Prelude to Classic Spider Man

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***This will be my first attempt at writing a Marvel character, so bear with me (here we go)  
 
All characters are property of Marvel comics and their respective owners. Don't sue me!***  
 
Prelude to: Classic Spider Man

Three years since he was bitten by a radioactive Spider....Three years he has made a rogues gallery....and now he will make one more...  
 
Spider Man vs. Rhino:  
 
The enemy came into the fight close to the end. Rhino was getting tired. His swings were slowing down.  
 
"Stay...STILL...wall crawler!  
Spider Man flips out of the way of his punch, he hits a brick wall, and it collapses on him.  
"I can't really!" Says Spider Man. "It's kind of against my nature. And--woah!" Spider Man shouted, as he ducked underneath Rhino's punch. He flipped in the air and kicked him.  
"As I was saying, it's against my nature and if I stay still you'll hit me, and who wants to be hit?"  
 
Rhino charges in rage, Spidey shoots his webs at his hands, and tugs up, while standing on the roof of a building. Rhino is lifted ten stories up. and stuck to the wall.  
"You gain weight recently?" Spider Man asks.  
Rhino growls.  
Spider Man hits his feet with webbing, then proceeds to web him to walls between buildings.  
"I'M GONNA KILL YOU! I SWEAR--!"  
"I wouldn't do that. We're ten stories up, and I presume you've gained weight. If you move, you'll fall. hard. You're choice." says Spiderman, as he swings away  
 
An unseen man watches..."He can fight smart...."  
 
Spider Man vs Kraven the Hunter:  
 
The enemy came in early into the fight early  
 
Spider Man hits Kraven multiple times in the gut, then uppercuts him to the jaw. Kraven flips and lands.  
"You've gotten better, Spider."  
"Wish I could say the same about you, Kraven!"  
 
In rage, Kraven runs and kicks Spider Man, who falls to the ground. As Kraven pins him to the ground, Spider Man hits him with webbing, and wrestles himself free from Kraven's control.  
 
Instinctivley, Kraven kicks behind him, he lands a hit on Spider Man, as he tears the webbing from his face.  
"Gonna KILL you for that!"  
Kraven goes for a right cross, but Spider Man bends his back underneath it. He snaps back and hits Kraven in the face with a straight punch, breaking his nose.  
Kraven makes a last ditch effort to gain the offensive, by digging underneath Spider Man's ribcage, but Spidey's ol' spider sense kicks in, and he flips  over him, in mid flip grabbing Kraven's head between his knees, as he complete the flip Kraven is thrown headfirst into a wall. 
 
"He ditches the jokes when he has to, he can fight seriously."  
 
Spider Man vs. Sandman and Electro:  
 
The enemy arrives around the end of the battle.  
 
Sandman throws a fist at him, and spider man dodges, it hits Electro, who actually lands electricity. Spider Man falls to the ground. Sandman goes to hit him with a hammer, but Spiderman flips out of the way. He swings along a web and kicks Sandman in the jaw. Electro zaps Spider Man with lightning.  
"Take one for the team!" mumbles spiderman. The electicity carries through Spider Man to sandman. Spiderman hits sandman with a tornado kick. Then swings toward Electro. Electro fails to hit him, Spider Man succeeds in landing a blow on him. Electro's hands and feet charge up with electricity. Spider Man is hit a few time, before he ducks underneath one punch, and kicks Electro in the groin.  
"Would it be wrong to make a bug zapper joke?" Spider Man asks.  
He then spies something.  
"Should've picked a better fighting spot, guys!" Spider Man says, tearing down a water tower and swinging away on a web.  
 
"He is recoursful....looks at his surroundings...he knows his enemies weaknesses...he won't know mine."  
 
Spider Man vs. Shocker:

 
The enemy arrives at the very beginning of the fight.

 
Spider Man dodges Shocker's blasts, by doing outrageous leaps and swings on webs. He lands on a wall, then swings off of it, as Shocker blasts it. He does the same again...and again...and again until finally, he gets close enough to take away his gloves.  
 
He then swings on a web and uppercuts him while swinging on a web.  
 
As he walks away, he says a line he thought up on the way...  
 
"Good night...don't let the bed bugs bite...especially me. heh...that was a good one!"  
 
The enemy facepalms himself. "Nothing needs to be said here."

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#2  Edited By InnerVenom123

Good for a first time write-up! 

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@InnerVenom123
thanks! I haven't read Spider Man in a while, so this is basically the best I can do at the moment, though I won't have the regular story up for about a week (going to a place without internet connection for a week.)
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@primepower53
Wow! This is great. I was wondering who's the watcher. I wanted to guess but there are tons of Spidey villains out there. Hmmmm.
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@primepower53:

I liked it! I'll have to combat yours with mine....

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I don't even know who the enemy is! He's either going to be an establsihed character or someone knew!  
 
Ah well I have a week to figure it out!
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I've decided the enemy is going to be a new character. I reeaaallly hope I can make this story work  
 
I also may be doing this in a script format....

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That sounds nice!
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I got the first part up, but I didn't know what to do with it after sorry. :(  
 
On the bright side, I sent the person who challenged me to do this a PM for another character...so another Marvel fan fic it is! :D  
 
Unfortunatley, he is not on right now (kinda annoys me *eye twitch*)
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