put it back in the duffel bag and walk down from my roost. Listening to the screams still echoing from the woman. I do have rules no woman and no children. I am a man of honor in that respect but people dont hire me for that. They hire me for my sheer uncaring. I dont care who these men i kill are or who they leave behind. Caring gets in the way of a clean kill.

My name is..well you dont have the privlege of that knowledge yet.

End

Alright i want real honesty here please. i will send you guys the unedited form of this if needed. but i think i was pretty obvious with what was going on in the room without breaking any rules.

please comment
Post Edited:2007-09-16 16:22:22

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#2 Posted by crazy spidey (3474 posts) - - Show Bio

'cock sniper', ahahhahahahahah

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#3 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

crazy spidey says:

"'cock sniper', ahahhahahahahah"

be mature u idjit i put this on here for one reason to see if i can go somewhre else rather than superheros and villains

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#4 Posted by JT (671 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"Through this little contraption i see all your sins and all you deeds. I see your infidelities, lies, and your wickedness. Like today menu Milo Venkulos, I see his affair, his dirtly little secret. I see him sitting in his chair watching the dancer in front of him. His eyes bulge as she dances, he gestures for her to come closer. *Cock sniper* I see all of his evil deeds. His rapes, theiving and his killings of entire families. *Red dot centers on Milos forehead* " She will get over this site" *Pulls the trigger* Milos head pops like a balloon. His eyes are the first that hits the girls head. She screams and bellows as her client has died in her service. She will get over it. I bring my attention to the guards entering his room. The first was the messiest. I shook for a second and take off the right side of his face, yet he still squerms as he hits the wall blood squirting every where. A pleasant sight to see it is. The one behind this one was easy he looks up for a second and i take off the top of his head. I pull the sniper apart and put it back in the duffel bag and walk down from my roost. Listening to the screams still echoing from the woman. I do have rules no woman and no children. I am a man of honor in that respect but people dont hire me for that. They hire me for my sheer uncaring. I dont care who these men i kill are or who they leave behind. Caring gets in the way of a clean kill. My name is..well you dont have the privlege of that knowledge yet. End Alright i want real honesty here please. i will send you guys the unedited form of this if needed. but i think i was pretty obvious with what was going on in the room without breaking any rules. please comment"

It's good. It could be a good game.

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#5 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

yes iwill but its all i got done so far cause i dont like making fanfics and getting no responces to continue them like my tohers.

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#6 Posted by Sparda (15794 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"Through this little contraption i see all your sins and all you deeds. I see your infidelities, lies, and your wickedness. Like today menu Milo Venkulos, I see his affair, his dirtly little secret. I see him sitting in his chair watching the dancer in front of him. His eyes bulge as she dances, he gestures for her to come closer. *Cocks rifle* I see all of his evil deeds. His rapes, theiving and his killings of entire families. *Red dot centers on Milos forehead* " She will get over this site" *Pulls the trigger* Milos head pops like a balloon. His eyes are the first that hits the girls head. She screams and bellows as her client has died in her service. She will get over it. I bring my attention to the guards entering his room. The first was the messiest. I shook for a second and take off the right side of his face, yet he still squerms as he hits the wall blood squirting every where. A pleasant sight to see it is. The one behind this one was easy he looks up for a second and i take off the top of his head. I pull the sniper apart and put it back in the duffel bag and walk down from my roost. Listening to the screams still echoing from the woman. I do have rules no woman and no children. I am a man of honor in that respect but people dont hire me for that. They hire me for my sheer uncaring. I dont care who these men i kill are or who they leave behind. Caring gets in the way of a clean kill. My name is..well you dont have the privlege of that knowledge yet. End Alright i want real honesty here please. i will send you guys the unedited form of this if needed. but i think i was pretty obvious with what was going on in the room without breaking any rules. please comment
Post Edited:2007-09-16 16:22:22"

Are you, like, continuing it?

