Punisher: Crazed Victims (Script, #0)

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THIS IS DIRECTLY TIED TO MY MOON KNIGHT FAN FIC!

Moon Knight Chapter One

Page One:

CAPTION: Then

1.1: the skull on Punisher's chest. Rain drips down it.

CAPTION(Punisher): The way I see it, everybody's got a bit of craziness in them....

CAPTION(Punisher): Some just show it more than others.

1.2: Punisher's boot, as he runs through a puddle.

CAPTION(Punisher): So when I hear about people going crazy randomly on the news....

1.3: A man (early twenties) in a leather jacket, jeans, and a white t-shirt (resembles a greaser) running from Punisher. Punisher's shadow can be seen behind him. The only color is the white skull. A gun can be seen hidden in the man's jacket.

CAPTION(Punisher): I hunt them down....and Punish them.

1.4: The man trips, falling to the ground. He's revealed to have reached a dead end in an alley.

CAPTION(Punisher): This man's name is Johnny Stronghold. No record of any mental illness whatsoever...no crimes past...

CAPTION(Punisher): So when he goes on a murder spree, killing seven people, and injuring fifteen more....

1.5: The barrel of Punisher's gun as he fires.

CAPTION(Punisher): He deserves this.

Page Two:

SPLASH! Punisher standing over the man's dead body. A bullet through the center of the head. Punisher's handgun is smoking. (This is the first full-body shot of Punisher so far) he's in the classic Punisher look. White skull, trench coat and everything.

CAPTION(Punisher): The name's Frank Castle.

CAPTION(Punisher): You can call me Punisher.

Page Three:

CAPTION: Now

3.1: Shot of an old run down hotel. Lights are blinking on and off, paint chipping, etc.

3.2: Inside one of the rooms, equally as worn down. Guns, knives, explosives, etc are strewn about the room.

3.3: Shot of a antennae TV. It's tuned in to a news station. Bits of static are heard in between words.

Reporter: --Witness KZZZT --aim MOON KZZ--IGHT is on the scene, where a man is KZZZTding his kid hostage. In other news--

3.4: The reporter looking down at his paper.

Reporter: Well that's bi KZZZT--arre....A group of KZZZT all in their thirties have KZZT --urdered a local family KZZT and are holding more peoKZZT--hostage. They've already killed a husband, W KZZt--fe, and

3.5: Closeup on Punisher, eyes closed.

Punisher: --Children.

Page Four:

4.1: Punisher grabbing guns.

4.2: Punisher grabbing knives.

4.3: Punisher's skull emblem.

CAPTION(Punisher): They killed a family.

4.4: Punisher's face

CAPTION(Punisher): They're dead.

Page Five:

5.1: Punisher's battle van.

CAPTION(Punisher): The police band I've been listening to tells me, like the other man I killed, this man also has no history of mental disorders, no traumatic events, nothing. They just went crazy...no motive.

5.2: Punisher's face, expressionless.

CAPTION(Punisher): Nothing.

5.3: Police surrounding an abandoned warehouse.

Officer: WE HAVE THE PLACE SURROUNDED! COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP!

5.4: One of the men sticking his head out of a window.

Man: GIVE MY REGARDS TO THE OWNER OF THAT GUN SHOP YOU PASSED ON THE WAY OVER HERE!

5.5: The man throwing a grenade out the window.

Page Six:

6.1: Khonshu and Zeus watching the scene.

Khonshu: Tell me again why you're driving these people insane?

6.2: Zeus's eyes.

Zeus: There are certain heroes who will help Moon Knight. I've driven these people insane to keep other heroes occupied.

6.3: Khonshu's eyes. Zeus is vaguely reflected back.

Khonshu: You are cleverer than I give you credit for....

6.4: Same shot as 6.1.

Zeus: I expect a bonus on my part for this.

Page Seven:

7.1: Punisher scaling the wall of the warehouse from a back alley.

CAPTION(Punisher): They killed them. Women and children.

7.2: Punisher climbing through a window. Wide shot.

CAPTION(Punisher): I won't let others suffer. The relatives....

7.3: Medium closeup of Punisher, he's loading a shotgun.

CAPTION(Punisher): Don't think about that yet. Focus on the mission.

