My first Story attempt

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Hello Everyone, thank you for taking your time to check out my first attempt of writing a (longer) Story. Since English isnt my native Language, though im currently studying it, i can guarantee that there will be mistakes here and there. I will try my best to correct them as soon as possible, but any help is appreciated. I plan to upload at least one page per week (if i have time i might update it more). The Story will be more of a classic High-Fantasy story, though i will try to experiment at times, since im more of a experimental short-story author, than a novelist. I hope you will enjoy my Story, thank you for reading.

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Part1:

It was around Eleven o'clock when Duren left Hailt without anyone noticing it. He carefully planned his disappearance for more then one Month, not that it really mattered. Even though the Villagers treated him as one of their own, he knew that after the death of his Parents last year, the distance between him and the Villagers grew from day to day. Additionally this years Harvest turned out to be really bad and so everyone would have a hard time surviving on their own. Before he left he wrote a letter to the Villagers thanking them for taking care of him. He also left them some of the Money that he inherited from his parents and only took the basic necessities as well as 3 specific Items that were left behind by his parents. After leaving the outskirts of the Village behind, Duren climbed up a Tree and sat down on one of the branches. He was irritated. He knew that he had to leave the Village, but still, leaving behind all his friends and acquaintances for an unknown amount of time, still made him sad. To quickly forget about these things that could shatter his resolve, he decided to once again go through everything that he brought with him. Apart from the basics he had three especially important Items that would lead him on his Journey. The first thing was a letter that he got from his parents shortly before they left on the trip, during which they died. The only thing special to this letter was that it was sealed, but Duren new how to break this seal, or better said, he new that the seal would break on his 16 birthday, which would mark the day were he officially would be recognized as an Adult. Luckily his birthday was only one week away, which meant that soon he could take a look into the content of the letter. But the other two Items that were left behind were the ones he was more Interested in for now. Apart from the letter he also brought a book, but it wasn't just a normal book, rather it was a magical book, that would allow him to learn magic Spells of the earth element. He trained since the time when he found this Book in his Fathers study and had already mastered the first two, out of ten, Levels of the magic tome. The third Item that he had with him was a map. It was a big map that showed the whole southern part of the Reigen Continent. The Map was maybe even the most important Item for Duren right now, since he had to decide were he would like to adventure. He leaned back and took a look at the map. He found his current Position very fast and after analyzing the map, he came to the conclusion, that he had three Options.

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Keep Writing!!! But please make paragraphs. Every five sentences at least, easier on the eyes. 😜