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#7 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

it will also get ALOT more violent if what i have working in my head pans out. also i dont know if it will be doable on the forums since kids come to the site

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#8 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Sparda says:

"I think it could have great potential. You've opened up into something that could (and probably will) rock. Good job, I look forward to reading future installments!"

thanks mate i like that man thanks

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#9 Posted by Sparda (15794 posts) - - Show Bio

I think it could have great potential. You've opened up into something that could (and probably will) rock. Good job, I look forward to reading future installments!

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#10 Posted by crazy spidey (3474 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"it will also get ALOT more violent if what i have working in my head pans out. also i dont know if it will be doable on the forums since kids come to the site"

It should with all those cock snipers

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#11 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

i know it could have but what i have in it will get in thewayof the lets keep it clean so ill keep the violence but kick the sex and sexual acts.

the next part will be up in a few once i work it all outin my head

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#12 Posted by Donnieman v5.1 (44210 posts) - - Show Bio

looks good, could have been better

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#13 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Walks down the scafflting of the building he was on

Once i make my way to the bottom i straighten my coat out and procceed to the drop off point. They said they would exchange the money with me at the train station.

I make my way to the train station and i notice my rendezvous. He is dressed like an idiot trying to be inconspicuous. Dark trench coat and his hand inside his coat.

Moron has his hand on the gun ready for any cop. I swear they send me the most moronic people to rendezvous with

I meet up with him hoping for a quick exchange but he gestures me to the restrooms.

Restrooms

(Translated from Russian)

" The boss needs to speak with you, he has further jobs for you american"

I look at this bumbling oaf and with a crass look

" You suggest for me to put myself out more for a man only paying me the lowest amounts, pardon my french but f$%$ off."

I proceed to walk away but i dont get far before the moron puts his hand on me.

" It would be in your best interest to remove that monkey hand off of me"

" NO! you will come with me"

I turn around in a quick motion grasping his pudgy hand in mine and twisting until i hear a pop and a crack. I proceed to further break his wrist completly pulling it out of its sockets and pulling out my silencer and putting it to his head.

" Fine. Where am i suppose to meet with DE BOSS?"

The oaf looks up at me in pain an tells me im to meet his boss at a church London.

" Thank you"

I pull the trigger quickly and walk from the restroom.

I drive to the airport and make a flight for London. Hell if i can make a bit more money before returning to America i will.

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#14 Posted by Walkingstone (10637 posts) - - Show Bio

It would make a good script for a comic :) Maybe some more description of the assassin and his target, what they look like, maybe add in scents and tastes to it, give it more depth if you want it as a story.
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#15 Posted by Hagane Enna (7388 posts) - - Show Bio

Wow, the minimal styling suits the story. Makes it go at a good pace.

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#16 Posted by The_Ghostshell (84303 posts) - - Show Bio

It sucks! LMFAO, cock sniper hahahahaha

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#17 Posted by crazy spidey (3474 posts) - - Show Bio

King of Kings says:

"It sucks! LMFAO, cock sniper hahahahaha"

omfg see it is funny

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#18 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

The flight to London was long and drawn out more aless boring as hell, although i did manage to hit on a flight attendant.

We will be landing in London in 10 minutes please fasten your seatbelts

" Like anyone actually forgot. I swear lifes little hints get annoying."

Plane hits a bit of turbulence, sending my head into the cabinet above me.

" Alright i get the point" raising fist to the air.

I finally arrive in London to be greeted by a woman dressed in red head to toe, nothing to the imagination.

" Aww how sweet, they send me candy thats already been open."

Ass$#$%!

" I get that alot, so are you going to stand their and attempt at looking civilized or are we going."

Again i repeat ASS!!

I think to myself * I love being and ass*

I am brought to a very nice limo and "persuaded into the car"

" Ow, A little bit nicer huh" I say to the witch standing outside the car.

The witch sits beside be and then the window to the front of the comes down. Revealing the russian boss and a rather large man sitting to his left.

" What happen to Ivan?" The boss says looking for the oaf from before.

" We had a disagreement and i won the argument."

The man shrugs this off as if he looses his men everyday.

" I have another job for you. Rather simple one. You go in quietly.."

I cut him off. " I usually do my jobs from a high point who said i was a grounds guy. Im out."

