HORROR INC: Freddy Krueger #1

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#1  Edited By TommytheHitman

Elm Park

"One, two Freddy's coming for you."

Freddy Krueger opened his eyes and tried to move, he felt his hands push against restraints and suddenly realised he was tied up to a cross. Next to him a man leered at him.

"That's what you used to say right? When you were playing hide and seek with your ugly ass daughter in the park?"

Freddy stared at the man, he realised he was his next door neighbour.

"Fu$k you." Freddy said as he spat in his neighbour's face.

"That. Wasn't. Nice." The neighbour said as he pulled something out of his pocket. He lopped it against Freddy's hand, causing it to fall on the floor. Freddy screamed as blood squirted out and nearly blacked out from the pain, at least he would have if not for all thepeople holding torches and walking towards him.

"Freddy Krueger" Freddy's neighbour said while pulling a white mask over his head. "You have escaped justice, for your crimes the citizens of Springwood have declared you to be punished by DEATH! May God have mercy on your soul."

"Just..." Freddy started before stopping.

"Just what?" The neighbour said as he leaned in to hear what Freddy had to say.

"Just grow some balls before you die!" Freddy said before biting into the man's ear. The man screamed as he tried to pull away, Freddy tugged and felt a strange satisfaction as the man's ear was torn away from his head. He guessed the doctors HAD been right. He did have sociopathic tendencies. The crowd lit the cross on fire with their torches, Freddy laughed as he felt his skin melting.

"IS THAT IT?!" Freddy screamed at the horrified crowd. "IS THAT ALL YOU'VE GOT?! SING IT WITH ME EVERYONE! ONE, TWO FREDDY'S COMING FOR YOU! THREE, FOUR BETTER LOCK UP YOUR DOOR! FIVE. SIX GRAB YOUR CRUCIFIX!"

The crowd watched as Freddy's skin melted into a pool on the grass, Freddy had stopped singing and had started laughing.

"SEVEN, EIGHT STAY UP LATE! NINE, TEN NEVER FEEL SAFE AGAIN!"

Freddy screamed as he felt his life fade away from him. The world went black and he finally felt free...

"wake up freddy."

___________

1987, Elm School

"I'm sorry Miss Krueger but your son clearly has... problems." The school headmaster said.

Miss Krueger sighed and rolled her eyes.

"What? He got into a fight at school? What kid doesn't? I don't understand why you had to call me out of work."

"Ma'am, he killed his class room's hamster."

Miss Krueger was silent as she allowed the headmaster's words to sink in.

"All signs point to him having minor sociopathic tendencies. Now if you're careful and guide him we can hopefully avoid any worse incidents in the future, and... you'll have to reinburse Mr Craven for his dead hamster, or..." The headmaster started to say.

"Right then, wipe your things off the table then. Let's do this." Miss Krueger said.

To be continued...

Freddy Krueger owned by Wes Craven and all those cool guys. If you want to make a reboot that doesn't suck, and want to use mine feel free to ask.

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And... picture added! Pictures make everything better. Unless it's stuff I hate. Feel free to share your thoughts in the comments!

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#3 BumpyBoo  Moderator

@tommythehitman:

Nice one adding the pic at the end, that is a cute touch ^_^

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@bumpyboo: I thought it might be. While not the best movie I've seen Freddy vs Jason did give that good line.

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Hmmmm interesting start, it is a tad odd but I am curious to see where you are headed with this @tommythehitman:

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@tommythehitman: Nice start. Now I host trivia so this may or may not come in handy:

"I was born around 9th Nov 1938-1939 in Ohio, but records are hazy. My mother Amanda, a nun, was accidentally locked in after hours at a mental asylum and raped multiple times by over a dozen criminally insane inmates. I was given up for adoption but the family that took me in wasn’t good. My stepfather abused me, forcing me to become bitter and a self-abuser, and in 1957 I killed him. I put the past behind me and got married to a girl named Loretta and we had a beautiful daughter named Katherine. But maybe I was born bad or due to my DNA or the abuse I suffered, but in the 70’s I began my spree. I began killing children! I had racked up quite a sizeable number when my wife found out and turned me in to the cops, not before I strangled her in front of our daughter! But due to a technicality on the warrant I was freed. The parents of the children I murdered were outraged by this and formed a mob. They tracked me down in the boiler room where I used to take his victims since I was the school janitor. They set the place on fire, trapping me inside and killing me…but it wasn’t the end. I served as a vessel for a trio of demons and returned from the grave to kill again! My first targets would be the children of the parents who torched me. I began murdering them in their nightmares; everyone began to think that it was suicide. But it was me in my distinct jumper and weapon of choice, a razor sharp glove! I have been back several times to extract revenge but seem to be constantly thwarted by powerful young women. I have fought Jason Voorhees and hosted my own TV series. I have been played by Robert Englund in all my incarnations except the 2010 remake and was voted the 14th Greatest Villain of All Time. I am…Freddy Krueger

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Gah -- face melting into a pool on the grass.....the image is just .....meep.

Ahem -- of course the ending -- is interesting as well.

Thank you for alerting me to this -- please feel free to do so again, I am hooked.

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#10  Edited By wildvine

I loved this Tommy. Especially this bit.

"IS THAT IT?!" Freddy screamed at the horrified crowd. "IS THAT ALL YOU'VE GOT?! SING IT WITH ME EVERYONE! ONE, TWO FREDDY'S COMING FOR YOU! THREE, FOUR BETTER LOCK UP YOUR DOOR! FIVE. SIX GRAB YOUR CRUCIFIX!"

1) this part made me chuckle. And two, I could totally hear Freddy's voice in my head. It really seemed in character for him. Good job boy.

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Bump ^_^

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@bumpyboo: Who made that picture though? Along with the Jason one? I really hope they make those in real life.

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@bumpyboo: Who made that picture though? Along with the Jason one? I really hope they make those in real life.

I found them at this site:

http://kingpanpan.com/

There are hundreds of them there, everything from X Men, Star Wars, manga and game characters...so many bears! XD

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Loved this! Wellll doonnneee! Never even watched a Fred thing in my life, but this had me engaged!

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Great start

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So bumping this again ^_^

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#20  Edited By batkevin74

Bumped as I read my way to 5

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Bump!