New Amalgam Universe: Teth-Dakom #1

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Part 1

Fourteen years, thats how long I've been alive.And In those fourteen years I've hurt a lot of people.But I think it's justified. My father left my mom when I was three, and as a result, my mother committed suicide.So I've been moving from foster home to foster home because the owner of the orphanage never seems to getin that all of the people in my life, die. They all have 3 clean stab marks in their chests.

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As Dakom "Dak" Akihiro walk down the street of the run down neighborhood he now called home he planned the assault on his new family.

"Maybe this time I'll get picked up by someone wealthy" Dak thought to himself as he turned a corner.

Walking past a park, five thugs emerged from the darkness of the playground.

All of them having cigeretts in thier mouth they exited the park and surounded Dak.

"Look who it is, the new runt that moved in." One of the thugs pushed Dak

"How much money you got on you runt?" The thugs were getting more violent

"None that you and your bastard friends can have" Dak was resisting their pushing.

"Oh, he's a smart mouth" One of the thugs said

The apparent leader of the thugs pulled out a switch blade.

"We can do this the easy," Suddenly Dak's knee was thrusted vigorusly into the thugs stomach, forcing him to drop the knife.

While the other thugs help the leader off of the ground he pushes them away.

"Congratulations runt, your going to die" One of the other thugs says as he give the leader his knife.

"Beat him to a pulp" The leader says pointing to Dak.

"I pefer my orange juice without pulp actually." Dak said with a smirk.

As the thugs charge at him Dak swiftly dodges their clumsy bodies and runs down the street.

Approaching an ally with the thugs close behind him he decided to play with them.

Running into the ally Dak faked tripping over his foot and stayed on the ground wimpering.

"Please don't hurt me." Dak said as convincingly as he could.

"To late for that runt!" The leader yelled as the other thugs picked Dak off of the ground and held his arms.

Pulling out the switch blade Dak decided that he would let them stab him.

Walking up Dak the leader grabbed his shoulder and thrusted the knife into Dak a dozen times.

Dropping to the ground Dak somewhat liked the pain that came after those thrusts, but only because he knew that it would be gone in a couple of minutes.

By the time Dak was fully healed the thugs were about 3/4ths of the way down the ally.

Why they decided to walk down to the other end, who knows? But it would be their biggest mistake.

Standing up and brushing off the dirt from his old navy jacket Dak brought his hands up in front of him and

instantly, three claws came out, 2 from his knuckles and one from his wrist.

(note-Dakom is Egyption & Japanese thus, first name and last name)

(BLACK ADAM AND IS THE PROPERTY OF DC. AND THEIR RESPECTIVE AFFILIATES.DAKEN AKIHIRO IS THE PROPERTY OF MARVEL AND THEIR RESPECTIVE AFFILIATES ALL RIGHTS RESERVED, I THOUGHT OF THE STORY.

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#1  Edited By DickGrayson

Wow! This is amazing!

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#2  Edited By kamrenamir

@DickGrayson: Thanks.

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#3  Edited By TheCannon

Great story. Just added to the library.

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#4  Edited By PrinceIMC

I didn't even know this was out there. Are you not part of the PM?

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#5  Edited By batkevin74

This is great, I also had no idea this was here until now. Shazolverine! :)

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#6  Edited By kamrenamir

@PrinceIMC: Yea. Cannon said there were problems adding me to the PM.

@batkevin74: YES. I was saying that someone should make him and then we fight to the death.

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#7  Edited By batkevin74

@kamrenamir: Shazolverine...hmmmm young Billy Howlett transforms, I'll keep it in mind :)

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#8  Edited By kamrenamir

@batkevin74: Yes!

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#9  Edited By CainPanell

@kamrenamir: Great Job! About to read part two.

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#10  Edited By BatteredArmor

epic man, just epic

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#11  Edited By Frozen_Eternal

bump