I gesture for the car to stop when a wad of bills is thrown into my lap. From the looks of it 10k american dollars.

" Ok, so what is it exactly what i am suppose to do?"

The russain returns to when i interrupted him " You go in quietly and take out a man by the name of George Franklin. And then exit the building, thats it simple as i said before."

" What are this Georges specs"

The Russian begins to tell me the man weighs 190 lbs, lives with his family in a cottage in the mountains. No way of suspition from any outside sources. Like he said easy.

" Ill be glad to say my russain friends this will be our last job together" The russain nods his head and i exit the car.

Inside the car

Russain boss " When he gets the job done, kill the family and the American prick"

Man to his left nods in acceptance.

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#19 Posted by crazy spidey (3474 posts) - - Show Bio

actually this story overly simplistic, I mean Iknow ur going for the apathetic uncaring guy but they are also the most complicated and you can't seem to pull it off no offense

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#20 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

crazy spidey says:

"actually this story overly simplistic, I mean Iknow ur going for the apathetic uncaring guy but they are also the most complicated and you can't seem to pull it off no offense"

lol thanks mate. at least u made fun of my work nicly lol

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#21 Posted by crazy spidey (3474 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"crazy spidey says:
"actually this story overly simplistic, I mean Iknow ur going for the apathetic uncaring guy but they are also the most complicated and you can't seem to pull it off no offense"
lol thanks mate. at least u made fun of my work nicly lol"

np thats how KRATOS roles

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#22 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

also i never said he was totally uncaring he is uncaring in the fact that his kills mean nothing to him in the fact his kills are only men and nothing else so if he kills a man for money it means nothing.

i know im not the most complicated men of all time cryptic yes complicated no.

well im off for the night wel until 10 im going to a movie with my whatever u want to call her

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#23 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"Through this little contraption i see all your sins and all you deeds.I see your infidelities, lies, and your wickedness.Like today menuMilo Venkulos, I see his affair, his dirtly little secret. I see him sitting in his chair watching the dancer in front of him. His eyes bulge as she dances, he gestures for her to come closer.*Cocks rifle*I see all of his evil deeds. His rapes, theiving and his killings of entire families.*Red dot centers on Milos forehead*" She will get over this site"*Pulls the trigger*Milos head pops like a balloon. His eyes are the first that hits the girls head. She screams and bellows as her client has died in her service.She will get over it.I bring my attention to the guards entering his room. The first was the messiest. I shook for a second and take off the right side of his face, yet he still squerms as he hits the wall blood squirting every where. A pleasant sight to see it is. The one behind this one was easy he looks up for a second and i take off the top of his head.I pull the sniper apart and put it back in the duffel bag and walk down from my roost. Listening to the screams still echoing from the woman. I do have rules no woman and no children. I am a man of honor in that respect but people dont hire me for that. They hire me for my sheer uncaring. I dont care who these men i kill are or who they leave behind. Caring gets in the way of a clean kill.My name is..well you dont have the privlege of that knowledge yet.EndAlright i want real honesty here please. i will send you guys the unedited form of this if needed. but i think i was pretty obvious with what was going on in the room without breaking any rules.please comment
Post Edited:2007-09-16 16:22:22"

i likes! has good stuff would e an actually interessting book or film script. and or even game. but still... awsome!

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#24 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

and i like the details :D

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#25 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Abandoned pornshop

"Alright. Two handguns 9mm, one sawed off shotgun, and ammo to last me until i piss off another woman with a knife. Now i gotta clean them again."

Half an hour later.

" I swear this nervous habits beginning to bug me. cleans the barrel of the handgun "

Phone rings

"Yes, Mr.Smirnoff."

Dammit you american that is not my name.

"I know. Its easier to pronounce than Krasocorvika. See even trying to do it in my head hurts."

You are a real pain in my ass, alright the cottage is in the mountains towards the west. His family consists of a daughter age 15 and a wife age 45. He has a routine he goes into his study at 8 oclock on the dot every day. His family stays downstairs or in their rooms.

