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#151  Edited By Darkchild
PRIMAV3RA said:
"It was awesome , i mean awesome, i love the planning and so on

Anyways i'm pulling an all nighter and need to make use of it

buh bye and toodle loo x)"
Take care love. A post should be up tomorrow after i post in NH and Riskys fight
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#152  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

RUNS BACK!      AZTEK YOUR A MOD!!!! HERE!!!!! i know at Av but i didn't know here. LIKE CONGRATS!!!!!  AND YOU BETTER NOT DELETE MY POSTS WHEN IM FIRST   :D XP

oh and believe me i will be first next time, this is not over :D

congrats again

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#154  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

AHEM , glares at aztek xP

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#156  Edited By PRIMAV3RA
aztek the lost said:
"PRIMAV3RA said:
"RUNS BACK!      AZTEK YOUR A MOD!!!! HERE!!!!! i know at Av but i didn't know here. LIKE CONGRATS!!!!!  AND YOU BETTER NOT DELETE MY POSTS WHEN IM FIRST   :D XP

oh and believe me i will be first next time, this is not over :D

congrats again"
LMFAO!! thanks for the idea...and you'll never be able to let anyone know I'm deleting your posts cause I have complete control :P

and thanks!! I've been waiting for this day for over a year :D"
Well fine then if you do that and i will know if you do, then you don't get the gift i wanted to get, like only the best freaking picture that is barely acceptable to be shown on this site, and is like one breath away from porn xPxP but forget it

YOUR WELCOME!!! XD :)
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#157  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

well i really need to go this time,Get some sleep you guys, im going to go eat candy drink coffee and do work :D

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#159  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

YAY

BYE

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#161  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

o_o

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#162  Edited By Darkchild

Alright i know its been a while since ive posted. But ill start to post more often after the holidays. Probably start next week. But do not worry the Sinner Franchise is still going to continue

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#164  Edited By Darkchild

Ok my dotting fans a new post will be up tomorrow around 6 or 7pm. Cya then

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#165  Edited By NightFang3
Darkchild said:
"Ok my dotting fans a new post will be up tomorrow around 6 or 7pm. Cya then"
             Oh yes, thank you so much!
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#166  Edited By PRIMAV3RA
Darkchild said:
"Ok my dotting fans a new post will be up tomorrow around 6 or 7pm. Cya then"
:D OMG YAY! i Was so waiting ... .>.> i mean , i totally wasn't waiting at all..m or anticipating another post ASAP.......

Shuts up xP
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#168  Edited By PRIMAV3RA
aztek the lost said:
"I think its already 6 or 7 pm somewhere in Europe but I still don't see a post -___-"
I thought i was the only one .. v_v lol xP
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#169  Edited By Darkchild

Alright typing out a post now be happy u bloody fools.

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I have realized two things that happen when your in a gunfight, one people die its as simple as that and two....it never goes as planned. We burst through the front door and its empty. The building was completely disserted no human trace, large quantities of Ghost lie on the ground an everywhere in the building. They bagged anything that was made, I could see various things within the Ghost drug that they were putting in it. The knowledge that they destroyed what I had engineered was maddening, and it distracted me. I heard Piotr let out a quick cry of pain before he dropped to the ground hugging his stomach, then Jacob fell to a knee craddling his leg. They both looked up at the scafolding with hate in their eyes, soon my gaze made it up and I saw a sickly twisted man with a cigar. "Gday you know that fat bastard is paying me alot of damn money to take you blokes out. And I always wanted to know why but I can see now, you lot are a bunch of f@#king wanks. Crashing in here thinking your gonna have your own personal Alamo, but guess what all you will be greeted with will be my cold mug planting a slug into your foreheads. And dont think that your boy outside is going to come an save you, that fat bastard is wasted." I think to myself "Wait he didnt mention Jackie boy? Oh god lets pray that little f@#k didnt run out on us." the man was definatly mixed race his accent screamed Aussie but then the way he spoke only screamed out Brit. And I hate both, I look up at him flipping him off "You think that Guido will pay you handsomely, god your more of a fool that that fat bastard himself. He will learn that you wasted us all and then take you out of the picture saving his own fat ass, I know that man more than you Aussie f@#k" the man leaped down from the scafolding an walked down the steps that led down. Coming down he looked at me with intention to kill and he leaned in close "The boss told me you needed to be alive when I brought you in....but he said nothing about how damaged you needed to be."