7.4: A man rounding the corner.

Man 1: Randy? Is that you? I heard a noise?

CAPTION(Punisher): ****.

7.5: Punisher shooting the man in the head (not through, just brushing the edge of his head.)

SFX: BLAAM!

SFX: SPLLLLLSH!

Page Eight:

8.1: The man, missing part of his head, pulling out his gun.

MAN 1: GONNA KILL YOU FOR THAT, YOU--

CAPTION(Punisher): Damn. What's this guy hopped up on?

8.2: Punisher diving to the floor from gunfire.

CAPTION(Punisher): FOCUS! GOTTA GET TO HIM BEFORE HE ALERTS THE OTHERS!

8.3: Punisher, kneeling and firing his shotgun.

SFX: BANG!

8.4: Man 1, a circle of blood in the middle of his chest.

Man 1: GONNA PAY FOR THAT, YOUUUUuuuuu!

8.5: Man 1, face down on the ground, dead.

Page Nine:

9.1: Punisher scrambling for cover by some nearby stairs.

Man 2 (Off Panel): Damn! voices! Kill them like we killed those other guys!

Man 3 (Off Panel): Why did we kill them again?

Man 2 (off panel): .....

Man 2 (off panel): Shut up.

9.2: Punisher's finger on the trigger. He's trembling.

CAPTION(Punisher): No motive...don't even know why they killed the family...hostages must be nearby. Have to be careful where I'm aiming.

9.3: Punisher pulling a handgun out from his boot.

9.4: Punisher standing up, and firing.

SFX: BLAMBLAMBLAMBLAMBLAMBLAM!

9.5: Man 2 and three are hit. Man 2 has his head blown off, the other is hit through the chest.

SFX: Spak!

SFX: BAM!

9.6: the leader charging.

Page 10:

10.1: The leader diving at Punisher.

CAPTION(Punisher): I should pull the trigger.

10.2: the two falling down the stairs, bits of wood fly up from termites and rotting.

CAPTION(Punisher): But for some reason, I hesitate.

10.3: Punisher kicks the man off of him.

CAPTION(Punisher): Take him down, free the hostages. Get out before anyone notices you.

10.4: The man landing in a crouching position.

CAPTION(Punisher): Find out why these people randomly decided to kill a family then hold another for ransom.

10.5: The leader pulls out a knife.

Page 11:

11.1: Punisher pulling out a bowie knife.

11.2: the leader thrusts his knife, Punisher blocks it, pushing his arm to the side.

SFX: Fmp.

11.3: Closeup on the man's face as Punisher drags his knife.

11.4: The leader, burying his face in his hands.

Leader: GAAAAAH!

SFX: SLLLLSSH!

11.5: Closeup on the man's face. He has blood in his eyes.

Leader: MY EYES!!!

Page 12:

12.1: Punisher looking up.

CAPTION(Punisher): While he's distracted, I notice the last man coming from upstairs.

12.2: Another man, he has his gun ready to fire!

Man: IT'S CASTLE! YOU'RE DEAD MUTHERF****ER!

SFX: BLAM!

12.3: Punisher diving from the shot, reaching for his handgun.

CAPTION(Punisher): Get the gun, kill him before he decides to kill the hostages.

12.4: Punisher firing a handgun.

SFX: BLAAM!

12.5: The bullet hitting the man.

Man: AGH!

12.6: Blood falling on the Punisher's face.

Page Thirteen:

13.1: The man's dead body falling out a window.

SFX: CRAAAASH!

13.2: The man's corpse lands on a cop car.

SFX: BOOOOOM!

13.3: The cop, shocked!

Cop: JESUS!

Page Fourteen:

14.1: the Cop, getting out of his squad car.

Cop: Looks like there's someone in there....

14.2: Another Cop, looking at the corpse.

Cop 2: Shot through the head.

14.3: The first cop, turning to the second.

Cop: You thinkin' what I'm thinkin'?

14.4: The second cop's eyes.

Cop 2: Castle.

Page 15:

15.1: Same shot as before of Punisher looking up, only now, the man's recovered from the injuries and is about to stab Punisher.

15.2: Punisher turned around, he's grabbed the man's arm and has slammed his fist into his face.