Finishes putting the guns back together

" Alright Smirnoff, I will be their in 30 minutes. You sure you have given me all the information i requested and no one will be their to bother me."

Yes american. The perimiter was secured and my men will leave when you get their.

" Good bye."

Phone clicks

Russain penthouse

Be sure to keep my men at least 20 yards from the house and if help is needed signal them. Gregor you know your mission.

The man from the car nods and readies himself for the trip to the mountains.

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#26 Posted by Paragon (7283 posts) - - Show Bio

Hmmm... Interesting, however, I couldn't really get into it, because I guess that mass violence isn't really my scene. I also found that those short sentences took away from the whole story since they almost broke the flow. But that's just my criticism. Not too bad though. Has potential.

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#27 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Paragon says:

"Hmmm... Interesting, however, I couldn't really get into it, because I guess that mass violence isn't really my scene. I also found that those short sentences took away from the whole story since they almost broke the flow. But that's just my criticism. Not too bad though. Has potential."

thank u Para i will continue it since i got more goods than bads in responces and even the bads were just telling me what i should do with it.

once i have an entire day to myself hmmm tomorrow from 12pm till morning time to myself i will add more but with more depth and longer posts.

but i want to again add. the hitman will be uncaring to soem degree not all degrees

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#28 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"Paragon says:
"Hmmm... Interesting, however, I couldn't really get into it, because I guess that mass violence isn't really my scene. I also found that those short sentences took away from the whole story since they almost broke the flow. But that's just my criticism. Not too bad though. Has potential."

thank u Para i will continue it since i got more goods than bads in responces and even the bads were just telling me what i should do with it.

once i have an entire day to myself hmmm tomorrow from 12pm till morning time to myself i will add more but with more depth and longer posts.

but i want to again add. the hitman will be uncaring to soem degree not all degrees"

;D great story so far i find it quite cool how u actually make me (us) picture the scenes of the hitmans journey...its.... how should i say amazing!

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#29 Posted by Zaraki Ichigo (6439 posts) - - Show Bio

Story is going pretty well so far. You first post was stronger at drawing in the audiance though. The rest effectively keep people reading, now you just need to keep that energy up. And don't be afraid of skipping shock value posts, not everything has to be about porn or violence. The last post is really good and has none of the violence, but the pornshop part was almost like you were trying to keep the shock there when you didn't need to, you already had the readers without it. In all honesty though, good job, when is the next one?

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#30 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Mountain Top

"Huff huff huff Next...time..i need..to ask where exactly on the mountain my next job is. Sweet jesus that was long, i wasnt made for this."

Takes out binoculars

"Hmm i can see George from here. Man i could take him out right now if i had my sniper, alas this had to be a close kill."

I make my way towards the cottage, when i see a man in dark out of the corner of my eye about 20 yards from the house.

I sneak up behind the baffoon and slip my knife onto his throat. " I thought i told you guys to stay away and leave this to me!"

twig breaks

I swing around taking my gun out of its holster " Oh its you, why are you here?"

Gregor speaks horrible english so this is all i could understand " You can put the gun down now, I was sent in case "anything" happens during your mission."

Eyebrow raises

" How could anything go wrong huh?"

Umm you can let me go now.

I slip the blade from the henchman's throat and put it back in its holster.

" Now am i going to need to tell you boys to stay put with mister trigger happy" waving gun

Gregor mutters something in Russain and i exit the forest.

I sneak up to the cottage and look up at the ladder to the window " No wonder they call us Americans idiots."

I sneak my way into the window and hide in the dim room, and George finally walks into his office.

He sits in his seat and begins to type away at his computer. I manuver myself behind him but also keeping myself away from the reflection of the computer screen. My gun aimed at the back of his head.

Fwoot

He slumps over, his head hitting the keyboard with a rather loud thud.

"Hmm that was rather easy."

" What was that the women were suppose to be downstairs."

I make my way out of his office and peer around the corner and look down stairs.

The wife and daughter are kneeling down on the floor. I for some reason rush to see what is going on and i meet with the butt of a shotgun, falling to the floor.

