DC re-imagined Zatanna

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#1  Edited By eippihrellik

" Hey lady your not trying to gyp me are ya"

"Now why would i want to do that"

"Come on lady i might be a kid but i aint no fool i know you gypsies go around tricking people with that fortune telling crap they said it on the news"

"well if you're so scared of being 'gypped' by an old gypsie like me then why did you come to me to tell you fortune"

"i dont know maybe im just feeling lucky today ya know"

"oh lucky are we now what would a cute young girl need with luck i bet the boys are just knocking down your door to get to you"

"is that supposed to be a compliment it just sound real creepy and why would i want a buch of dumb guys chasing me im not like a slut or nothin"

" oh now a pretty young girl like you should'nt be speaking in such a way back in my country having many suitors is a good thing"

"uggh enough about stupid boys aren't you supposed be tellin me if im gonna have a lucky year or somethin"

"Hah hah he no my dear girl im no fortune cookie, with my prcognition i can tell much more than if you'll be lucky this year i can tell you when you will have your first love, your first kiss and your first . . . time"

"stop it wouldja you old hag just tell me somethin that aint got nothin to do with boys"

"oh dear i didnt think you would get so angry over a simple joke and look at those cute little cheeks so red did i embarass you"

" whatever lady just tell me somethin"

" tell you what my dear"

"well if that fortune telling bull is real then whats my name"

"Zatanna dos Santos"

"Howd you"

"I told you my child precognition"

"So what are you a psychic or somethin"

" no my child but i guess you could call me a witch if you will"

"you sure look like one"

" such a sharp a and whitty tongue youd make a perfect witch"

"hugh me a witch i dont believe in that sort a stuff"

" then what can i do to make you believe"

" show me something else"

" arent we a little deamanding you havent even payed me yet"

"oh come on lady that doesnt count it was a test"

"and yet you still dont believe me"

"come on just one more something really cool then ill definetly believe you"

" now whos getting gypped"

"oh come on lady"

"fine fine but promise this, i see great potentiel in you girl if o show you a spell you will take this with you and study if page for page ill even show you this for free"

"a free show and all i gotta do is take a dusty old book whats the catch lady"

"no catch at all my child"

"fine ill take it now show me"

"as you wish my child"

"sehsa ot sehsa tsud ot tsud yb eht htron dniw ym ydob lliw tsur rettacs ot eht dniw hguorht emit dna ecaps i dner"

the gypsy and her tint dissapear leaving the girl with book in hand to stare off into the darkness of the night baffled and wondering what just happened and what lies ahed of her

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#2  Edited By TheCannon

Very cool.

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#3  Edited By GR2Blackout

@TheCannon said:

Very cool.

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#4  Edited By CrimsonCake

"sehsa ot sehsa tsud ot tsud yb eht htron dniw ym ydob lliw tsur rettacs ot eht dniw hguorht emit dna ecaps i dner"

translates to:

"rend i space and time through wind the to scatter rust will body my wind north the by dust to dust ashes to ashes"

If anyone is curious.

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#5  Edited By eippihrellik

@CrimsonCake: i was a little worried noone would get that

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#6  Edited By darth_brendroid

It's interesting, but seems very skeletal. Maybe work on adding dialogue tags (eg; 'Zatanna said') and a bit of description in future?