Punisher/Moon Knight team up (Script, FINALE!)

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Punisher: Crazed Victims Issue 0

Page One:

1.1: Moon Knight speeding on his bike

SFX: VRRRRRRRRRMMM

CAPTION(Punisher): I've been trailing Moon Knight for weeks now.

1.2: Punisher's battle van.

CAPTION(Punisher): He leaved a pile of bodies wherever he goes...

CAPTION(Punisher): Maybe that's something we have in common.

1.3: Punisher's eyes.

CAPTION(Punisher): While trailing him, I've been hearing him mutter something to himself about the "last defiler."

CAPTION(Punisher): I can't wait to see where this leads.

Page Two:

SPLASH! Moon Knight crashed through the window of a bank. he has crescent darts in hand. A muscular man in camouflage pants and a tanktop, dog tags, and a gun turns to face him. In the background there are a few dead bodies.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): His name is Craig Stevens. A war vet gone crazy.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): So when Khonshu tells me he plans on robbing a bank, and killing everyone inside (like he's just done now) What can I do?

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Khonshu says this is the last of the people who have defiled his name with acts of horror.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): This should be fun.

Page Three:

3.1: Close up on Stevens' face as Moon Knight kicks him. Bits of blood and teeth fly from his mouth.

SFX: WHAMM!

3.2: Side shot of Stevens throwing a right cross.

SFX: WHUMP!

Stevens: you sonuva--

3.3: Moon Knight punches Stevens with a spiked glove.

SFX: BAM!

3.4: Stevens, wiping blood off his face.

Stevens: heh.

3.5: Stevens delivers a side kick to Moon Knight's chest.

Page Four:

4.1: Closeup of Moon Knight's face. Stevens hits him dead on.

Stevens: DIE! DIE YOU MOTHER******!

4.2: Stevens thrusting his knee into Moon Knight's stomach.

Stevens: FINALLY BE RID OF FREAKS IN COSTUMES! NO MORE OF THAT!

4.3: Stevens hits Moon Knight to the ground.

4.4: Stevens stands over Moon Knight, his gun pointed to his face. (this should be from Moon Knight's point of view)

Stevens: YOU CAN'T STOP ME FROM ENJOYING THIS!

4.5: Closeup on Stevens' arm. He' shot and the gun is in mid fall.

SFX: BLAMM!

Stevens: AAAGH!

Page Five:

5.1: Punisher kicks the door open, his gun pointed at Stevens.

SFX: BAM!

5.2: Closeup on Punisher.

SFX: BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM!

5.3: Wide shot of Stevens with dark circles of blood around where he was shot.

Stevens: heh.

5.4: The wounds healing.

Stevens: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Page Six:

6.1: Moon Knight tackles Stevens.

SFX: FUMP!

6.2: Moon Knight slams Steven's head to the ground.

Moon Knight: What are you doing here, Castle?

6.3: Punisher sprinting towards the two,

Punisher: I've been following you. None of these murders add up.

6.4: Stevens punching Moon Knight off of him.

Stevens: OFF!

Moon Knight: *NNNGH* How so?

6.5: Punisher diving at Stevens.

Punisher: None of these people had any mental illness, none of them should have done crazy sh*t like this. it doesn't make sense.

Page Seven:

7.1: Stevens sidesteps Punisher, chopping his back. Punisher is in mid-fall to the ground.

7.2: Moon Knight kicks Stevens

SFX: BAM!

7.3: Punisher slashing Stevens with a bowie knife.

Punisher: Not to mention this little **** just took a round of bullets to the chest and laughed it off!

7.4: Stevens punching Punisher. Blood flies from his nose.

Stevens: SHUT UP! NO FAIR AGAINST ONE WHEN THERE'S TWO OF YOU! LEAVE ME ALONE!

7.4: Moon Knight grabs Steven's arm from behind.

Moon Knight: I've dealt with this sort of thing before! There's an outside source powering him!

