Do You Really Love Me?

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#1  Edited By The WeatherMan

“Do you really love me?” he asked through the abyss/

After giving her their last kiss, hoping she would not miss/

Once he handed her the gun, the sun began to drown/

Behind the city’s skyline, she looked divine with her frown/

With her blue eyes like the skies, she felt that this was not fair/

She tried not to cry, like the rain in the sky she tried to not care/

She tried to not swear through her teeth, tried to stop breathing/

Then shook her head instead, screamed out “You are not leaving!”/

As he began walking away, back to his brightest day ever/

When he would not dare hurt her, but never say never/

Some love just isn’t forever, the gun began to gain weight/

They would never plan straight, but now it’s too late/

And the deepest hate begins to destroy her soul mate/

He can relate to the trait, such are the ways of fate/

”No… I will not…” She didn’t want him to get shot/

But the governments would have never forgot/

”You must put trust into the gun and shoot!”/

His voice and her tears raced in pursuit/

”I can’t kill you… We can still run/”

She would have never thought to kill him with the gun/

”They already know about us, so destroy,

Before they get impatient and station out their convoy”/

You see the thing is that he was a spy/

And so was she, that they couldn’t deny/

But he spied for the government that she opposed/

He had no idea of such when he proposed/

But when they realized the ugly truth beneath their dreams/

They decided to meet behind this booth to end the schemes/

To end the pain before the angry rain of bigger men/

Would piece by piece, release the fury, consuming them/

”Kill me now to have a chance to redeem yourself/

Who knows, they might even give you the seen wealth/”

So she swallowed hard counting the odds against them/

Her insides knew no rest, just the way her sense been/

She finally pulled the trigger… She was like an equation, he could never solve her/

”We can go out together…” Her words endeavored as she pulled her revolver/

Tossing it into his hands, she stands up, guns are loaded/

They stand back to back, a snipers attack, something exploded/

As the passerby’s turn into guys from FBIs/

Their cries are silent as the place gets violent, beneath the skies/

Beneath the bright lights, they never could pick the right fights/

Now love’s might is crumpling beneath the dark nights/

Gunshots spear through the fear, she tears once more/

He jumps to stop the bullet that’s meant for her/

Then falls, but keeps on shooting/

His heart starts to beat faster, he keeps rooting/

For his beloved, last shells empty, his gun quiet/

He attempts to see her image through the riot/

As her colt, spits out and revolts his last magazine/

She could have seen this coming, what could have been/

Escapes both of their minds, as she kindly falls beside/

Reminding them both of Bonnie and Clyde, she cried/

Not because of their death, but because her last breath is filled with love/

In her final effort, her method was to grab his hands and fly above/

They closed their eyes without saying, praying Death may do them well/

So that history may have a story to inspire and tell/

About a match made in heaven that set the fires in hell/

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#2  Edited By Blue Lantern 2814

That was great.

The funny thing is, I was watching Mr. and Mrs. Smith on TV as I was reading this.
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#3  Edited By Jokerette

It's fantastic! Really, I cried *sniff*

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#4  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

That was amazing.  I felt everyword.  And yes i did cry

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#6  Edited By No_Name_

wow. 

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#7  Edited By mantoid

Nice work.

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#8  Edited By Resonate

:O

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#9  Edited By PRIMAV3RA

this poem never fails to make me cry.  i think this is amazing work im really in love with it.   its got some wondeful emotions in it and it makes u feel which is hard to do

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#10  Edited By Virago

Then shook her head instead, screamed out “You are not leaving!"

favorite line.
very cool, mate
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#11  Edited By Queen Kong

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