"Please dont do this where is my husband?" The wife pleads, while the girl weeps next to her.

I lean up " What ARE YOU DOING! NO WOMEN OR CHILDREN!!"

Gregor mutters one thing " That is your code Not mine."

And he puts the barrel of the shotgun to the wifes head and the man to his left puts the barrel of a 9mm to the daughters.

The two blonde women slump to the floor in a pool of their own blood.

He turns around and points his shotgun at me.

" Your turn."

I swing my body around and grab the man who hit me in the face and pull the shotgun from his grasp.

I attempt to fire but nothing comes out.

" Simple man you think i be that stupid."

My eyes widen as he pulls the trigger sending my bloody body flying into the wall. Blood pours from my chest and mouth.

HAHAHAHA " You really thought that the boss was going to let your life last longer than his hahahaha. He tends to all his loose ends in jobs. No evidence."

His men begin to pour gasoline all over the cottage. And Gregor walks to the door and tosses a box of lit matches into the cottage.

After he leaves i manage to bring my self to the first floor window where i entered, when i notice the smell of..GAS!

I am sent out the window smuldering and burnt.

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#31 Posted by Zaraki Ichigo (6439 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice visual on killing the merc. Keep up your consistancy, otherwise you will get bored of writing and people will be bored when reading it. good job.

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#32 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Zaraki Ichigo says:

"Nice visual on killing the merc. Keep up your consistancy, otherwise you will get bored of writing and people will be bored when reading it. good job."

thanks man yeah i will continue with this most defiantly i am consistent when it comes to things i enjoy

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#33 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

POST (just tell me ill post here regurlarly so u can keep the good work up ;))

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#34 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Gregor leaves two men behind to make sure i was "taken" care of. They find me lying in the backyard of the cottage.

"HAHAHAHAHA Looks like one of the floatys in the toilet. Lets make this even more painful for the american."

They proceed to poke and prod me while i lay almost dead. I only manage to squint my eyes at them.

FWOOT

One of the men falls to the ground with the back of his head missing.

"What is going on the dick of the group asks before the back of his head is blown off."

A few seconds later i see what looks like and angel picking me up to bring me to the heavens.

I awake in a cabin wrapped in bandages. I attempt to say something but my words are muffled by the wrap around my mouth. I look around to see that my cloths or what was left of them had been removed.

A woman walks up beside me and puts a cup to my mouth and attempts to help me drink it, but i grab her hand she drops the cup in terror.

I sit up and again attempt to talk to her.

Muffle muffle

" It might work better if i remove your gauze." She proceeds to remove the wrap and gauze from my face.

" Why am i naked?"

I was in the process of getting you some cloths when you awoke.

" See anything you like love?"

Nothing i havnt seen before. So may i ask why you were smuldering and being attacked when i came to the cabin.

I stand up and attempt to find my weapons.

"Where are my guns?" I turn around and glare at the woman before i crash to the floor.

You didnt answer my question Mr. Man in black.

" I was...on vacation."

Ok. And why were their men after you.

" You got hit alot lady when you were a child didn't you"

For what exactly.

" Asking too many damn questions."

I sit back down in the bed, my skin still burning. " How long was i out?"

Five days, Why?

" Leave me be for the rest of the day."

Alright would you like any..

" I said leave me BE!"

She storms out of the room leaving me to think about what happen five days ago.

I think to myself Why did they betray me, How the hell did i survive the blast and Where the f$%$ did she learn how to shoot like that?

I lie down in the bed and sleep with one eye open. I will get to the answers tomorrow

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#35 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

cant wait :D

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#36 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

I awake a few hours later. And my handgun is lying on the stand next to the bed. I pick it up and realize that the clip has been taken out of it.

I walk to the closet and find a pair of pants and a really old shirt. I walk out to the other room and find the woman at a computer.

I wave the gun in front of her face and ask " Where is the rest of the gun or do i need to frisk you for it.?"

She puts her hand inside the desk draw i prepare to to knock her out but she pulls out the clip and hands it to me over her shoulder. I pick it up absolutely bewildered on why she gave it too me without a fight.

