Sinner: Redemption
New York is the greatest place in this country from the population or the chance to find a job....Alright thats a lie. This god forsaken place is the last place I would advice anyone I know to come an visit. But! It is the one place if your a man like myself to make a name for yourself. I came to this place 5 years ago and that day I had one thing in mind, become one of New York's top drug lords. My home country was not the best place to go up in the world let alone the drug business. And in this short time I have become one of the top, the famed an feared. But with fear comes competition an with competition you must do the dirty work. And in many cases I did my own dirty work, but recently our buyers have how do you say it cut short. A rogue cop decided to go an ruin the business for the rest of us, and as the dominos began to fall so did the morality of my men.
Upon finding out that my main business was going down the sh!tter my own men, the men I have watched over an taken care of for 5 years turned their backs on me. Finding the last of Guido family the ones that cop hadnt wiped off the face of the globe an they turned to them for help. That rat sack of a man using his daughter to get to me....he will be the first to pay. She is what Angels should look an smell like, her crimson red hair...she was my destruction and in many ways she had no idea what her father had planned for me. Just to distract me for a time, and for three months she did her job my body an mind was soley on her. Nothing else mattered in my life, not the drugs not the money just her....and thats what Don Guido wanted me distracted. And upon the third month of my bliss he took it for himself.
Sitting at my home with Marisol fast asleep on my lap I watched television, when a knock came to the door. Looking at the clock an finding it odd someone knocking at my door at three AM I took the one thing my father gave me before I left, the one thing I still treasure my duel barreled shotgun an popping in the rock salt shells I cocked it before looking through the peephole....it was a low life in my inner circle. I open the door "Vincent what the f@#k do you want? Its three oclock in the f@#king morning, this better be f@#king good." Setting the shotgun down. He looks up me as if saying "Gotcha" I feel a burst of elecricity slam into my chest, I fall to the ground. Then that damned little f@#ker begins to kick me while I'm down "You sonnova bitch, taking my money. More than youshould be taking out of my cut. You jacka$$, sending me out to do the kid work when you know for damn sure I am one of your best." He bends down slamming his knee into my nose and I hear the bones shatter an dig into my skin, he has a gleeful smile on his face. Then a taller more FATTER man walks in behind him as he continues to slam his feet into my face and body. I look up as the large man puts his hand on Vincents shoulder telling him to stop, I smile a toothless grin as my teeth fall out of my mouth "You fat f@#k sending Vincent in before you, real fucking smooth. What will your dear Marisol think once you kill her beloved?" But as I start to talk Vincent walks over to Marisol who has just woken up an places his hand on her mouth shushing her, taking a needle out he plunges it into her neck an her body goes limp. I dont even remember the pain of my body as I burst up from the ground grabbing the shotgun as I stand, Don Guido just watches on as I leap across the room slamming the gun into Vincents throat an pressing him up against the wall. He laughs as he tells me she will be out for the rest of the night that he can have his fun now, he digs his nails into my chest an ribs. I fight through the pain pushing harder an harder his face finally turns blue when I let go an he falls to the ground.
I grit my teeth an slam the butt of the gun into his face before spinning it around an placing the barrel against his face. And with a gleeful smile I pull the trigger, the thing about salt at a distance it does massive damage without actually killing a person...put point blank...all thats left of Vincent is a gurgle from the gaping hole that used to be his mouth.I turn around to find Guidos own choice of a gun...a .45 at my forehead. He smiles "Mikael...you have made this very hard for me. You could have easily just choked him into submission but no you had to kill him, but I understand that because I myself would have done the same thing after we finished with you...he touched her mouth in his sick way with those sick hands. But back to the matter at hand, your finished Mikael and I am making it final. You will never see what I have planned for your little drugs, those delightful drugs you brought up from where ever the f@#k your from...they will be turned into something more...fun. Thank you Mikael, you did take care of my dear Marisol..so this will be quick. Any man who can treat a woman like her with such gentleness an love...deserves the best kind of kill...a quick one." He pulls the trigger, I feel the heat from the bullet in the chamber igniting an coming down the barrel. My forehead burns with pain for a split second before my body falls with a thud, I watch as the hulking Guido walks over to Marisol an picks her up before dropping a hankerchief on my face. The man had some respect for me, that was plan as day...then the world went black.
