Ruff draft for my DC universe:22nd Century fan fic I need tips

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   In the wake of a superhuman war between authoritarian and democratic governments in the early 21st century , which lead to mass casualtys of around a 100 million. These casualtys lead to mass protest from citizen of the world which resulted in hatred of all super beings including the justice league. After the battle of hong kong where the justice league came out victorious. The justice league negotiated the one world treaty,in which their would be a one world democratic government with representation from all countries.    
    
     The treaty also stated that all super beings whether metahuman,alien, mystical or technological are banned from living on earth. The justice league along with the earths best wizards and scientist used spells and interdimensional technology to remove
all super-beings and humans with knowledge of advanced technology. There was a disagreement among superbeings both villians and heroes,but eventually they all agreed. This transition took about five years,before all super beings were removed.
All practices of advanced tech,magic etc was banned on earth with most information on these studies removed from the archives . The super beings were transfered to a dimensonal pocket in earths sky which was named New Olympus.   
 
   
                    New Olympus was founded by justice league and was set up as a world
            for super-beings. All dangerous super beings were put in the phantom zone,regular
         prison or they were rehabilatated. Human associates and loved ones of super beings were
allowed to live and or visit New Olympus with permission from the government,this is a main reason most super-beings agreed to the treaty. The league set up a democratic government with  a congress and prime minister,and a supreme court of seven members called the elders to check their powers,the first elders were the justice league members.New Olympus kept a good relationship with the government of earth,government officials
often visit about trade,technogical advancements,also every once in awhile a huge threat might come to earth and the earths government may vote to let a   select group of superhumans to deal with the problem. This New Olympus lead the foundation for how New Olympians
live today.     

      It is the 22nd century,the justice league has long vanished on New Olympus
   and New leaders alot of whom are descendants and related to the old heroes of earth have emerged.New Olympus is a peaceful place,but not exactly      paradise. Rape,Murder etc are virtually non-existant,but they still have a problem with petty crimes like bar fights,unauthorized practices of magic and technology. Reasons crime is so slow becuase there is a culture of heroism,everybody has some form of super powers,and a very strict
justice system. The strict justice system is the main political debate in New Olympus some feel its too strict and some like it the way it is. The cops are mostly sentient androids with telapathic and psychic powers which makes it hard to get away with anything. At One point all citizens had a telepathic link to the cops,so that in case ofdanger cops could use dimensonal travel to show up instantly. This was resistant and the law was changed to that only children up to age 12 had to mandatory have this link and for everybody else it was voluntary.       
    
 

DC Universe: 22 nd Century New Olympus.    

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        Humans were allowed to immigrate in the middle of the 21st century.
           They were pretty much accepted and eventually interracially mixed with
          the new olympians,because of this alot of New Olympians have alot of
           non powered being DNA in their genetic blood streams. There are about 50 million
         New Olympians with vast array of different power levels and abilities. The most common
              abilties are ( telephathy,enhanced agility/reflexes,extended life spans,resistance to
              disease) about 80-90% of the population have one or a combination of these abilities.
        There are more scarce abilities like(energy projections, super agility,regeneration enhanced recovery,super intellect and durabilty etc) only about 50% of    the   population have one or a combination of these abilites. Rare abilities like (super strength,invulnerability,Telekinesis,Super Speed,Energy Manipulation)  are only  possesed by 25% of the population. Babies that are have rare abilties or vast array
      of abilties are classified as Elites. People who have scarce abilties or limited ones are called Nobels.Children with low level abilities are called Class X     
 
               
 These abilties are tested at their birth,citizens can work hard to develop there
    powers to get a higher rating later on. These test are done for safety reasons and also military recruitment. The New Olympians have a pretty much equal     society economically,mostly because of advance technologies,but people with elite abilties tend
to have alot more political connections and enjoy certain perks. People who have blood
connections to the original justice league and heroes,are treated like royalty and celeberities. The Military is mostly made up of Elite and Nobel level    beings,most of the science and magic is done by low level beings. Magic is highly regulated and only certain
types of magic is allowed to be taught,and the number of practioners is limited. The council of magic is constantly urging the goverment to loosing regulations. The same concepts apply to science,but it is not as highly regulated. The Military was created because of the milky way battle of 2050.A war for control of a sector of the universe between Alliance of Galaxies and the Venecian empire spilled over around jupiters moons
and the New Olympians fought with the Alliance of galaxies to prevent the battle from getting to earth. This is the last recorded battle that involved Superman. the alliancewas succesful,and the New Olympians with coordination from the earth government joined the alliance of galaxies.     
 
     The Alliance of galaxies consist of over 123 advanced life planets. All citizenzs
     can travel and trade with each other and have a vote in the affairs of the Alliance.
  Advanced tech and sorcery are constantly used by less powerful beings to upgrade thier powers so they can compete with their more powerful peers. This is  very limited by the government,but there is a secret trade of tech and magic that the government is really trying to crack down on. The government is located in the village of Justice the biggestcity which is home to over twelve million citizens it is where the League first set up the government. It is rumored that superman and other heroes with extended life spansare still living here,but these rumors are not confirmed. The elite beings mostly live around this area along with the descendants of the first heroes and politicans and military personel.      
 
  Congress is meeting currently to discuss a message from the Allaiance of a potential
conflict. They agree to send a team of elite warriors diplomats,and scientist to the Alliance head quarters in the axotremata galaxy. Ambassador Triata a former militaryheroe and a desndant of superman.He is chosen to lead and pick the team. Triata is an elite level being who is 25% kryptonian,43% metahuman 20% human and 12% alien.he has invulnerability,enhanced strength,force projection, super hearing,super
agility and flight) he is a military tactian,and a expert in weapons and hand to hand
combat,but he is an expert in peace making and diplomacy and sees war as a last result. 
 
  
   He is now in the process of picking his team for the potential alliance dispute.