The story of THE SPEEDSTER!

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This is copy. I've been wanting to make this guy for while now. So I finally did it. And Recently my writing has been improving so I wanted to put his story in my own fanfic. So tell me what you think please.

It all started on the year of April 1, 1992, a boy named Jack Wilson was born into the world. The day he was born The doctor said

"ITS A BOY! Congratulations."

The Doctor handed Jack to his mother while his eyes are close and he is yawning and his mom said

"OH thank you god thank you for this wonderful gift."

The father said

"I can't believe its the boy I always wanted"

Jack then open his eyes and his dad said

"Why is his eyes glowing?"

The doctor said while he was feeling in the paper work

"What?"

Then the next thing that happen was all the equipment in the room either short circuited or was destroyed. The glowing in Jack's eyes stop. And from that day on his parents knew that they did not have a normal child.

Age 5

It has been five years since Jack was born. He was a little boy now and he could talk and walk and everything. Whenever Jack's mom took him to the hospital the doctor said the same thing over and over

"Its amazing your boy is the healthiest and strongest person of his age I have ever seen! I don't what you did but this is amazing."

It was the same thing over and over Jack always wondered why his mother kept insisting on taking him to the doctors. Jack had lots of friends and he was always different from them for some reason he has no idea about. He in his friends always loved playing super heroes. Once he and his friend Rick agrue about who would be Flash and their other friend Richard said

"Okay stop fighting. We can decide who will be flash by whoever wins in a race."

Jack said

"I'm up. You?"

Rick said

"Always."

Jack and Rick stood next to each other and Richard said

"GO!"

Jack and Rick took off and right away Jack was in the lead. Everyone was shock of how fast he is and he beat Rick in a LANDSLIDE!

AGE 8

Its been 2 years since that day Jack beat Rick by a landslide. He has done some growing up. He now loved to run and race a lot. He begged his mother to let him go one the School's track team. It took awhile but she finally said yes. He quickly went on the top of racing at his school. No one was ever able to beat him. He always ran faster then everyone else. His school went on top in the championship for his age limit. That was the beginning of his love of racing increasing.

Age 15

Jack was now at the age of 15. He was now in high school. He was the top runner in every school he went into. His parents knew he had powers but hope he wouldn't find out. Jack was out one day preparing for a big race and he was out running. He just kept on running and running as fast as he could. And he kept going faster and faster. He was running past older runner, birds, and cars. He ran so fast he enter the Central city in 5 minutes. Which was 20 miles away. There he kept running all over the place and run on walls and run pass cars until he meet his hero The Flash. The flash was beating on some crooks and he said

"Kid get out of here. Your going to get hurt."

Jack ran towards the crooks and astounding speed and they disappear in a blink of an eye. And then appeared in one pile. The flash said

"Wow your fast. How did you do that?"

All Jack said was

"Wanna Race?"

The flash

"Uhh sorry kid no."

Flash was about to run off until Jack appeared in front of him and said

"Wanna race?"

Flash said

So your that eager to race? Alright."

The flash and Jack got ready and GO! They both took fast. But while Jack speed increase Flash had to go faster not to lose. They kept running and running until Jack started vibrating. And the flash did the same to keep up. The were running across the water until they just POOF. They were gone.

1 hour later

Flash and Jack finally appeared at the top of a building central city. The flash woke up and said

"Uhh kid your fast. I must tell you we went into the speed force. Are you okay....."

Flash stared at Jack who was now vibrating and electrically energy flowed around him and in seconds the flash knew what happen. Jack has the powers of the speed force. Flash told him

"Kid you have the power of the SPEED FORCE!"

Jack said

"Speed what?"

Flash said

"The speed force. Its what gives me mom powers. You can create costumes out of it. I suggest you do before someone sees you. Now concentrate." Jack concentrated and concentrated until a costume appeared on him and he said

"WOW. I knew the seconds I had power but now I have more powers. This is AWESOME."

Flash said

"So you going home or going to be a super hero?"

Jack said

"What do you think? Call me THE SPEEDSTER!"

And that's how it all begin.


Post Edited:2007-12-05 18:59:02

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#2  Edited By acewasp23

nice, i like the part where he is born. what is the Speedster supposed to be, a meta-human?

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#3  Edited By Apparition

i'm almost certain a metahuman is just a superhuman. like the flash.

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#4  Edited By The Speedster

Thanks. And yea he is. But there is no meta-human so mutant was the closest thing.

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#5  Edited By The Speedster

Yea. But there is no meta-human or superhuman on there. But I change it and what do you think appy?

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#6  Edited By Paragon

Mamma Mia! What character count is this for you Copy? 100? If so, happy centennial character.

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Paragon says:

"Mamma Mia! What character count is this for you Copy? 100? If so, happy centennial character."

I don't have THAT many accounts. Only ten. Oh and what do you think?

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#8  Edited By acewasp23

Paragon says:

"Mamma Mia! What character count is this for you Copy? 100? If so, happy centennial character."

thats why his name is copy. lol

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acewasp23 says:

"Paragon says:
"Mamma Mia! What character count is this for you Copy? 100? If so, happy centennial character."
thats why his name is copy. lol "

Sticks tongue at acewasp

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Paragon says:

"Not bad, but the thing that drove me crazy was the "And Jack said.", "He said", "She said", yada, yada, yada... Try using different words that are more descriptive that can really capture the emotion that you want, or just to change things up. Words like replied, exclaimed, sobbed, cried, questioned. Check out a thesaurus for some gooders. Said is just very bland. Not too bad otherwise."

K thanks. (I'm still trying to improve lol) Glad you guys like it. I'll try to make another one tomorrow.

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#11  Edited By Paragon

Not bad, but the thing that drove me crazy was the "And Jack said.", "He said", "She said", yada, yada, yada... Try using different words that are more descriptive that can really capture the emotion that you want, or just to change things up. Words like replied, exclaimed, sobbed, cried, questioned. Check out a thesaurus for some gooders. Said is just very bland. Not too bad otherwise.

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#13  Edited By Darkchild

real cool liked the birth made me chuckle a bit.

"What?" lol

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Darkchild says:

"real cool liked the birth made me chuckle a bit. "What?" lol"

Lol. Everyone loves my birth for some reason lol.

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#15  Edited By acewasp23

The Speedster says:

"Darkchild says:
"real cool liked the birth made me chuckle a bit. "What?" lol"
Lol. Everyone loves my birth for some reason lol."

check your PMs. lol

yeah the Birth was cool. i have a kid do next week that's why i liked it. lol

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acewasp23 says:

"The Speedster says:
"Darkchild says:
"real cool liked the birth made me chuckle a bit. "What?" lol"
Lol. Everyone loves my birth for some reason lol."
check your PMs. lol yeah the Birth was cool. i have a kid do next week that's why i liked it. lol "

I did. And congratulations.