Need some help!!!

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#1  Edited By Gregwithag77
Alright so I've decided on for the story im writing...

Quantum Boy
And Cosmic Girl.
Cosmic Girl is similar to Supergirl
Her home planet is at a nuclear holocaust
And she's a refugee who doesnt want
Earth becoming like her Home.

Quantum Boy is a boy whose father
Had created bands similar to Jack Knights Cosmic Staff.
And he's avenging his dad and fighting crime
And school life.


I just cant think of a good villan.

For COsmic Girl I was thinking a villan
Similar to Brainiac who created the nuclear weapons of
Her home world.

And a symbiote like creature which is one of her homeworlds
Weapons.

I just cant think of any good names.
Plus for her home world a good name..
im horrible with names.....


And cities the two heroes live in i cant think of either..
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#2  Edited By Man-Dragon

Hey.

I like your ideas and I don't mind helping you out.

With Quantum Boy, being a teenage superhero would handle B-level villains (I think that means earthly yet powerful), Bigger and intergalactic are more your character's rogue gallery. Like Supergirl.

Anyway villains like flying thieves, highly-skilled yet human mercenaries and murders, elemental controllers like fire, ice, electricity etc., corrupted businessmen, gangsters , power suits are among the many of choices.
It is your choice in the end. Good luck.

For Cosmic Girl's foe, how's this: Xera-buluk
Like cerebulum (found in the brain), but more alien in origin.
As for the symbiote creature: How are this name: Para-Skin & Lunar Leech.
Backstory: Like symbiote, but can feed on host's lifeforce as well. Nocturnal by nature.

Home Planet: Opithera (O-p-fair-a) Inhabitant name: Opitherian

Cities:
Aircrest City
Riverside Grove

Hope these can help.

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#3  Edited By Gregwithag77

Wow thanks it helps a lot actually.
Any other suggestions are appreacitated too =D