" Why so generous arnt you afraid i will kill you."

Why would you, i have no money for a job.

I back away in another case of bewilderment. " How did you know?" I ask while putting the clip in the gun and preparing to knock her out with the butt of the gun.

She moves her head away from the screen and points to the article on the screen it reads. " A body of a man in black is found at the former Franklin residents. The Franklins have all been killed execution style. No know motives for deaths"

I smile a evil grin. And fix my shirt. " I didnt kill the woman and child"

What about the man.

Shrug

So am i going to get any answers out of you Mr....

" Tobi..Mr. Tobi."

Thats not your real name is it.

" Nope, but you wont find out either way. So thank you for your generositiy but i will be taking my leave."

I get whats left of my things, and proceed to the door. She walks up behind me i turn around and ask her

" I will be back to repay your generosity and to ask you, how you took down two fairly well trained men. With a pee shooter."

Oh i can answer that one so i dont need to hear from you again. I was in the Army before i came back home.

She tosses me a cellphone.

I pulled this off the one who was kicking you. You will need it more than i will.

" Thank you."

My name is..

" Don't its better i dont know what it is."

I walk out the door and flip the phone open and dial a number.

" Wess? Yes im fine ...Yes i saw the news now shut it. I am coming back so get my stuff ready and start searching info on a man named Gregor."

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#37 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

as i said once and now again great stuff for a movie or a book!

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#38 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

thanks man i hope people post on here so i can continue after this

oh and this is just a pet project i have no real agenda in turning it into anything just for fun.

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#39 Posted by lash hex (641 posts) - - Show Bio

i like that it seems mysterious in a way you should do a nother bit to add to it

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#40 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

Darkchild says:

"thanks man i hope people post on here so i can continue after thisoh and this is just a pet project i have no real agenda in turning it into anything just for fun."

u now what this reminds me of?! quentin tarantinos movies! there also like that!

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#41 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

humpty bumpty^^

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#42 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

Again Tobi is stuck on a crappy ass plane.

" I swear i need to find a better form of transportation."

He arrives in the US and finds his way to his headquarters.

Walks inside

"Wess we need to ta.."

Tobi is hit so hard he falls to the floor

"WTF WAS THAT FOR WESS!"

Again you decided to go out on a job, without keeping me up on tabs. And now you come back with half your chest blown off and wrapped in bandages.

" Anyone tell you your more of a woman than a man."

No, and why?

Tobi walks over to Gun shelf

" Because you nag so much even a woman would slap you. Alright ill let that little tantrum go if you can tell me info on these motherlovers who shot me, blew me up, and left me for dead."

Well since all you gave me were the names of his henchmen i had to do ALOT of digging. And i found out your boss in London goes by the name of Vladamier Koskovaliko. And his two right hand men are Ivan and Gregor. But you took care of Ivan so that leaves Gregor.

Gregor Spolokiski, Your round about ass@#@#, He is the man you use when your hitman are to stupid to keep alive.

"That a crack at me?"

No not at all. But back to this Gregor guy. Your lucky to still be living half of our competition has been personally taken care of by this man. He tortures,rapes and kills his "jobs" and most of the time in that order.

" So, your saying im lucky to be alive cause of my ingenuity."

No your alive cause of your dumb luck.

SMACK

OW. Alright i may have deserved that. But i have one question. How do you suppose your going to take care of these guys.

" Thats easy Wess. Taking them down a peg at a time. When you said the bosses name i knew exactly who and what he is. He has ties to almost all the mobs arnt i correct?"

Yeah....what are you thinking?

" If we take out his underling bosses then go on up the line we will make it so that he has nothing left to throw at us."

And how do you suppose to do this miracle inducing overkill.

Picks up double barreled shot gun

" Ah the old fasion way. Rivers of blood."

Cocks Shotgun

"Get ALL the guns prepped were heading to Japan."

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#43 Posted by warlock360 (28189 posts) - - Show Bio

bump

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#44 Posted by Darkchild (42990 posts) - - Show Bio

you actually gonna say anything other than bumpo