Page Eight:

CAPTION: Elsewhere:

8.1: Zeus's eyes.

Zeus: I demand my reward.

8.2: Khonshu's eyes.

Khonshu: I told you...to get your reward the last false worshiper must be killed. He is not dead yet. Once he is, you will get your reward.
8.3: Zeus, screaming at Khonshu

Zeus: MOON KNIGHT AND PUNISHER ARE FIGHTING HIM! THEY HAVE HIM UNDER WRAPS! I DEMAND ME REWARD!

8.4: Khonshu, emotionless.

Khonshu: Be patient, the time draws near.

Page Nine:

9.1: Zeus's eyes light up, crackling with energy.

Zeus: You will regret this.

9.2: An explosion above times square.

SFX: BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

Page Ten:

10.1: Moon Knight hits Stevens with crescent darts.

Stevens: AARRRGH!

10.2: Punisher kicks Stevens in the chest.

SFX: WHAMM!

10.3: Stevens falls to the ground.

SFX: THUD!

Steven: UNH!

10.4: Close up on Stevens' face. Saliva flies from his mouth as he screams

Stevens: TWO AGAINST ONE! I SAID NO FAIR! I SAID THAT'S NOT RIGHT!

Page Eleven:

11.1: Closeup on Stevens' hand. A crescent dart impales it.

11.2: His other hand impaled.

11.3: His foot, impaled.

11.4: His other foot, impaled.

Page Twelve:

12.1: A shot of Stevens, strugggling.

Stevens: NNNF!

12.2: Punisher and Moon Knight look at each other.

Stevens (off panel): GRRRR!

12.3: Punisher's eyes.

Punisher: He's a threat.

Moon Knight (off panel): Then kill him.

12.4: One of Punisher's guns, firing.

Page Thirteen:

13.1: Steven's body, dead (bullet to the head)

13.2: Punisher and Moon Knight turn around to see and explosion in the distance.

SFX: BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!

Page 14:

14.1: Zeus, spraying lightning into the sky.

14.2: Closeup on Zeus

Zeus: Damn. They should be here--

14.3: Punisher and Moon Knight on Moon Knight's bike, they're heading towards Zeus.

CAPTION(Punisher): The battle van was too slow.

14.4: Zeus, shocked.

Zeus: I was hoping you would be here sooner.

Zeus: As you can see, I have hurt nobody. Now.....

14.5: Zeus shooting lightning at the two.

Zeus: .....know the truth.

Page Fifteen:

15.1: A shot of the leader Punisher had killed last chapter. He's having ice cream with his daughter.

15.2: Stevens, spending time with his wife.

15.3: Another of the crazed victims, cradling their baby child.

15.4: Punisher's face. Expressionless and devoid of all emotion.

Page Sixteen:

16.1: Perkin (from chapter one): hugging his son.

Son (Small text): I love you Daddy.

16.2: The worshipers of Khonshu (turned into werewolves) spending time together in a coffee shop.

16.3: Moon Knight's face.

Moon Knight: N-n-nno.

Page Seventeen:

17.2: Punisher, loading his gun.

Punisher: YOU SICK BASTARD!

17.2: Moon Knight holds Punisher back.

Moon Knight: NO! It wasn't him!

17.3: Khonshu arrives in a swirl of dust. Moon Knight points to him.

Moon Knight: It was him!

17.4: Close up of Khonshu.

Khonshu: Well done, my priest.

17.5: Moon Knight, and eyebrow raised beneath his mask.

Moon Knight: Well done?

17.6: Moon Knight, horribly angry (borderline insane)

Moon Knight: WELL DONE?!!?

Page Eighteen:

18.1: Moon Knight, accusing Khonshu.

Moon Knight: YOU USED US! USED US TO KILL INNOCENT PEOPLE!

18.2: Khonshu, closeup.

Khonshu: There was reason behind it.

Moon Knight (off panel): I DON'T CARE WHAT REASON THERE WAS!