I soon felt the cold metal enter my gut and exit out the back of my body. I screamed out in pain, and he just smiled "Dont worry that didnt hit any vitals...I hope." His laugh was sheer torture and he walked over to my friends aiming at Piotr he spoke to him "This was just a job, nothing more I dont hate you lot just a million sounds mighty good no matter what." his gun aimed at Piotr then I heard the gunshots three and then it was silent

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I know its short but i got a call from family that my uncle who i never see is up so i gotta go. PEACE

more should be up tonight

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Hes not dead.

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#174  Edited By NightFang3

That was fun, you update soon.

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#175  Edited By Darkchild

I wont be posting again in this for a few days if not a week. if u need to knwo why il be putting up a blog in a few

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#176  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

Awesome! and about dam* time !! :D

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#177  Edited By Darkchild

shut up pendejo

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#179  Edited By Darkchild
aztek the lost said:
"Mikael_Ghazarian said:
"Hes not dead."
oh.

...

:("
Well as of now we dont know whos dead do we, it ended with the gunshot

I love cliffhanger endings pof posts
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#180  Edited By PRIMAV3RA
Darkchild said:
"shut up pendejo"
No, how about you ...you   Feo hijo de puta  :)
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#181  Edited By Darkchild

My mother is not a witch

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#182  Edited By Crazy_Eights

Alright im finally going to be getting back to the Sinner stories. Tomorrow or Friday i shall have at least two or three posts up, and i will continue at least weekly with a post

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#184  Edited By Darkchild

Nope she will come back for these hehee.
Also a post or two up tomorrow night

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#185  Edited By Prima Donna
aztek the lost said:
"too bad for you Prima left..."
awwww :( well ill be back eventually.. :)  but ill always be in these fan fic threads every now and then :)  im like a ghost now O.O  you cant see me x)
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My eyes never left the Aussies gun, he aimed it at Piotr who was already wounded the man had it out for my friends more than me. And then I heard the shots three in a row, then the silence the Aussie looked down at his chest as three spots began to widen on his white shirt. He grimaced in pain an lifted his weapon only for a bullet to slap his hand knocking his gun from his hand an another blast sent him flying backwards. But the blast was from a sandbag round and his body slammed hard into a machine behind him. As his body went limp I turned around an Micro stood holding his side as blood poured from his side. He groaned walking in and over to Piotr he looked his friend over then over to his he smiled "F@#king poser sucker punched me as I fired my last round. I tried to get up an take his skinny ass out but he put a slug into my side taking me down hard. That piece of sh!t hit my god damn kidneys I know it. But I brought the rest of the explosives from the car with me." Micro set down a duffel bag of explosives "I wired them together while patching myself up." I looked at him thinking he did a sh!tty job patching up, then the thought of the two gangbangers came to my mind "Wheres Jackie Boy an Big?" Micro shook his head "When I checked the front seat Big was dead, and Jackie Boy was no where to be found. But thats not the worst we got a truck load of these bastards coming. They want this place in one piece probably." Anger took over my body as I strained to get up I turned back "Get Piotr and Jacob to the car Micro. This f@ck is mine." As I started to walk a hand grabbed my ankle and Piotr spoke up.