Most people think the after life is a bright light...but I saw nothing. It felt like a few moments until my eyes finally fluttered an I opened them, I couldnt feel my body any more. I attempt a scream for help but all that exits my throat is a moan that a retard would produce in an attempt to talk. Soon a nurse comes in with a sponge in my head I smile but nothing happens on my face, as she comes up close an holds the sponge over my naked body she brushes it against my skin. I can feel myself again but still nothing happens, then she oddly looks around seeing if anyone else was in the room. Then she moves her hand up to my mouth, I look at her at least try to look at her with a cocked eyebrow an she forces the sponge down my throat an holds it their. She smiles at me "Just to make sure you stay in this coma you f@#ker, Regards from Guido but I would have done this for free you a$$hole. Your druglords raped an killed my daughter after she couldnt repay them. She was 16 you jacka$$, she was going to be at college this semester an back into rehab to stop her drug problems. Just trying to pay off her last debt so that she would be one with you f@#kers. But no your drugie thugs put a stop to that didnt they Mikael, this is sweet justice." For a moment I thought of letting her finish the job, but then a flash of Marisol swept through my mind an kickstarted my body. I was going to fix this, my reign of druglord was not glorious or in at any moment a pure one. I am a evil man, but even evil men have some morals...no children I thought to myself. My hand shot up grabbing her by the hair an pulling hard slamming her head down onto the bar that held me in the bed. I slammed her two more times before pulling her hand out of my mouth an taking a deep breath an looking her straight in the eyes " I heard you the entire time woman, And you need to know those drugs were never supposed to be sold to children. Not on my watch." Pulling her closer to the bed slamming her gut into the railing, I pull her closer "Tell me how long I have been out, and any of the names you know. And how much that fat f@#k is paying you because I will double it. And if I dont hear anything I like my kindness an remorse for your daughter will fly out the window just as your body does when I toss it out the window." She quivers an shakes hard spitting blood.
"You have been out for five months, Guido thought you were dead. His lackys didnt want to tell him until recently that you were still semi alive, that you died in your house. A-a-and the thugs names were Ferchenzo, and Hakeem.....Guido paid me 20,000 to come an dress up like a nurse to take you out." A chill of rage rushes through my body as I stare at her, I gesture for her to grab my wallet to which she does. I take out a credit card and hand it to her "That is for one of my accounts 100,000 dollars are on it. Do with it as you please, I have much more 100k wont bother me. But one more thing...what has he done with Ghost?" She stares at me an her face turns white as a ghost, an she stutters before saying "He has been selling it to everyone who has money, even shoving it down peoples throats to get them hooked. He has almost trippled its potenency making it almost impossible to get off it....he even put his daughter through the ringer with it testing it." Rage again fills my body as I sit up. I shoo her away as my blood boils, and one thought runs through my head...Guido is a dead man.
"PRIMAV3RA said:LOL, remember dont operate heavy machinery XD, like a remote XDXD, hope you feel better DC"wow if adrenaline can do that, then it should be sold as a substitute for Methamphetamine XD"YEs it should.
I might post tonight but im so doped up on cold meds an flu meds, im surprised my post in risky an i fight was coherant
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"Darkchild said:LMAO i want to go out an grab something to eat since i havnt eaten all day but i dont knwo if i can drive"PRIMAV3RA said:LOL, remember dont operate heavy machinery XD, like a remote XDXD, hope you feel better DC""wow if adrenaline can do that, then it should be sold as a substitute for Methamphetamine XD"YEs it should.
I might post tonight but im so doped up on cold meds an flu meds, im surprised my post in risky an i fight was coherant
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I dive deep into my body because the outside world is too much, all the drugs father pumps into me I cant take it anymore. I can feel my body sitting on the floor staring out the window like a spaced out shortbusee. But I can do nothing about it, daddy is all knowing and there is no way for me to change that. So thats what I thought, until a few days ago when a woman comes screaming into fathers office. Her nose broken an her face completely shattered, she obviously knew my father and he knew her cause his usual carefree expression turned to irritation as she stepped it. She was stammering and I was in a constant high because dad wanted me to be quiet always pumping Ghost into me making it almost impossible for me to quit. Soon the world came back and I could understand her through the high but it was in an out. All I heard was two words " Hes awake." This caused my rather large father to move faster than I have ever seen him in my life slamming her body into the wall. He whispers into her ear before looking over at me, then without any remorse he pulls a small handgun an puts it to the bottom of her chin an pulls the trigger. I jump for a moment as a piece of her skull falls onto my face, blood drips from the ceiling, and father wipes off the barrel of the gun an stares at me. He walks over upping the dosage of Ghost to a high limit without killing me, an strokes my head "Dont worry my baby girl, you wont need to worry a pretty little hair." he then walks over to his desk. He upped it so I would remember the convo he is about to have but by god I do and I hate the man for what I heard
He presses a number on the desk phone an I hear the dialing quickly, then a voice comes to the speaker "Yes? Don...what is it, why are you calling us during a deal." my fathers face turns red with rage "How the f@#k does one stupid ass crackwhores mother NOT kill one BRAIN DEAD vegetable. Simply the veggie wakes UP! And why you found a moron of a woman who then tells everything about what we have done in the past five months. She told Mikael EVERYTHING! And guess what, Mikael is an ex Armenian solider who has just been told that we have taken his baby and turned it into our own sh!T. NOW I ask you one question, What else could this bitch have told him to add onto the volcano that has just blown its cap?" theres a long silence and then Deno speaks up "Tell him about Marisol?" My father raises his hands "Wow their is a brain cell in that dome of yours. Is Jaque with you?." Deno says "Yes?" "Jaque kill Deno." BANG BANG BANG then silence. "Now Jaque if your their Im more than certain that nutstain of a man Tito is there with your correct. Now my next question will decide your fate, What are we going to do about this problem we have here?" Silence then Jaque speaks " Go to the hospital and waste Mikael and anyone who gets in our way?" My father claps feverishly and says " Yes now both you broken condoms go and kill that worthless c*mstain understand!"
