This is a story a young friend of mine told me. Originally it was about me. I changed 'You' to 'Yu' to make things slightly less confusing. Words in [-] are my editions to aid in streamlining. Words in (-) are things she felt needed to be clarified. Words in caps were also per her instructions. Sentence formatting is by me to aid reading. The first part reads like a recap partly because that was how it was presented, and partly because she had to recap the story from the beginning once I realized I HAD to write this down.
Part 1
Addendum: The lumberjack also had a concussion. That didn't get written down.
Part 2
This part is where she took over the writing portions herself. Her unique writing style is presented verbatim.
Addendum 2. The vegan thing had a pay off that didn't make the writing. The nurse tried to poison the lumberjack, and brought him the wrong meal. The second meal was correct but then he was irate. Hence the needle air bubble plan. This was explained to me but again, didn't make the first draft. My bad
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