"Leave this foreign bastard to me, you know for damn sure this is not something I am going to survive for much longer with. Leave Mikael, and take Jacob with ya. You think two old timers like me an Micro will surive a head on with the Guido compund huh? Come on be realistive man, this was fun as hell but Id rather go out with a bang than let blood loss take over before I can fire that last bullet into the fatbastards body." I nodded reluctantly as I picked Jacob up an walked him out to the car putting him in the back seat I doped him up with some morphine Piotr had stashed in the Hummer. That man was always prepared, an sometimes that scared me. I walked back towards the lab an then I heard it, a loud set of shots ringing throughout the lab. My walking turned into a sprint, not caring for the wound that the prick gave me I made my way into the lab door and the Aussie laid dead an Micro was lying slumped up against the wall. I knelt down feeling his neck an found no pusle Piotr stood his HAMMER in hand and the barrel was smoking, he gestured to the scalfodling an Jackie Boy was leaning against the railings "Anyone going to come an help a brotha off this f@#king thing."  I looked to Piotr who told me to go and I leaped up to the stairs an up to JB "What the hell happened man?"  he looked at me setting his now emptied shotgun "Well after our successful beat down on this damn lab, that damn Brit knock off took me an Big by surprise shooting the car up with a Uzi that one of the guards had dropped as we wasted him. I ducked down in time to escape most of the bullets but Big boi...well he was a fat bastard so he couldnt very well get out of the way. That bastard killed my boy, but I waited for him to leave before getting out of the car. I made my way behind this place up here...eventually I caught a few in the chest so it took some f@#king time. By the time I made it in here the damn aussie rose from the dead an planted one in Micro, an then me an Piotr fired at the same time an he was turned into well that." taking a breath he looked at me "Now can we please get the f@#k out of here?"  I could hear the sounds of trucks outside and I shuffled Jackies arm over my shoulder an looked down at Piotr whose skin was turning a ghostly pale color, he smiled at me an yelled " Get the hell out of here, what are you waiting for you idiot. I aint giving you no damn kiss goodbye." I smiled at him as he placed his hand into the bag of explosives. The men outside were parked on either side of the building an I could hear them coming in from the back an from front, Jackie Boy showed me how he got in from the fire escape an I did the same getting out an making my way over to the car where Jacob laid an looked up at us. I started the car an took off in need of shelter.

In The Lab

Those damned apes, Guido hired some of the ugliest son of a bitches ever to grace this world. They surrounded me converging from the front an back entrances, they completely missed Jackie Boy, an Mikael an that was a good thing I was glad that they were this dumb. At least 15 of them came in one looked me up an down an turned his back on me while the others watched me "Where the f@#k is the stuff? Did these fools waste it all, Guido said that we could have what ever we found."  I couldnt contain my laughter anymore an a roar of laughter burst from my throat an they all turned around looking at me. These f@#ks were gangbangers, the lowest forms of those kinds. Not like Jackie Boy, an Big they were scum they would slit their own mothers throat for a fix of Ghost an that was sad. I looked at the wouldbe leader "You really think that Guido would have let you keep anything that was here your all a bunch of f@#king idiots. When we got here the stuff was gone, he took it all himself set a damn trap for us, an guess what I have a little one at that." One of them looked at my hand an asked the big one "Whys his hand in the bag?" An the big guy spoke up again but this time looking at me "What little one do you have?" I smiled an said while raising my hand an flipping them off  "A trap." And the wires to ignite the explosives ignited.

BOOOM
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#187  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#188  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#189  Edited By Crazy_Eights

LMAO U like?

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#190  Edited By PRIMAV3RA
Crazy_Eights said:
"LMAO U like?"
Of course, idiot ^^ i loved it, but dont let it go to your head i still want more action xP
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#191  Edited By Darkchild

Oh dont worry puta lmao. Their will be more action, We still got the Guido Mansion.

Well thats it for me tonight im off

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#192  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

stfu and burn culo

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#193  Edited By Darkchild

Two or three posts in this tomorrow while i got the day to myself. woooohooo

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#195  Edited By Darkchild

well ur the idiot who didnt come an read it moron.

I wont this should be wrapping up soon tho

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#197  Edited By Darkchild

LMAO point. Meh figured u as the wannabee fanfic writing genius would track my posts down an see if im slipping

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#199  Edited By Darkchild

LMAO lazyass