My father hangs up the phone and tosses it across the room, and I continue to stare at him. With rage in my heart an soul I stare at him, wanting nothing more than to see his fatass on a platter. I do not stutter for a moment in what I say next " You mother f@%ker!" He stares back at me, with a look of fear that I heard everything and then a look of rage as I speak against him. He stands up an towers over me then picking up the broken phone he slaps me across the face an follows that with the phone to the top of my head. I soon black out, but one thought runs through my mind " Kill em all Mikael kill em all"
NOOOOO! you were supposed to post after me -_-"SILENCE!! ONLY THE CHAMPION MAY SPEAK WITHOUT PERMISSION, you know the rules.
cool, I never heard anyone called a broken condom. lol classic. Man he sure is violent toward the daughter
Wanna hear what I just thoguht of. When i finally do publish one of my works (that u probably wont see till its out)
You two will be on the thank u part on before all the text an chapters. "Thank you to m family and the two people who wouldnt stfu when I wanted some down time in writing. Always getting me to do my best Prima(....cant remember ur name right now) Aztek (Austin)"
"Wanna hear what I just thoguht of. When i finally do publish one of my works (that u probably wont see till its out)I know her name ^^
You two will be on the thank u part on before all the text an chapters. "Thank you to m family and the two people who wouldnt stfu when I wanted some down time in writing. Always getting me to do my best Prima(....cant remember ur name right now) Aztek (Austin)""
and I'll tell you it if you put my name before her's in the credits :P
"Wanna hear what I just thoguht of. When i finally do publish one of my works (that u probably wont see till its out)awww YAY, i like never read the thank you part, but that will be like the first time i do, as long as you remember
You two will be on the thank u part on before all the text an chapters. "Thank you to m family and the two people who wouldnt stfu when I wanted some down time in writing. Always getting me to do my best Prima(....cant remember ur name right now) Aztek (Austin)""
My name goes first Darkchild^^
"cool, I never heard anyone called a broken condom. lol classic. Man he sure is violent toward the daughter"LMFAO
I agree, I think I'm going to go around calling people that ^^
"Darkchild said:You wouldn't do that XD"Wanna hear what I just thoguht of. When i finally do publish one of my works (that u probably wont see till its out)I know her name ^^
You two will be on the thank u part on before all the text an chapters. "Thank you to m family and the two people who wouldnt stfu when I wanted some down time in writing. Always getting me to do my best Prima(....cant remember ur name right now) Aztek (Austin)""
and I'll tell you it if you put my name before her's in the credits :P"
aztek the lost said:
"Prima Donna said:"aztek the lost said:=/"NOOOOO! you were supposed to post after me -_-"SILENCE!! ONLY THE CHAMPION MAY SPEAK WITHOUT PERMISSION, you know the rules."
i was only joking XD
"Darkchild said:Women always go first"Wanna hear what I just thoguht of. When i finally do publish one of my works (that u probably wont see till its out)awww YAY, i like never read the thank you part, but that will be like the first time i do, as long as you remember
You two will be on the thank u part on before all the text an chapters. "Thank you to m family and the two people who wouldnt stfu when I wanted some down time in writing. Always getting me to do my best Prima(....cant remember ur name right now) Aztek (Austin)""
My name goes first Darkchild^^"
(looks at aztek an whispers "No they dont bros befo"
"Women always go firstlooks at Prima and grins
(looks at aztek an whispers "No they dont bros befo""
I HEARD THAT, learn how to whisper DC, and wipe that grin off your face Aztec -_-
"Darkchild said:lol"aztek the lost said:yay! everybody wins!! because as we all know I like to get my stuff for free ^^""continues to grinLooks over at angered Prima
you know, when you get that book published, as long as my name is in there I'll be happy...but if it comes after Prima's you owe me a free copy :P"
Youll get a free copy then"
yay! everybody wins!! because as we all know I like to get my stuff for free ^^"I love the free samples at food stores and perfume samples lol XD
Darkchild said:
Looks over at angered Prima
Youll get a free copy then"
You know what you can put him first, just make my name bold and italicized XD
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