15.3: Punisher kicking the leader.

CAPTION(Punisher): Get some distance between us.

15.3: Punisher aiming his handgun.

CAPTION(Punisher): Go for the kill.

15.4: Same shot, he's fired.

SFX: BLAM!

Page Sixteen:

16.1: The man, shot in the shoulder, he's charging.

16:2: Punisher, surprised.

CAPTION(Punisher): Damn. The man didn't miss a bea--

16.3: The leader throwing a knife.

16.4 Punisher's hand, impaled by the knife.

Punisher: AAAAGH!

Page 17:

17.1: Punisher's gun falls to the ground.

CAPTION(Punisher): Damn.

17.2: The leader calmly picking up the gun.

Leader: You're days are done, Punisher.

17.3: Blurry view of the man aiming the gun, standing over Punisher.

CAPTION(Punisher): Pain...head spinning.

17.4: Punisher kicking the man in the crotch.

CAPTION(Punisher): Last ditch effort.

Page Eighteen:

18.1: Punisher kicking the man in the gut.

18.2: The leader on the ground.

Leader: No....please.....

18.3: Punisher standing over him with the bloodied knife. (Reversed roles)

18.4: Punisher throwing the knife at the man.

SFX: SPAK!

18.5: Punisher isn't in the shot. Just the corpse of the leader, with a knife through his brain.

Page Nineteen:

19.1: Punisher's head turned.

SFX: BARKBARKBARKBARK!

CAPTION(Punisher): Canine unit....cops are coming.

19.2: Back view of Punisher running.

CAPTION(Punisher): Get to the battle van....get out of here.

19.3: Cops bursting the door open.

Cop: FREEEEZE!

19.4: Punisher climbing into the battle van.

19.5: The wheel the the battle van.

SFX: RRRRRRRRRT

196: The battle van driving away.

Page 20:

CAPTION: Later

20.1: Punisher leaning over a computer.

CAPTION (Punisher): My research shows the guy Moon Knight killed was named James Perkins. Like the men I killed, he had not point of no return, no mental instability, nothing.

20.2: Punisher, sitting straight up.

CAPTION(Punisher): Somethings up....and my best chance is....

CAPTION(Punisher): Moon Knight.

Link to THE FINALE!

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#1  Edited By TheWholeDamnShow

Awesome story!

I wonder how Moon Knight and Pun will get along.

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Thanks, man! I'm glad you like it! (They'll be crossing over into the same title soon.)

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#3  Edited By batkevin74

Punisher & Moon Knight and....who is next It's good

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@batkevin74:It's actually just those two...I'm glad you like it!

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#5  Edited By The Impersonator

I just got punished by this awesome chapter!

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#6  Edited By InnerVenom123

Nice work, I'm curious about the connection between Khonshu and Zues most of all.

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@The Impersonator: @InnerVenom123: Thanks, guys!

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#8  Edited By The Impersonator

@primepower53: You're welcome!

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@InnerVenom123: @The Impersonator: @batkevin74: @TheWholeDamnShow: just wanted to let everyone know that I'm still debating whether or not to keep this contained as a one shot or tie it in for a Moon Knight/Punisher team up....

......just throwing that out there.

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#10  Edited By batkevin74

It's a 4-6 issues mini series dude. I want to see Frank & Marc smack the beejsus outta Zeus & Khonshu...or even have Frank Castle as the Fist of Khonshu...a fist that's gripping a 9mm Uzi! :)

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@primepower53 said:

@InnerVenom123: @The Impersonator: @batkevin74: @TheWholeDamnShow: just wanted to let everyone know that I'm still debating whether or not to keep this contained as a one shot or tie it in for a Moon Knight/Punisher team up....

......just throwing that out there.

MOON KNIGHT TEAM UP! DO IT!

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@primepower53 said:

@InnerVenom123: @The Impersonator: @batkevin74: @TheWholeDamnShow: just wanted to let everyone know that I'm still debating whether or not to keep this contained as a one shot or tie it in for a Moon Knight/Punisher team up....

......just throwing that out there.

MOON KNIGHT TEAM UP! DO IT!

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Thanks for the feedback on this guys...

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I have one more chapter to write. It's on paper, so now it's just a matter of finding the time to type it up....