DCRC Presents; Merry Christmas, a$$hole.

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#1  Edited By waezi2

Keystone City, Christmas Eve...

"P-p-p-please! Leave me alone! OOOWWW!!!!"

Pete fell down on his knees. He had just been kicked in the crotch. His tormentor looked down at him, as Pete wimped in the snowy back alley.

"Gimme the bag, kid."

"C-come on, it's Christmas, man..."

"Bag." the attacker said mercilessly. Pete finally gave in, and handed the abuser the red shoulder-bag.

The man looked through the bag. "Good boy. And now, the wallet."

"Oh, COME ON!!!"

"Wallet, please."

Pete took out his wallet, and handed it to his mugger, only to get it thrown back in his face.

"Not your own wallet, dumbass!" The guy shouted.

Pete opened his jacket and dug his hand into an inner-pocket. He took out a much more expensive-looking one, made out of black leather. The man went through the wallet, and smiled.

"Nice." he said. "Gonna be a merry Christmas for me. Now..." the mugger pointed at an old dumpster. "Jump in."

"...What?"

"Get in the dumpster, jackass!"

Pete didn't dare opposing him, so he jumped in. Once he was inside, his tormentor froze the dumpster, so that he could't get out.

"I will be right back." Captain Cold said, placing his gun pack in the holster hidden inside his jacket.

...

"Come now, Joseph, it's going to be alright." A woman was hugging her little crying boy, trying to comfort him. He didn't yell, he just stood there while big tears came down from his eyes. "We are still going to have a nice Christmas, but we have to..."

"Hey, lady!" A man came to her with a red bag. "Is this yours?"

"What in... Yes, YES, it is mine!" The woman face brightened up, and her son stopped crying, drying his nose with his sheave. She opened the bag, and it was all in there, including her son's present for her brother. "Thank you! Thank you so much, and merry..."

As she looked up, the man was gone.

...

"Upsidaisi!" Captain Cold pulled Pete out of the dumpster, and threw him on the ground. Pete got up again and took a swing at Cold. Cold just grabbed the hand. And then he squished it.

"GOD, MY HAND!"

"Relax, it's hardly sprained."

Pete were in pain, and he smelled like trash. "Sick basterd..." he mumbled.

"That's rich, coming from a guy robbing people on Christmas Eve." Cold replied.

"Oh, up yours, man!" Pete said. "You don't do nothing but robbing banks!"

"Not this time of the year. I like to pretend for just one night, that the world is jolly and peaceful."

"Screw you, man!" Pete said, and then ran for it.

"Hey, I'm letting you keep your own wallet, ain't I?!" Cold yelled after Pete. "Merry Christmas, a$$hole!"

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#3  Edited By cbishop

@waezi2: Needs several small spelling/ wording edits, but cool story! Captain Cold with the heart of gold!...for a day, anyway. lol Added to my FF Long Box - Groups. :)

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Captain Cold is so freaking awesome... great short story. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes however that's not for your lack of trying!

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#6  Edited By cbishop

@waezi2: Actually, it wasn't so bad this time. The errors were minor. :)

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@cbishop: BTW, I'm writing a Cap Cold series in January. Wanna be tagged?

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That was awesome! Captain Cold would be an awesome Hero.

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@guardiandevil83: Thanks. And I'm actually writing a Cap Cold series. Interested?

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@waezi2: I'll check it out definitely. Hope Cap Boomerang shows up

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:)

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#17  Edited By ImpurestCheese

@waezi2: And a belated Christmas to you Captain

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#19  Edited By ImpurestCheese

@waezi2: Being Wiccan I get no Christmas. Do you have a favourite NW? Since I'm writing a massive story there is always room for more characters in the American Tyrant run I'm writing

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@impurestcheese: You mean a New Warrior? I think it has to be Night Thrasher. I simply love the idea about a superhero with a bulletproof skateboard.

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@waezi2: Hmm great the one who tried to kill Iron Man in the Fanon. A certain Hitman never finished his New Warriors Series but I might be able to wiggle something in.

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@waezi2: Oh don't worry I'm nothing if not inventive

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@waezi2: Try sending the callout from the actual story. Bumping an old story that has nothing to do with the new series is...well, strange.

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