Marvel Iron Age: Hardy and Creed, interlude

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Mr. Sinister is sitting his lab looking through a microscope when a call comes in on his holo-phone,

General Helfitta: Care to explain why one of your furry monsters is killing my soldiers Essex

Sinister not looking up from his scope and in a calm but stern tone

Sinister: Do you really want to take that tone with me Falcon

The General immediately calms his voice

FH: The Creed, why has it been killing soldiers

MS: A lab tech forgot to implant it's neural inhibitor during the fetal stage so it's healing factor must have destroyed it.

FH: Neural Inhibitor?

MS: Of course, don't want those furry monster learning to think. That would be chaos, I have what's left of the tech in a jar if you'd like to come yell at him.

FH: Why the hell are you keeping it?

MS: Motivational tool

The General shakes his head and looks back at Sinister still sitting by the microscope only looking up to make notes and the cold chill that he always has when dealing with Sinister runs down his spine. Suddenly Sinister looks up and says,

MS: If those few soldiers bother you I can't wait to see how you react when the Chairman learns what happened on the train.

With that Sinister kills the connection as the general wonders what he meant then his com comes back on

FH: They stole What!!!

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#1  Edited By batkevin74

Nice! That's awesome! I love that you used General Helfitta and that Mr Sinister barely notices the call whilst he works away.

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#2  Edited By joshmightbe

@batkevin74: Just wanted to get this Idea out and I couldn't think of a way to fit it into my story, also it offers a quick explanation as to why 7 has been able to surpass the intelligence of the rest of the Creeds

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#3  Edited By batkevin74

@joshmightbe: Worked for me! Nice job on making the universe connect together

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#4  Edited By joshmightbe

@batkevin74: Thanks

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#5  Edited By batkevin74

@joshmightbe: I like that Helfitta has enough authority to call Sinister but in no way outranks him.

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#6  Edited By joshmightbe

@batkevin74: I included the implied threat just to show that even the bad guys are freaked out by Sinister