18.3: Khonshu, shot in the head.

SFX: BLAAMM!

18.4: Punisher, holding a smoking gun.

18.5: Khonshu.

Khonshu: I'll be generous enough to leave this at that. We're done for now.

18.6: Khonshu leaving in a swirl of dust.

Page Nineteen:

CAPTION: Epilogue 1:

19.1: Moon Knight (dressed as Marc Spector.) coming home to Marlene.

19.2: Marlene in bed, Marc leans over to kiss her on the cheek.

19.3: Marc, standing over Marlene.

Marc: It's over.

Marc (small text): The nightmare is over.

Page Twenty:

CAPTION: Epilogue 2:

20.1: Khonshu and Zeus watching over Moon Knight and Punisher.

Zeus: The two make a good team.

Khonshu: Yes.

20.2: Zeus's eyes. He stares at Khonshu

Zeus: The last defiler is dead. I believe it is time for my reward.

20.3: Yes. I will even give you a bonus. Showing them the truth takes bravery I never thought you had.

Zeus: ....

20.4: Shot of Punisher, through an orb.

Khonshu: I have found you an Avatar....as only I can deliver.

Page Twenty One:

21.1: Punisher shooting a man through the head.

SFX: BAM!

Man: AGGH!

21.2: Punisher kicks a man through a window.

21.3: Overhead shot of a balcony, Jigsaw lies on the ground. (It is presumed he fell.) There's a trail of blood behind him, implying he's trying to crawl for help.

Jigsaw: Augh....augh....augh....augh.

21.4: Jigsaw's eyes, closed. (Closeup on his face.

21.5: Jigsaw, eyes opened, they're glowing.....like Moon Knight's.

NEXT: MOON KNIGHT: NEW AVATAR

NEXT: PUNISHER: RISE OF AN EMPIRE

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#1  Edited By InnerVenom123

1- The action is great.

2- Nice team up idea, the ending is awesome.

3- I'm gonna be blunt. The Punisher does not cry. Ever. The idea behind that scene is great, but he should just be stonefaced or glaring or looking down or something. A shock-tear would be better suited from Marc, because he's the more human of the pair. Not being mean, just helping you out!

4- Keep it up! And good luck!

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@InnerVenom123 said:

1- The action is great.

2- Nice team up idea, the ending is awesome.

3- I'm gonna be blunt. The Punisher does not cry. Ever. The idea behind that scene is great, but he should just be stonefaced or glaring or looking down or something. A shock-tear would be better suited from Marc, because he's the more human of the pair. Not being mean, just helping you out!

4- Keep it up! And good luck!

thanks! I was trying to go for dramatic effect, and I thought the shedding the single tear was classic enough....I...SHALL....EDIT! :P:P:P:P

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#3  Edited By InnerVenom123

@primepower53 said:

@InnerVenom123 said:

1- The action is great.

2- Nice team up idea, the ending is awesome.

3- I'm gonna be blunt. The Punisher does not cry. Ever. The idea behind that scene is great, but he should just be stonefaced or glaring or looking down or something. A shock-tear would be better suited from Marc, because he's the more human of the pair. Not being mean, just helping you out!

4- Keep it up! And good luck!

thanks! I was trying to go for dramatic effect, and I thought the shedding the single tear was classic enough....I...SHALL....EDIT! :P:P:P:P

I know, I got the idea behind it. Just sayin'.

Happy editing! =P

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EDITED!

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#5  Edited By TheWholeDamnShow

@primepower53 said:

EDITED!

I want to see Pun cry >:) haha

Nice story though. Your Punisher is awesome, as always. Also, the Steven's death was gnarly. Great job.

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@TheWholeDamnShow: Thanks, man! Glad to hear you liked it!

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#7  Edited By The Impersonator

Moon Knight: Well done?

Impersonator: Oh yeah! =P

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@The Impersonator: thank you!

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@primepower53: No problem! :)

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#10  Edited By batkevin74

Good job!