Mashed Up Origin: Winter Soldier

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#1  Edited By batkevin74

Welcome to Mashed Up Origins! This is an experiment of mine that I was going to make into a group, but with the chaos that a group can bring I decided to go it alone, no offense but I don't feel like juggling a 'world' at the moment. Feel free to do your own. It’s short, sweet and basically a quick origin, not an ongoing just something to make you go (hopefully) “I’d like to see that!”

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7 th April 1944, Cherbourg

“No your usual sidekick Herr Captain” remarked Baron Zemo as he watched four soldiers shock Namor with high-tech cattle prods. The Atlantean prince convulsed and writhed in pain. Zemo looked over at the badly beaten Captain America being held by four soldiers. “Where is the one they call Bucky?”

“Hopefully,” spat Captain America “Sending a rocket into the Wolf’s Lair”

Zemo thumped his boot into Captain America’s gut “You American’s and your bravado!”

“Zemo” wheezed the Captain.

“Yes Herr Captain”

“I’m going to kill you”

Zemo looked deep into his nemesis’ eyes “Yes I believe you would…if given a chance” Zemo smashed his fist into his face “Beat them both. We launch on schedule”

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“Imperius Rex!” roared Namor as he flew after the drone. Captain America clung to his arm. The drone began to tilt up and pick up speed as it sped towards London.

“I need to drop you” yelled Namor “It’s getting away!”

“I can disarm it Namor” he yelled in reply “Just get closer”

Namor poured on speed as the drone shuttle inched away and gained altitude.

“Closer Namor”

“Bah!” Namor shook his comrade in arms from his grasp and caught up to the bomb. He smashed his fist into the metal casing and tore off a panel.

“Don’t hit it!” yelled Captain America as he fell towards the sea.

All Namor caught was “hit it” over the noise. He raised his fist and punched into the core of the drone and the shuttle exploded. The shock wave hit Captain America slamming him hard into the cold waters of the English Channel.

8 th April 1944, 130ft underwater near the Straits of Dover

“…merica has been blown up” The Soviet radio man signal to the helm at the intercepted transmission. Commander Karpov strode over to his station and put on a set of massive earphones to hear the message.

“Prepare to surface”

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Laying on a slab in the medical bay was Namor. His chest rose slowly and erratically. His left arm had been completely blown off, other burns and shrapnel wounds peppered his chest and face.

“How is he?” asked Commander Karpov as he entered the room.

“We have pumped adrenaline into his heart, administered CPR” replied Dr Rezun “He will live. Seems the frigid waters have reacted with his odd physiology to flash freeze him. I did not expect Captain America to be a mutant”

“This is not Captain America, Dr Rezun” said Karpov lighting a cigarette “This is a Winter Soldier”

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#2  Edited By TheCannon

This was still going on? I asked about it on the PM you sent, and no one ever replied.

Nice story by the way.

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#3  Edited By batkevin74

@TheCannon: Nah it's just something I'm going to do solo, feel free to do one or two. Iron Age takes up a wad of my time and another world juggling who can have what/why/when not for me!

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@batkevin74 said:

@TheCannon: Nah it's just something I'm going to do solo, feel free to do one or two. Iron Age takes up a wad of my time and another world juggling who can have what/why/when not for me!

Okay. just wondering.

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GREAT STORY!

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#6  Edited By batkevin74

@primepower53: Thanks

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#7  Edited By batkevin74

Bumped to put all thee near each other

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#8  Edited By tomdickharry1984

Briliant! Very coolio

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#9  Edited By 4donkeyjohnson

Comrade Karpov, from the actual Winter Soldier if I remember correctly. Good work!

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#10  Edited By batkevin74

@tomdickharry1984: Thanks

@4donkeyjohnson: Nice spotting :)

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#11  Edited By GR2Blackout

So, this is a mash up of Winter Soldiers origin and...

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#12  Edited By TheCannon

@GR2Blackout said:

So, this is a mash up of Winter Soldiers origin and...

Namor.

