Moon Knight-Trial By Fire (Script #1)

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Link to Issue 0!

Page One:

1.1: Front view as a car pulls up in front of Marlene's house. Headlights on.

1.2: A foot stepping onto the pavement. (NOT Moon Knight)

1.3: The person from the back, as he knocks on the door.

SFX: BAMBAMBAM!

1.4: Same shot, Marlene has opened the door a crack. A look of terror is on her face.

Marlene: Frenchie?

1.5: Reverse shot. Back of Marlene, we see Jean-Paul DuChamp ("Frenchie") is greeting her.

Frenchie: I came as soon as I saw what happened...do you--

Marlene: I know.

Frenchie: Is Mark home?

Marlene: He-he hasn't come back yet....

Page Two:

2.1: Marlene has opened the door all the way. Her back faces us.

Marlene: Please, come inside.

2.2: Frenchie sitting on a couch, Marlene brings him a drink. (NOTE: No lights are on in the house)

Frenchie: What will you be doing when he gets here?

2.3: Marlene handing Frenchie a drink.

Marlene: I-I'll try to stay away from him....at least until morning.

Marlene: Here...have some coffee.

2.4: Frenchie taking a sip of coffee. Marlene still has a worried look on her face.

Frenchie: What are we going to do with him?

2.5: Marlene biting her lower lip, looking down.

Marlene: I wish I knew...

Page Three:

3.1: Wide shot of the Moon copter.

NO DIALOGUE

3.2: Side view of Moon Knight piloting the Moon copter. His suit has scratches and blood spattered on his uniform from the battle last chapter

NO DIALOGUE.

3.3: Same shot, Khonshu is now next to him.

Khonshu: You did well.

3.4: Closeup on Moon Knight.

Moon Knight: ........

3.5: Khonshu's eyes.

Khonshu: Have you nothing to say?

Page Four:

4.1: Wide shot of Moon Knight and Khonshu.

Moon Knight: I did what was asked of me. That is enough.

4.2: Same shot

Khonshu: You are proving your loyalty to me. You should be pleased....are you not?

Moon Knight: .....

4.3: Closeup of Khonshu.

Khonshu: Very well then....I have more....pressing matters to attend to.

4.4: Side shot of Moon Knight piloting the Moon Copter.

NO DIALOGUE.

Page Five:

CAPTION: Morning:

5.1: Marc Spector going down stairs to his kitchen.

5.2: Mark making Coffee.

5.3: Mark turned around. Marlene is there. She looks like she's been up all night. Hair is a mess, wearing the same clothes, etc.

Marc: Marlene......

Marlene: Marc....please.....

5.4: Closeup of Marlene, holding up a newspaper. Headline says "MOON KNIGHT KILLS CRAZED MADMAN!"

Marlene: Tell me this isn't you....

5.5: Marc's face, shocked.

Marc: Marlene....please.

Page Six:

6.1: Closeup of Marc.

Marc: I....I didn't....I'm sorry...I--

6.2: Marlene's eyes. Filled with terror.

Marlene: You did it, didn't you?

6.3: Marlene turning away from Marc.

Marlene: Oh God!

6.4: Marc, rushing to comfort her.

Marlene: GET AWAY FROM ME! GET AWAY!

6.5: Marlene running away.

NO DIALOGUE.

6.6: Marc, burying his head in his hands.

Marc: God....God help me.

Page Seven:

7.1: Overhead view of six people, surrounding a statue of Khonshu.

CAPTION (Zeus): Egypt.

CAPTION (Zeus): I hate it already.

7.2: Closeup of one of the persons' lips. A hood conceals the upper half of his face. He has a costume similar to Moon Knight, only without the Moon symbols. (so just white)

Priest: Praise be to Khonshu.

7.3: The other five, all kneeling as well.

Chorus: Praise be to Khonshu.

7.4: Wide shot of the whole place shaking.

SFX: RUMMMMMMMMBBBLLLLEEEEEEEE!!!!

7.5: A lightning bolt breaks the statue of Khonshu.

SFX: CRAACK!

Page Eight:

SPLASH! Zeus appears before them, in all his Godly manner. a cloud of dust cakes the lower half of the room. The six men are all sprawled out in different positions across the room.

Zeus: Here me, worshipers of Khonshu....You worship a false God....he is NOTHING!....he is WEAK!

Page Nine:

8.2: Lightning extends from Zeus's finger.

8.3: The lightning touching the heads of all the Khonshu worshipers.

Worshipers: AAAAAAAAARGH!

8.4: Closeup on Zeus.

Zeus: Time to change things up, no?

Zeus: Let's go for something.....ironic.

Pages Ten and Eleven:

SPLASH! Moon Knight facing off against six werewolves. Slashes across his costume suggest he's been at this for a while. Blood also soaks his uniform.

CAPTION (Moon Knight): This is bad.

CAPTION (Moon Knight): The rags on the werewolves suggest they were once worshipers of Khonshu....someone...or something is turning them into monsters.

