New Amalgam Universe: Teth Dakom #2

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(Note-This took way to long to come, I have procrastination problems. Here's Teth-Dakom numero uno if you missed it:http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/new-amalgam-universe-teth-dakom-1/660280/)

Walking down the narrow ally as stealthly as possible, Dak even surprised himself with how good he was at stealth movement

Getting about ten yards behind the thugs Dak started to scrape his claws on the ally wall.

The thugs didn't seem to notice the scrapping untill one of them dropped some money.

Looking back to Dak the thug was paralyzed.

"What are you starin at stupid." The leader said while hitting him on the head.

As all of the thugs turn around and look at Dak they are all were stricken with fear.

After about 5 minutes of standing still Dak was getting bored.

"What's wrong guys?" Dak raised his arms so his claws were in better view.

"We, Your supposed to be dead?" The leader managed to sput out.

"Ohh you're talking about what happend back there? Naahh that was just a minor set back. " Dak was scrapping his claws on eachother now.

"Hey, he has claws like that one hero we heard about on T.V." One of the thugs whispered into the leader's ear.

"I think his name was Dark Claw" The thug continued.

"I doubt he knows how to use those things" The leader said with a smirk.

"Let's work him over." Now all of 5 of the gang memebers were taking out switch blades.

Dak laughed in the way you would expect an evil villain to laugh.

"I hope you understand that the only way to kill me is to, decappitate me." Dak said walking closer.

"How about we stab you in the neck a million times." The leader said getting ready to charge.

"Fine by me." Dak got into the best fighting posistion he could think of.

As all of the thugs realease their blades Dak did feel a bit nervous. He had never actually fought with his claws. Just killed people. But his healing factor gave him some reassurance.

"This time. Make sure he dosn't get up." The leader said as he and the gang charge Dak.

Still in his fighting posistion Dak jumped up in the air about 5 feet above their heads and plumeted with his claws aimed for the leader.

The leader saw this coming and swiftly jumped out of the way of the attack.

As a blade was swiped at Dak he ducked and thrusted his three claws into the thug's kneecap.

With blood gushing onto his face Dak flipped over that thug and land next to another.

Slashing the thugs arm Dak grabbed him and threw him into the leader.

While both of them fall to the ground Dak runs up to another thug, dodges a swipe and thrusts his claws into the thug's neck and stomach.

"Wow, that is a lot of blood." Dak said while pulling his claws out of the thug.

"The last two left." Dak was now looking at the leader who was hiding behind the other thug.

"So which one dies first?" Dak could tell the leader was about to make a run for it.

As the leader charge for the now further end of the ally Dak stabbed the already damaged thug in the stomach and ran for the leader.

The leader was far ahead of Dak and was about to get to the exit when a female silhouette came out of the darkness and wrapped it's her hand around the thugs's head.

Stopping in his tracks Dak watched as the Silhouette squeezed the leader's head until it burst open and the entrails splatter on the wall.

"Dakom Akihiro, Your coming with me." A voice came from the Silhouette.

"Who-Who are you?" Dak said, truly terrified.

"Call me, Lady Blaze."

(Sorry if my fight scene isn't that good. I'll work on it. )

(BLACK ADAM AND IS THE PROPERTY OF DC. AND THEIR RESPECTIVE AFFILIATES.DAKEN AKIHIRO IS THE PROPERTY OF MARVEL AND THEIR RESPECTIVE AFFILIATES ALL RIGHTS RESERVED, I THOUGHT OF THE STORY.

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#1  Edited By CainPanell

@kamrenamir: Getting better, Nice cliffhanger!

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#2  Edited By TheCannon

Great story. I just added it to the library.

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#3  Edited By kamrenamir

@shadowknight666: @TheCannon: Thankyou Thankyou

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@kamrenamir said:

@shadowknight666: @TheCannon: Thankyou Thankyou

No problem. I like reading anything from this group. We have some great combos. Can't wait to work with you on Super-spider.

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#5  Edited By kamrenamir

@TheCannon: Yea. It should be really fun.

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@kamrenamir said:

@TheCannon: Yea. It should be really fun.

It will be. We can talk about it some more tomorrow. I have some nice villain ideas.

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#7  Edited By kamrenamir

@TheCannon: Coool. Rhino and Bane? Barhino

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@kamrenamir said:

@TheCannon: Coool. Rhino and Bane? Barhino

Not what I was thinking, but good idea. I'm going to bed. We'll talk about this more in, I would sat tomorrow, but it's 1:00 am. So, in a few hours.

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#9  Edited By kamrenamir

@TheCannon: LOL Just a random villain I made up. For some reason I was thinking of Bat man. Ok Good night

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#10  Edited By batkevin74

@kamrenamir: I liked it but being the grammar & spelling Nazi I am; I quoted your story to a word doc and these are the words you spelt incorrectly.[stealthilyuntilhappenedsetbackmembersdecapitateposition releasepositionplummeted thugs’You’re]

Other than that I liked it, bit short but I liked it :)

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#11  Edited By kamrenamir

@batkevin74: Uhhg I was expecting my google chrome to get it but it didn't so yea next time I'll use microsoft word.

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#12  Edited By BatteredArmor

Really good, great story

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#13  Edited By Frozen_Eternal

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