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#13  Edited By batkevin74

@GR2Blackout: Really? You missed Namor...yeah it's Namor with the Winter Soldier origin

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

So, this is a mash up of Winter Soldiers origin and...

Namor.

Thanks :)

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@batkevin74 said:

@GR2Blackout: Really? You missed Namor...yeah it's Namor with the Winter Soldier origin

@TheCannon said:

@GR2Blackout said:

So, this is a mash up of Winter Soldiers origin and...

Namor.

Thanks :)

You're welcome. You do good work.

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#15  Edited By batkevin74

@TheCannon: Cheers

Here's another M.U.O if you're interested

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#16  Edited By Veitha

@batkevin74 I liked this a lot too!

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#17  Edited By batkevin74

@Veitha: Glad you liked it :) There's one other one I did...I'll send you the link if you wish

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#18  Edited By tomdickharry1984

You should do a stor with all yur mash-ups! :P That'd rock

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#19  Edited By batkevin74

@tomdickharry1984: Maybe

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#20  Edited By csguterres

@batkevin74 Excellent story!

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#21  Edited By tomdickharry1984

Do it! Yuve got Jugernaut, Winter Solider, Fantastic For, Thor...DO IT!!!!!!!!!

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#22  Edited By DickGrayson

AMAZING! THIS IS GREAT! Makes me wanna hurry up and get home so I can write Winter Soldier for Iron Age!

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#23  Edited By batkevin74

@DickGrayson: Thanks. And yes W.S for I.A :)

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#24  Edited By 4donkeyjohnson

Possibly my favourite of your Mashed Up's. It's very minimalist, leaving us to assume/presume what's going to happen next with Namor and relying on what we know about the Winter Soldier which makes it work. Very good work

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#25  Edited By BatteredArmor

This is my favorite so far. Well done

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#26  Edited By batkevin74

@4donkeyjohnson: Thanks

@BlackArmor: Thanks

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#27  Edited By batkevin74

bumping

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I read this. :)

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Soviet Atlantean? Look out U-Man trouble is a comming

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@batkevin74: Да здравствует рыба империя

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@impurestcheese: Yes long live the fish empire indeed! Thanks google translate :)

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Scariest Winter Soldier ever...

(Also, kinda sad that I have to ask this, but is Cap or Namor the Winter Soldier?

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@uncanny_xfactor: Laying on a slab in the medical bay was Namor. His chest rose slowly and erratically. His left arm had been completely blown off, other burns and shrapnel wounds peppered his chest and face.

Tis Prince Namor, The Winter Soldier!

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As I suspected, the scariest Winter Soldier there ever was!

(The asking if it was Cap at the end threw me off. I was pretty sure it was Namor otherwise.)

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#37  Edited By batkevin74

Bumped as I had a picture commissioned of him which will appear soon

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Bumped as I had a picture commissioned of him which will appear soon

May I also throw my hat into the ring? :)

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@uncanny_xfactor: Sure can, here's what Lorenzo from Lion Forge comics did for me at Wizardworld Chicago 2014

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@batkevin74: Oh my God, that's really cool!

I'd love to, same uniform?

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Bumped

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Interesting mix here.

It would have been interesting to see some of these that went way off script.

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@blueecho: How so? Might need an explanation on that as I'm not really sure what you mean. Are you going like what if Aunt May got him with the mutagenic ooze in her eyes and got radar powers? That what you mean

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#44  Edited By BlueEcho

@batkevin74: Mashup origins between say Silver Surfer and Ghost Rider, or Doctor Voodoo and Daredevil, or She-Hulk and Elektra.

I find the more extreme choices that we make when writing often bear the best results.

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@blueecho: Hmmm that's a bit harder, not impossible but making it work is the problem especially with say the Silver Surfer and Ghost Rider. Is he Norrin Radd who becomes Ghost Rider THEN is chosen by Galactus so we get Silver Ghost?

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@batkevin74: Yes a bit harder, but that is the challenge and why writing can be so much fun :)