CAPTION (Moon Knight): Khonshu has ordered them to be killed.

Page Twelve:

12.1: Moon Knight smacking a Werewolf with his staff, while throwing a kick behind him.

SFX: WHAM!!

SFX: CRACK!

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Whoever did this has a sense of humor.

12.2: Moon Knight is slashed across the chest by a werewolf.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): My first enemy was the WEREWOLF BY NIGHT....it can't be a coincidence that they were turned into werewolves.

12.3: Moon Knight grappling the same werewolf, bringing his knee into it's stomach.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): So...many...can't get tired.

12.4: Moon Knight pressing a button on his staff.

12.5: A knife pops out of the end of the staff.

Page Thirteen:

13.1: Moon Knight sliding backwards as a werewolf is about to pounce.

Werewolf: RAAAAAAAAAAAGH!

13.2: Moon Knight thrust his staff forward, impaling the werewolf.

Werewolf: URK!

SFX: SKRRRTCH!

13.3: A werewolf claws Moon Knights back.

Werewolf: RAAAHR!

SFX: SKKKRT.

Moon Knight: Damn!

13.4: Closeup on the werewolf's face. a spiked glove smashes into it.

SFX: CRRUSSH

13.5: Moon Knight split kicking two more werewolves.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Keep the other two out of this. Then go in for the kill.

Page 14:

14.1: Moon Knight has the staff raised over his head, the other werewolf is sprawled on the ground.

14.2: Moon Knight stabbing the werewolf. Blood spurts from his mouth.

Page 15:

15.1: Khonshu and Zeus watching from above.

Zeus: Why?

15.2: Khonshu looking sideways. His head is not turned, though)

Khonshu: Why what?

15.3: Closeup on Zeus's face.

Zeus: Don't play stupid. Why are you having your own disciples killed?

15.4: Khonshu looking back at the carnage. Moon Knight (seen far below) is slitting another werewolf's throat

Khonshu: You'll see soon enough.

Page 16:

16.1: Moon Knight throwing a kick to a werewolf's face.

SFX: BAM!

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Getting tired....half to finish this...before--

16.2: A werewolf kicking Moon Knight in the face.

Moon Knight: UNN--

16.3: Moon Knight catches the next punch.

SFX: FAK!

Moon Knight: Nice try!

16.4: Moon Knight stabs the werewolf's leg.

Page 17:

17.1: Moon Knight stabs the werewolf through the brain. Blood soaks his staff.

17.2: A werewolf slamming his fist into Moon Knight's gut.

SFX: DKUSH!

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Two more....just have to hold out.

17.3: The other werewolf slashing up Moon Knight's chest.

CAPTION(Moon Knight): Hold....out.

17.4: Moon Knight kneeling, using his staff for support.

Page Eighteen:

18.1: Same shot of Khonshu and Zeus as before.

Zeus: Your priest has fallen, Khonshu.

18.2: Khonshu's eyes. He's gambling...he's unsure Moon Knight can win.

Khonshu: Don't count on it.

18.3: Front shot of the two Gods.

Zeus: Just remember....even if your priest fails....I still get my share for my efforts.

18.4: Khonshu looking away.

Khonshu: I'm well aware.

Page Nineteen:

19.1: Moon Knight throwing his staff up, cutting the werewolf in a similar way he cut him up his chest.

CAPTION(Khonshu): But he's always had a last burst of strength left.

SFX: SKRRRRTCH!

19.2: Moon Knight charging with his staff at the last werewolf.

Moon Knight: HURRRRRAAAAGH!

CAPTION(Khonshu): Let's hope it's enough.

19.3: The werewolf is impaled against the wall

19.4: The last werewolf's eye widened.

19.5: The same eye, now gone lazy (dead like)

Page 20:

20.1: Front shot of the two gods.

Khonshu: You see? He has succeeded.

20.2: Zeus, turning to Khonshu.

Zeus: Please, enlighten me why you are doing this.

20.3: Same shot.

Khonshu: Very well.

20.4: Close up on Khonshu.

Khonshu: It has come to my attention that many people who worship me also worship God from other...pantheons.....

Khonshu: I'm giving Moon Knight and excuse to wipe them out.

Page 21:

SPLASH! Moon Knight covered in blood, as the bodies of the six werewolves litter the ground. Moon Knight's costume is almost entirely re, as he's covered in blood. What's left of the temple has organs, blood, and ruins.

CAPTION(Khonshu): And Moon Knight is doing an excellent job....

Link to Punisher issue 0 (essential part of the story) here

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#1  Edited By InnerVenom123

Nice work! MK VS Werewolves is always awesome.

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#2  Edited By GiantsizeManThing

@InnerVenom123: Why is it that you and primepower can write circles around Brian Michael Bendis?

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#3  Edited By The Impersonator

When there is a full Moon Knight, there's always a werewolf. =P

Great chapter!

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#5  Edited By The Impersonator

@primepower53: You're welcome!

Sweet! I'll check it out. :)

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Impersonator: I happily await your input. :D